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话题分析
本单元以“介绍学校”为话题，主要介绍学校的基本信息或设施；介绍学生的生活或活动等。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
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10.
[高分句式]
1. 我的学校不大但是非常漂亮。
2. 我的学校有五栋楼。
3. 每周一我们在运动场上升国旗。
4. 图书馆在教师办公楼和科学楼之间。
5. 总而言之，我爱我的学校。
典例讲解
假如你是李华，你刚进入一所新学校学习，请写一篇英语短文向你的朋友介绍这所学校。要点提示：
1. 学校的建筑物，例如：教学楼、图书馆、餐厅、体育馆等；
2. 班级情况，学生数量，教室布局等；
3. ……
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear friend,
This is my new school.
[审题思路]
1. 审体裁：本文主要介绍学校的相关信息和情况，属于说明文范畴。
2. 审人称：本文的文章主体是学校的设施设备，人称应该以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态：阐述学校的客观情况，时态应该用一般现在时。
话题分析
本单元以“介绍学校”为话题，主要介绍学校的基本信息或设施；介绍学生的生活或活动等。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
a map of
一张……的地图2.
in front of
在……(外部的)前面3.
in our school
在我们学校4.
teaching building
教学楼5.
teachers' office building
教师办公楼6.
playground
运动场7.
dining hall
餐厅8.
between...and...
在……和……之间9.
across from
在……对面10.
next to
紧邻[高分句式]
1. 我的学校不大但是非常漂亮。
My school is not very big but very beautiful.
2. 我的学校有五栋楼。
There are five buildings in my school.
3. 每周一我们在运动场上升国旗。
We raise the national flag on the playground every Monday.
4. 图书馆在教师办公楼和科学楼之间。
The library is between the teachers' office building and the science building.
5. 总而言之，我爱我的学校。
All in all, I love my school.
典例讲解
假如你是李华，你刚进入一所新学校学习，请写一篇英语短文向你的朋友介绍这所学校。要点提示：
1. 学校的建筑物，例如：教学楼、图书馆、餐厅、体育馆等；
2. 班级情况，学生数量，教室布局等；
3. ……
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear friend,
This is my new school.
Let me tell you something about it. There are five buildings in our school: a bright teaching building, a tidy teachers' office building, a library with many books, a clean dining hall and a big playground. The teaching building has 36 classrooms, and my classroom is on the second floor with 45 students in it. Every Monday we raise our national flag on the playground. Our school is not very big but very beautiful. All in all, I love my school very much.
[审题思路]
1. 审体裁：本文主要介绍学校的相关信息和情况，属于说明文范畴。
2. 审人称：本文的文章主体是学校的设施设备，人称应该以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态：阐述学校的客观情况，时态应该用一般现在时。
答案
[高分词汇]
1. a map of
2. in front of
3. in our school
4. teaching building
5. teachers' office building
6. playground
7. dining hall
8. between...and...
9. across from
10. next to
[高分句式]
1. My school is not very big but very beautiful.
2. There are five buildings in my school.
3. We raise the national flag on the playground every Monday.
4. The library is between the teachers' office building and the science building.
5. All in all, I love my school.
[参考范文]
Dear friend,
This is my new school. Let me tell you something about it. There are five buildings in our school: a bright teaching building, a tidy teachers' office building, a library with many books, a clean dining hall and a big playground. The teaching building has 36 classrooms, and my classroom is on the second floor with 45 students in it. Every Monday we raise our national flag on the playground. Our school is not very big but very beautiful. All in all, I love my school very much.
1. a map of
2. in front of
3. in our school
4. teaching building
5. teachers' office building
6. playground
7. dining hall
8. between...and...
9. across from
10. next to
[高分句式]
1. My school is not very big but very beautiful.
2. There are five buildings in my school.
3. We raise the national flag on the playground every Monday.
4. The library is between the teachers' office building and the science building.
5. All in all, I love my school.
[参考范文]
Dear friend,
This is my new school. Let me tell you something about it. There are five buildings in our school: a bright teaching building, a tidy teachers' office building, a library with many books, a clean dining hall and a big playground. The teaching building has 36 classrooms, and my classroom is on the second floor with 45 students in it. Every Monday we raise our national flag on the playground. Our school is not very big but very beautiful. All in all, I love my school very much.
解析
【分析】首先明确本题是围绕“介绍学校”话题的英语写作练习，需先掌握相关高分词汇与句式，再结合题目要求的要点（学校建筑、班级情况等），以第三人称、一般现在时进行说明文写作，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 高分词汇填写：根据英语常用表达，对应填写各短语；2. 高分句式：结合中文意思转换为正确的英语句子；3. 参考范文：承接开头后，依次介绍学校建筑、班级情况，补充升国旗的活动，最后总结表达对学校的喜爱，运用积累的词汇句式，满足写作要求。
【答案】[高分词汇]
1. a map of
2. in front of
3. in our school
4. teaching building
5. teachers' office building
6. playground
7. dining hall
8. between...and...
9. across from
10. next to
[高分句式]
1. My school is not very big but very beautiful.
2. There are five buildings in my school.
3. We raise the national flag on the playground every Monday.
4. The library is between the teachers' office building and the science building.
5. All in all, I love my school.
[参考范文]
Dear friend,
This is my new school. Let me tell you something about it. There are five buildings in our school: a bright teaching building, a tidy teachers' office building, a library with many books, a clean dining hall and a big playground. The teaching building has 36 classrooms, and my classroom is on the second floor with 45 students in it. Every Monday we raise our national flag on the playground. Our school is not very big but very beautiful. All in all, I love my school very much.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语词汇积累、英语句式运用
【点评】本题围绕“介绍学校”的常见话题，通过积累高分词汇与句式，结合具体写作要点训练，帮助学生掌握学校相关话题的英语表达，符合初中英语写作提优的要求，注重实用性与内容连贯性。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 高分词汇填写：根据英语常用表达，对应填写各短语；2. 高分句式：结合中文意思转换为正确的英语句子；3. 参考范文：承接开头后，依次介绍学校建筑、班级情况，补充升国旗的活动，最后总结表达对学校的喜爱，运用积累的词汇句式，满足写作要求。
【答案】[高分词汇]
1. a map of
2. in front of
3. in our school
4. teaching building
5. teachers' office building
6. playground
7. dining hall
8. between...and...
9. across from
10. next to
[高分句式]
1. My school is not very big but very beautiful.
2. There are five buildings in my school.
3. We raise the national flag on the playground every Monday.
4. The library is between the teachers' office building and the science building.
5. All in all, I love my school.
[参考范文]
Dear friend,
This is my new school. Let me tell you something about it. There are five buildings in our school: a bright teaching building, a tidy teachers' office building, a library with many books, a clean dining hall and a big playground. The teaching building has 36 classrooms, and my classroom is on the second floor with 45 students in it. Every Monday we raise our national flag on the playground. Our school is not very big but very beautiful. All in all, I love my school very much.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语词汇积累、英语句式运用
【点评】本题围绕“介绍学校”的常见话题，通过积累高分词汇与句式，结合具体写作要点训练，帮助学生掌握学校相关话题的英语表达，符合初中英语写作提优的要求，注重实用性与内容连贯性。
【难度系数】0.5
