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Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
主题分析
本单元的话题是“季节”，涉及一年中的四季变化，如节气、气候、物候等的特点。写作内容常常是某地季节的天气情况，描述天气的同时还可以与人们的日常活动结合起来，如晴天、雨天或雪天分别适合哪些活动等，也可以从四个季节的天气优缺点的情况以及每个季节的注意事项等来描述。
经典例题
你校要举行一场以“My favourite season”为题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇90词左右的征文稿，来谈谈你的看法。
1. Which is your favourite season?
2. What's special about this season? (there points)
3. What can people do in this season? (three points)
4. Why do you like this season? (two points)
主题分析
本单元的话题是“季节”，涉及一年中的四季变化，如节气、气候、物候等的特点。写作内容常常是某地季节的天气情况，描述天气的同时还可以与人们的日常活动结合起来，如晴天、雨天或雪天分别适合哪些活动等，也可以从四个季节的天气优缺点的情况以及每个季节的注意事项等来描述。
经典例题
你校要举行一场以“My favourite season”为题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇90词左右的征文稿，来谈谈你的看法。
1. Which is your favourite season?
2. What's special about this season? (there points)
3. What can people do in this season? (three points)
4. Why do you like this season? (two points)
答案
My favourite season
Among the four seasons, I love autumn most.
It has three special features: the weather is cool and sunny, the hills are covered with golden leaves, and it is a harvest season for all kinds of crops. People can go hiking with their family on weekends, fly kites in the open area on windy days, and pick fresh fruits on the farm.
I love autumn because my birthday is in autumn and I can enjoy different kinds of sweet fresh fruit at this time of year.
Among the four seasons, I love autumn most.
It has three special features: the weather is cool and sunny, the hills are covered with golden leaves, and it is a harvest season for all kinds of crops. People can go hiking with their family on weekends, fly kites in the open area on windy days, and pick fresh fruits on the farm.
I love autumn because my birthday is in autumn and I can enjoy different kinds of sweet fresh fruit at this time of year.
解析
【分析】首先审题明确写作主题为“My favourite season”，需涵盖四个核心要求：①点明最喜欢的季节；②说明该季节的三个特点；③列举该季节的三个活动；④阐述喜欢该季节的两个原因。解题时先选定熟悉的季节（如秋天），再对应每个要点组织简洁通顺的英语表达，控制词数在90词左右，确保结构清晰、要点完整。
【解析】先开篇点明最喜欢的季节是秋天，接着依次说明秋天的三个特点（天气凉爽晴朗、山坡覆金叶、是丰收季），再列举三个活动（和家人徒步、放风筝、摘水果），最后说明喜欢的两个原因（生日在秋天、能吃新鲜水果），语言符合英语表达习惯，要点齐全且词数达标。
【答案】My favourite season
Among the four seasons, I love autumn most.
It has three special features: the weather is cool and sunny, the hills are covered with golden leaves, and it is a harvest season for all kinds of crops. People can go hiking with their family on weekends, fly kites in the open area on windy days, and pick fresh fruits on the farm.
I love autumn because my birthday is in autumn and I can enjoy different kinds of sweet fresh fruit at this time of year.
【知识点】英语单元主题写作、季节话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题围绕“季节”单元话题设置写作任务，要求涵盖指定要点，考查学生的语言组织与话题表达能力，是典型的英语单元写作练习，结构清晰，要点明确，适合巩固单元知识。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先开篇点明最喜欢的季节是秋天，接着依次说明秋天的三个特点（天气凉爽晴朗、山坡覆金叶、是丰收季），再列举三个活动（和家人徒步、放风筝、摘水果），最后说明喜欢的两个原因（生日在秋天、能吃新鲜水果），语言符合英语表达习惯，要点齐全且词数达标。
【答案】My favourite season
Among the four seasons, I love autumn most.
It has three special features: the weather is cool and sunny, the hills are covered with golden leaves, and it is a harvest season for all kinds of crops. People can go hiking with their family on weekends, fly kites in the open area on windy days, and pick fresh fruits on the farm.
I love autumn because my birthday is in autumn and I can enjoy different kinds of sweet fresh fruit at this time of year.
【知识点】英语单元主题写作、季节话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题围绕“季节”单元话题设置写作任务，要求涵盖指定要点，考查学生的语言组织与话题表达能力，是典型的英语单元写作练习，结构清晰，要点明确，适合巩固单元知识。
【难度系数】0.5
