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七、书面表达
某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明家，他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及
你从他/她身上学到了什么。词数100左右。
提示词:scientist，invent，great，teach。
提示问题：
1. Who is your favourite inventor?
2. Why is he/she your favourite inventor?
3. What did you learn from him/her?
There are many famous inventors.
某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明家，他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及
你从他/她身上学到了什么。词数100左右。
提示词:scientist，invent，great，teach。
提示问题：
1. Who is your favourite inventor?
2. Why is he/she your favourite inventor?
3. What did you learn from him/her?
There are many famous inventors.
答案
One possible version:
There are many famous inventors. My favourite one is Thomas Edison. He was a great American inventor who invented over 1,000 things.
He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. His famous saying “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration” has taught me a lot. It shows that hard work is the key to success, not just talent.
From him, I learnt that we should never give up easily when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study and life. He is truly a great person to learn from.
There are many famous inventors. My favourite one is Thomas Edison. He was a great American inventor who invented over 1,000 things.
He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. His famous saying “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration” has taught me a lot. It shows that hard work is the key to success, not just talent.
From him, I learnt that we should never give up easily when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study and life. He is truly a great person to learn from.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题投稿，需完成三个核心任务：①明确最喜欢的发明家；②说明喜爱该发明家的原因；③阐述从其身上学到的品质。解题思路：1. 选取大众熟知、事迹典型的发明家（如爱迪生），便于组织内容；2. 围绕提示问题搭建框架：开头点明发明家身份，中间从发明成就、精神品质两方面说明喜爱原因，结尾结合自身谈感悟；3. 控制词数在100左右，语言简洁流畅，符合征文的正式语气，确保覆盖所有要点。
【解析】
短文采用“引入-原因-感悟”的结构：首先点明最喜欢的发明家是托马斯·爱迪生；接着从两方面说明喜爱原因：一是他有超过1000项发明，二是他的名言体现了努力是成功的关键；最后阐述学到的道理：面对困难不轻易放弃，这种精神鼓励自己在学习和生活中坚持尝试。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many famous inventors. My favourite one is Thomas Edison. He was a great American inventor who invented over 1,000 things.
He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. His famous saying “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration” has taught me a lot. It shows that hard work is the key to success, not just talent.
From him, I learnt that we should never give up easily when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study and life. He is truly a great person to learn from.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、应用文写作、要点整合
【点评】
范文紧扣“致敬伟大发明家”的主题，全面覆盖所有提示问题，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，运用具体事例和名言增强说服力，语言符合初中英语水平，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题投稿，需完成三个核心任务：①明确最喜欢的发明家；②说明喜爱该发明家的原因；③阐述从其身上学到的品质。解题思路：1. 选取大众熟知、事迹典型的发明家（如爱迪生），便于组织内容；2. 围绕提示问题搭建框架：开头点明发明家身份，中间从发明成就、精神品质两方面说明喜爱原因，结尾结合自身谈感悟；3. 控制词数在100左右，语言简洁流畅，符合征文的正式语气，确保覆盖所有要点。
【解析】
短文采用“引入-原因-感悟”的结构：首先点明最喜欢的发明家是托马斯·爱迪生；接着从两方面说明喜爱原因：一是他有超过1000项发明，二是他的名言体现了努力是成功的关键；最后阐述学到的道理：面对困难不轻易放弃，这种精神鼓励自己在学习和生活中坚持尝试。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many famous inventors. My favourite one is Thomas Edison. He was a great American inventor who invented over 1,000 things.
He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. His famous saying “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration” has taught me a lot. It shows that hard work is the key to success, not just talent.
From him, I learnt that we should never give up easily when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study and life. He is truly a great person to learn from.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、应用文写作、要点整合
【点评】
范文紧扣“致敬伟大发明家”的主题，全面覆盖所有提示问题，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，运用具体事例和名言增强说服力，语言符合初中英语水平，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
