七、书面表达满分20分
仁者爱人、乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9月5日是国际慈善日,你校为了宣传慈善,打算在假期以"Willing Hands, Willing Hearts"为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华,打算参加此项活动,谈谈你的慈善认知和规划。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下:1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce? 2. What can you do for this charity? 3. Why do we need to help people in need? 参考慈善机构:Project Hope, ORBIS, Oxfam, UNICEF, WWF
注意事项:1. 演讲稿须包括所给提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2. 词数不少于90;3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts

One possible version:
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts
Kindness is catching. There're many charities around the
world. Among them, I want to talk about UNICEF. It helps
build a better world for everyone, especially children all over
the world. For example, it provides basic education for
children in poor areas.
provide sth for sb为某人提供某物;provide sb with sth
提供给某人某物
I'm ready to help the children in need. I would like to
send warm clothes and new books to them. I can also donate
my pocket money. What's more, I want to teach in mountain
areas when I grow up.
Little help can make a big difference. Helping others can
make us feel better about our life.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿。②时态:一般现在
时。③提示:文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点,可适当补
充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称和第三人称,尽
量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,以使行文连
贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自己想要介绍的慈善机构;第二步,具体
阐述自己能为这个慈善机构做的事情;第三步,讲述我们帮
助他人的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①all over the world全世界 ②be ready to do准备好做某事
[高分句型]
①What's more, I want to teach in mountain areas when I
grow up.when引导时间状语从句
②Helping others can make us feel better about our life.动
名词短语“Helping others”作主语

【分析】
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题是“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”，需围绕三个核心要点展开：1. 介绍选定的慈善机构（参考给出的UNICEF等）；2. 阐述自身能为该慈善机构做的具体事情；3. 说明帮助他人的原因。写作时需注意：体裁为演讲稿，时态以一般现在时为主，词数不少于90，不得提及真实人名、校名，可适当补充细节使内容连贯，多用连接词和高分句型提升表达效果。
【解析】
第一步，开头点题，选定慈善机构UNICEF，说明其服务对象（尤其是全球儿童）及核心作用（如为贫困地区儿童提供基础教育），运用“provide sth for sb”等短语丰富表达；第二步，阐述自身行动，包括捐赠衣物、书籍、零花钱，以及未来去山区支教的计划，用“be ready to do”“What's more”等连接词使内容连贯；第三步，结尾点明帮助他人的意义，即小行动能产生大影响，帮助他人也能提升自身幸福感，运用动名词短语作主语的高分句型增强表达效果。
【答案】
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts
Kindness is catching. There're many charities around the world. Among them, I want to talk about UNICEF. It helps build a better world for everyone, especially children all over the world. For example, it provides basic education for children in poor areas.
I'm ready to help the children in need. I would like to send warm clothes and new books to them. I can also donate my pocket money. What's more, I want to teach in mountain areas when I grow up.
Little help can make a big difference. Helping others can make us feel better about our life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（演讲稿）；慈善主题英语表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯；运用了“provide sth for sb”“be ready to do”等短语及动名词作主语、时间状语从句等高分句型，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿的正式且亲切的语气要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5