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假如你是王勇,下图为你们学校的平面图,请根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:garden 花园 lab building 实验楼 do experiments 做实验
Hello, I'm Wang Yong.
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:garden 花园 lab building 实验楼 do experiments 做实验
Hello, I'm Wang Yong.
This is a map of our school. Let me introduce it.
When you walk through the gate, you can see a beautiful garden in the middle. On the left of the garden is the office building, and behind it stand the classroom building and the library.
Across from the garden is the lab building, with the dining hall behind it. On the right of the lab building is our big playground.
We read books in the library, do experiments in the lab building and play sports on the playground.
My school is clean and nice.
I love my school very much.
答案
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Wang Yong. This is a map of our school. Let me introduce it.
When you walk through the gate, you can see a beautiful garden in the middle. On the left of the garden is the office building, and behind it stand the classroom building and the library. Across from the garden is the lab building, with the dining hall behind it. On the right of the lab building is our big playground.
We read books in the library, do experiments in the lab building and play sports on the playground. My school is clean and nice. I love my school very much.
Hello, I'm Wang Yong. This is a map of our school. Let me introduce it.
When you walk through the gate, you can see a beautiful garden in the middle. On the left of the garden is the office building, and behind it stand the classroom building and the library. Across from the garden is the lab building, with the dining hall behind it. On the right of the lab building is our big playground.
We read books in the library, do experiments in the lab building and play sports on the playground. My school is clean and nice. I love my school very much.
解析
【分析】本题要求根据学校平面图写英语短文，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头点明这是学校地图，引出介绍；2. 按方位顺序描述建筑布局，使用方位介词（如on the left、behind等）对应平面图位置；3. 补充各建筑的功能，结合参考词汇使内容贴合要求；4. 结尾表达对学校的喜爱，保证语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】写作时，先说明这是学校地图，接着从大门进入后描述中间的花园，再依次介绍花园周围的办公楼、教学楼、图书馆、实验楼、餐厅、操场的方位；然后说明各建筑的用途，最后表达对学校的喜爱，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, I'm Wang Yong. This is a map of our school. Let me introduce it.
When you walk through the gate, you can see a beautiful garden in the middle. On the left of the garden is the office building, and behind it stand the classroom building and the library. Across from the garden is the lab building, with the dining hall behind it. On the right of the lab building is our big playground.
We read books in the library, do experiments in the lab building and play sports on the playground. My school is clean and nice. I love my school very much.
【知识点】方位介词、英语应用文写作、学校场景表达
【点评】本题结合平面图考查场景介绍类英语写作，需掌握方位介词用法，能清晰描述布局并补充合理细节，是基础的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，先说明这是学校地图，接着从大门进入后描述中间的花园，再依次介绍花园周围的办公楼、教学楼、图书馆、实验楼、餐厅、操场的方位；然后说明各建筑的用途，最后表达对学校的喜爱，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, I'm Wang Yong. This is a map of our school. Let me introduce it.
When you walk through the gate, you can see a beautiful garden in the middle. On the left of the garden is the office building, and behind it stand the classroom building and the library. Across from the garden is the lab building, with the dining hall behind it. On the right of the lab building is our big playground.
We read books in the library, do experiments in the lab building and play sports on the playground. My school is clean and nice. I love my school very much.
【知识点】方位介词、英语应用文写作、学校场景表达
【点评】本题结合平面图考查场景介绍类英语写作，需掌握方位介词用法，能清晰描述布局并补充合理细节，是基础的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
