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假如你是济南学生李华，你的外国笔友Jack对中国文化很感兴趣，他想了解你家乡的博物馆。请你写一封回信，介绍山东博物馆。内容包括：
1. 它的特色展品；2. 你参观的感受；3. 它如何让历史“活起来”。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
提示词：亚丑钺 Smiling Ya Chou Yue；蛋壳黑陶杯 Eggshell Black Pottery Cup
Dear Jack，
Yours，
Li Hua
假如你是济南学生李华，你的外国笔友Jack对中国文化很感兴趣，他想了解你家乡的博物馆。请你写一封回信，介绍山东博物馆。内容包括：
1. 它的特色展品；2. 你参观的感受；3. 它如何让历史“活起来”。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
提示词：亚丑钺 Smiling Ya Chou Yue；蛋壳黑陶杯 Eggshell Black Pottery Cup
Dear Jack，
I'm so glad you're interested in Chinese culture! Let me tell you about the Shandong Museum in my hometown, Jinan.
As one of the top museums in Shandong, it houses a large number of precious cultural relics. Among them, the Smiling Ya Chou Yue and the Eggshell Black Pottery Cup are the most well-known treasures. They date back thousands of years and fully show the great wisdom of ancient people. Every time I visit the museum, I am always shocked and amazed by these historic works.
What's more, the museum uses modern digital shows and various hands-on activities to bring history to life. It offers us a great chance to feel the past closely instead of just reading from books.
I hope you can come and visit it someday.
As one of the top museums in Shandong, it houses a large number of precious cultural relics. Among them, the Smiling Ya Chou Yue and the Eggshell Black Pottery Cup are the most well-known treasures. They date back thousands of years and fully show the great wisdom of ancient people. Every time I visit the museum, I am always shocked and amazed by these historic works.
What's more, the museum uses modern digital shows and various hands-on activities to bring history to life. It offers us a great chance to feel the past closely instead of just reading from books.
I hope you can come and visit it someday.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
【实战演练】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm so glad you're interested in Chinese culture! Let me tell you about the Shandong Museum in my hometown, Jinan.
As one of the top museums in Shandong, it houses a large number of precious cultural relics. Among them, the Smiling Ya Chou Yue and the Eggshell Black Pottery Cup are the most well-known treasures. They date back thousands of years and fully show the great wisdom of ancient people. Every time I visit the museum, I am always shocked and amazed by these historic works.
What's more, the museum uses modern digital shows and various hands-on activities to bring history to life. It offers us a great chance to feel the past closely instead of just reading from books.
I hope you can come and visit it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm so glad you're interested in Chinese culture! Let me tell you about the Shandong Museum in my hometown, Jinan.
As one of the top museums in Shandong, it houses a large number of precious cultural relics. Among them, the Smiling Ya Chou Yue and the Eggshell Black Pottery Cup are the most well-known treasures. They date back thousands of years and fully show the great wisdom of ancient people. Every time I visit the museum, I am always shocked and amazed by these historic works.
What's more, the museum uses modern digital shows and various hands-on activities to bring history to life. It offers us a great chance to feel the past closely instead of just reading from books.
I hope you can come and visit it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以济南学生李华的身份，给对中国文化感兴趣的外国笔友Jack写一封回信介绍山东博物馆，需涵盖三个核心要点：特色展品（亚丑钺、蛋壳黑陶杯）、个人参观感受、博物馆让历史“活起来”的方式。解题思路：1. 开头承接Jack的兴趣，引出山东博物馆；2. 介绍特色展品，说明其历史价值；3. 分享参观时的震撼感受；4. 说明博物馆通过数字展示、动手活动等让历史贴近大众；5. 结尾邀请Jack来访，确保词数达标、行文连贯。
【解析】按照书信结构，先点明写信目的是介绍家乡的山东博物馆；接着列举提示词中的特色展品，体现古代人民的智慧；然后表达参观文物时的震撼感受；再说明博物馆利用现代手段（数字展示、动手活动）打破书本局限，让历史“活起来”；最后发出邀请，符合题目要求。
【答案】Dear Jack,
I'm so glad you're interested in Chinese culture! Let me tell you about the Shandong Museum in my hometown, Jinan.
As one of the top museums in Shandong, it houses a large number of precious cultural relics. Among them, the Smiling Ya Chou Yue and the Eggshell Black Pottery Cup are the most well-known treasures. They date back thousands of years and fully show the great wisdom of ancient people. Every time I visit the museum, I am always shocked and amazed by these historic works.
What's more, the museum uses modern digital shows and various hands-on activities to bring history to life. It offers us a great chance to feel the past closely instead of just reading from books.
I hope you can come and visit it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英文书信写作、应用文写作、中国文化英文表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖指定要点，语言流畅自然，符合书信格式，准确运用提示词，是优秀的应用文写作范例，适合学生参考学习。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照书信结构，先点明写信目的是介绍家乡的山东博物馆；接着列举提示词中的特色展品，体现古代人民的智慧；然后表达参观文物时的震撼感受；再说明博物馆利用现代手段（数字展示、动手活动）打破书本局限，让历史“活起来”；最后发出邀请，符合题目要求。
【答案】Dear Jack,
I'm so glad you're interested in Chinese culture! Let me tell you about the Shandong Museum in my hometown, Jinan.
As one of the top museums in Shandong, it houses a large number of precious cultural relics. Among them, the Smiling Ya Chou Yue and the Eggshell Black Pottery Cup are the most well-known treasures. They date back thousands of years and fully show the great wisdom of ancient people. Every time I visit the museum, I am always shocked and amazed by these historic works.
What's more, the museum uses modern digital shows and various hands-on activities to bring history to life. It offers us a great chance to feel the past closely instead of just reading from books.
I hope you can come and visit it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英文书信写作、应用文写作、中国文化英文表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖指定要点，语言流畅自然，符合书信格式，准确运用提示词，是优秀的应用文写作范例，适合学生参考学习。
【难度系数】0.5
