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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本周,英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。请你根据以下内容提示,以“My Life in 20 Years”为题写一篇英语短文,从生活、沟通、度假等方面描绘20年后你的生活。
Where will you live in 20 years?
How will you communicate with your family and friends?
What will people do to spend the holidays?
Write something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Life in 20 Years
My life will be very different in 20 years.
本周,英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。请你根据以下内容提示,以“My Life in 20 Years”为题写一篇英语短文,从生活、沟通、度假等方面描绘20年后你的生活。
Where will you live in 20 years?
How will you communicate with your family and friends?
What will people do to spend the holidays?
Write something more about your future life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Life in 20 Years
My life will be very different in 20 years.
答案
[参考范文]
My Life in 20 Years
My life will be very different in 20 years. I’ll live in a floating city on the sea, surrounded by smart buildings that can adjust to the weather. These homes use clean energy, helping to protect the environment.
Communication will become much easier. Instead of traditional phones, we will use smarter devices. I can have face-to-face chats with my family and friends, no matter how far away they are.
For holidays, space travel will be popular. People can visit other planets or even space hotels. I might take my family on a trip to the moon to enjoy the amazing view of earth from above.
Besides, robots will do most of the housework, leaving me more time to learn new skills, like painting or playing the guitar. I’m really looking forward to this wonderful future life.
[图1 第3题图]
My Life in 20 Years
My life will be very different in 20 years. I’ll live in a floating city on the sea, surrounded by smart buildings that can adjust to the weather. These homes use clean energy, helping to protect the environment.
Communication will become much easier. Instead of traditional phones, we will use smarter devices. I can have face-to-face chats with my family and friends, no matter how far away they are.
For holidays, space travel will be popular. People can visit other planets or even space hotels. I might take my family on a trip to the moon to enjoy the amazing view of earth from above.
Besides, robots will do most of the housework, leaving me more time to learn new skills, like painting or playing the guitar. I’m really looking forward to this wonderful future life.
[图1 第3题图]
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“My Life in 20 Years”为题，围绕“Tomorrow’s Life”主题，从居住地点、沟通方式、度假方式三个指定方面，补充其他未来生活内容，词数100左右且不得透露个人真实信息。解题思路：① 紧扣题目指定的三个核心要点展开写作；② 补充符合未来趋势的合理细节（如家务、兴趣发展）；③ 确保语言通顺、词数达标，无真实个人信息。
【解析】写作需遵循“指定要点+补充细节”的结构：1. 居住：描述未来居住场景（如海上漂浮智能城市），提及环保、智能特性；2. 沟通：说明更便捷的智能沟通方式，打破地域限制；3. 度假：介绍未来流行的度假形式（如太空旅行）；4. 补充：增加机器人做家务、发展兴趣等内容，最后表达对未来的期待，确保总词数符合要求。
【答案】My Life in 20 Years
My life will be very different in 20 years. I’ll live in a floating city on the sea, surrounded by smart buildings that can adjust to the weather. These homes use clean energy, helping to protect the environment.
Communication will become much easier. Instead of traditional phones, we will use smarter devices. I can have face-to-face chats with my family and friends, no matter how far away they are.
For holidays, space travel will be popular. People can visit other planets or even space hotels. I might take my family on a trip to the moon to enjoy the amazing view of earth from above.
Besides, robots will do most of the housework, leaving me more time to learn new skills, like painting or playing the guitar. I’m really looking forward to this wonderful future life.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达；未来生活话题写作
【点评】本文紧扣“Tomorrow’s Life”主题，覆盖题目要求的所有要点，补充的未来生活细节合理贴合趋势，语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，无真实个人信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作需遵循“指定要点+补充细节”的结构：1. 居住：描述未来居住场景（如海上漂浮智能城市），提及环保、智能特性；2. 沟通：说明更便捷的智能沟通方式，打破地域限制；3. 度假：介绍未来流行的度假形式（如太空旅行）；4. 补充：增加机器人做家务、发展兴趣等内容，最后表达对未来的期待，确保总词数符合要求。
【答案】My Life in 20 Years
My life will be very different in 20 years. I’ll live in a floating city on the sea, surrounded by smart buildings that can adjust to the weather. These homes use clean energy, helping to protect the environment.
Communication will become much easier. Instead of traditional phones, we will use smarter devices. I can have face-to-face chats with my family and friends, no matter how far away they are.
For holidays, space travel will be popular. People can visit other planets or even space hotels. I might take my family on a trip to the moon to enjoy the amazing view of earth from above.
Besides, robots will do most of the housework, leaving me more time to learn new skills, like painting or playing the guitar. I’m really looking forward to this wonderful future life.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达；未来生活话题写作
【点评】本文紧扣“Tomorrow’s Life”主题，覆盖题目要求的所有要点，补充的未来生活细节合理贴合趋势，语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，无真实个人信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
