假如你是John,想向朋友介绍自己最喜欢的季节。请根据下面的提示,写一篇90词左右的短文。

要求:1. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言流畅,条理清晰,语法正确,书写规范。
【写作指导】
这是一篇说明文写作,根据所列举的几个要点问题介绍自己喜欢的季节,讲述喜欢的原因。根据提示可知:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时,描述喜欢的季节的时间、天气和可以做的事,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
【写作提纲】

【小试身手】
My favourite season
要求:1. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言流畅,条理清晰,语法正确,书写规范。
【写作指导】
这是一篇说明文写作,根据所列举的几个要点问题介绍自己喜欢的季节,讲述喜欢的原因。根据提示可知:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时,描述喜欢的季节的时间、天气和可以做的事,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. It is usually in September, October and November. It is cool in autumn. It's neither too hot nor too cold.
When it is autumn, all leaves turn yellow gradually. The scenery is amazing. When the leaves fall onto the ground, it feels so great that I love walking on them. I love to have a picnic with my friends and enjoy the sunshine and warmth. In autumn, I can eat different kinds of fruit, such as apples and pears. What's more, I like to travel in autumn, because I want to enjoy the harvest.
I like autumn. What about you?
答案
One possible version:
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. It is usually in September, October and November. It is cool in autumn. It's neither too hot nor too cold.
When it is autumn, all leaves turn yellow gradually. The scenery is amazing. When the leaves fall onto the ground, it feels so great that I love walking on them. I love to have a picnic with my friends and enjoy the sunshine and warmth. In autumn, I can eat different kinds of fruit, such as apples and pears. What's more, I like to travel in autumn, because I want to enjoy the harvest.
I like autumn. What about you?
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. It is usually in September, October and November. It is cool in autumn. It's neither too hot nor too cold.
When it is autumn, all leaves turn yellow gradually. The scenery is amazing. When the leaves fall onto the ground, it feels so great that I love walking on them. I love to have a picnic with my friends and enjoy the sunshine and warmth. In autumn, I can eat different kinds of fruit, such as apples and pears. What's more, I like to travel in autumn, because I want to enjoy the harvest.
I like autumn. What about you?
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题,要求以John的身份,用第一人称、一般现在时介绍自己最喜欢的季节,需涵盖季节的时间、天气、可参与的活动等要点,适当发挥,词数约90词。解题思路:首先明确最喜欢的季节(如秋天),开篇点题;接着说明该季节的时间、天气特点;再围绕喜欢的原因展开,列举具体活动(如踩落叶、野餐、吃水果、旅行);最后收尾询问对方,确保内容完整、语言流畅、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 确定写作要素:人称用第一人称I,时态用一般现在时;
2. 开篇点题:直接说明最喜欢的季节是秋天,点明其时间(September, October and November);
3. 描述天气:说明秋天凉爽,不冷不热;
4. 阐述喜欢的原因:从景色(落叶变黄,踩落叶的感受)、活动(和朋友野餐)、美食(各类水果)、旅行(享受收获)等方面展开;
5. 收尾:表达对秋天的喜爱,询问对方的想法,控制词数在90左右,确保语言流畅、语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. It is usually in September, October and November. It is cool in autumn. It's neither too hot nor too cold.
When it is autumn, all leaves turn yellow gradually. The scenery is amazing. When the leaves fall onto the ground, it feels so great that I love walking on them. I love to have a picnic with my friends and enjoy the sunshine and warmth. In autumn, I can eat different kinds of fruit, such as apples and pears. What's more, I like to travel in autumn, because I want to enjoy the harvest.
I like autumn. What about you?
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、季节话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求,要点齐全,结构清晰,语言流畅,时态运用准确,细节丰富,符合90词左右的要求,是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一道英语应用文写作题,要求以John的身份,用第一人称、一般现在时介绍自己最喜欢的季节,需涵盖季节的时间、天气、可参与的活动等要点,适当发挥,词数约90词。解题思路:首先明确最喜欢的季节(如秋天),开篇点题;接着说明该季节的时间、天气特点;再围绕喜欢的原因展开,列举具体活动(如踩落叶、野餐、吃水果、旅行);最后收尾询问对方,确保内容完整、语言流畅、语法正确。
【解析】
1. 确定写作要素:人称用第一人称I,时态用一般现在时;
2. 开篇点题:直接说明最喜欢的季节是秋天,点明其时间(September, October and November);
3. 描述天气:说明秋天凉爽,不冷不热;
4. 阐述喜欢的原因:从景色(落叶变黄,踩落叶的感受)、活动(和朋友野餐)、美食(各类水果)、旅行(享受收获)等方面展开;
5. 收尾:表达对秋天的喜爱,询问对方的想法,控制词数在90左右,确保语言流畅、语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. It is usually in September, October and November. It is cool in autumn. It's neither too hot nor too cold.
When it is autumn, all leaves turn yellow gradually. The scenery is amazing. When the leaves fall onto the ground, it feels so great that I love walking on them. I love to have a picnic with my friends and enjoy the sunshine and warmth. In autumn, I can eat different kinds of fruit, such as apples and pears. What's more, I like to travel in autumn, because I want to enjoy the harvest.
I like autumn. What about you?
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、季节话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣写作要求,要点齐全,结构清晰,语言流畅,时态运用准确,细节丰富,符合90词左右的要求,是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
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