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Ⅷ. 书面表达
请选择一种野生动物,并根据思维导图的提示,以校学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书,号召更多的同学加入保护野生动物的行列。
注意:1. 倡议书须包括思维导图中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2. 思维导图中的省略号部分需作适当发挥;3. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
The Students' Union
题中题132
请选择一种野生动物,并根据思维导图的提示,以校学生会的名义写一封英文倡议书,号召更多的同学加入保护野生动物的行列。
注意:1. 倡议书须包括思维导图中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2. 思维导图中的省略号部分需作适当发挥;3. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers usually live alone. They are very brave and strong. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat other animals for food, like rabbits, deer, zebras and so on.
However, tigers are in great danger now. They don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
The Students' Union
题中题132
答案
One possible version:
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers usually live alone. They are very brave and strong. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat other animals for food, like rabbits, deer, zebras and so on. However, tigers are in great danger now. They don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
The Students' Union
思路梳理 1. 主体部分的开头点明野生动物的重要性及当前面临的问题,呼应倡议书主题。2. 选定一种野生动物(如老虎),依次描述其外形(yellow fur with black stripes)、特质(brave、strong)、能力(run fast、swim、climb trees)、食物(other animals for food, like rabbits, deer),再说明其面临的危险(living areas smaller、not enough food),覆盖思维导图所有提示点。3. 结尾呼吁大家采取行动保护野生动物,文中已给结尾,注意词数控制在100左右,语句通顺,以一般现在时为主。
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers usually live alone. They are very brave and strong. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat other animals for food, like rabbits, deer, zebras and so on. However, tigers are in great danger now. They don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
The Students' Union
思路梳理 1. 主体部分的开头点明野生动物的重要性及当前面临的问题,呼应倡议书主题。2. 选定一种野生动物(如老虎),依次描述其外形(yellow fur with black stripes)、特质(brave、strong)、能力(run fast、swim、climb trees)、食物(other animals for food, like rabbits, deer),再说明其面临的危险(living areas smaller、not enough food),覆盖思维导图所有提示点。3. 结尾呼吁大家采取行动保护野生动物,文中已给结尾,注意词数控制在100左右,语句通顺,以一般现在时为主。
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以校学生会名义写一封保护野生动物的倡议书，需结合思维导图的五个核心要点（外形、特质、能力、食物、危险），适当发挥，词数100左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 开头点明野生动物的重要性及当前面临的问题，引出保护主题；2. 选定一种野生动物（如老虎），依次对应思维导图的五个方面展开描述，确保覆盖所有提示内容；3. 结尾呼应题目要求，呼吁大家行动起来保护野生动物，注意语句通顺、语气恰当，符合倡议书格式。
【解析】首先点明野生动物的重要性，选定老虎作为描写对象：描述其外形（黄色皮毛带黑色条纹）、特质（勇敢、强壮）、能力（跑得快、会游泳、能爬树）、食物（以兔子、鹿等其他动物为食），再说明其面临的危险（栖息地变小、食物不足），最后结合已给结尾，组织成连贯的倡议书，确保覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers usually live alone. They are very brave and strong. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat other animals for food, like rabbits, deer, zebras and so on. However, tigers are in great danger now. They don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
The Students' Union
【知识点】英语书面表达；野生动物相关词汇；倡议书写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有提示要点，选择老虎作为描写对象，内容具体充实，语句通顺连贯，符合倡议书的正式语气，词数控制得当，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先点明野生动物的重要性，选定老虎作为描写对象：描述其外形（黄色皮毛带黑色条纹）、特质（勇敢、强壮）、能力（跑得快、会游泳、能爬树）、食物（以兔子、鹿等其他动物为食），再说明其面临的危险（栖息地变小、食物不足），最后结合已给结尾，组织成连贯的倡议书，确保覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers usually live alone. They are very brave and strong. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat other animals for food, like rabbits, deer, zebras and so on. However, tigers are in great danger now. They don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
The Students' Union
【知识点】英语书面表达；野生动物相关词汇；倡议书写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖思维导图的所有提示要点，选择老虎作为描写对象，内容具体充实，语句通顺连贯，符合倡议书的正式语气，词数控制得当，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
