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Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Mike. I'm a student from Class 1, Grade 9 of Sunshine Middle School. I'm writing to apply for the Painting Club, which I have been looking forward to joining for a long time.
I have a deep passion for painting, especially traditional Chinese brush painting. In my spare time, I practise drawing flowers and landscapes, trying to capture their beauty on paper. I also enjoy visiting art galleries to learn from great artists.
The reason why I want to join the club is that I hope to improve my skills and share my love for art with others who have the same interest. I believe being a member of the club will help me grow as a young artist.
I would be grateful if you could give me this chance. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Mike
One possible version:
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Mike. I'm a student from Class 1, Grade 9 of Sunshine Middle School. I'm writing to apply for the Painting Club, which I have been looking forward to joining for a long time.
I have a deep passion for painting, especially traditional Chinese brush painting. In my spare time, I practise drawing flowers and landscapes, trying to capture their beauty on paper. I also enjoy visiting art galleries to learn from great artists.
The reason why I want to join the club is that I hope to improve my skills and share my love for art with others who have the same interest. I believe being a member of the club will help me grow as a young artist.
I would be grateful if you could give me this chance. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Mike
解析
【分析】本题为单元主题写作任务，要求写一封申请加入绘画俱乐部的英文申请信。解题思路需遵循英文申请信的规范结构：首先明确写作目的，依次介绍个人身份、自身绘画相关经历与优势、申请加入俱乐部的原因，最后礼貌请求机会并致谢，确保内容贴合主题，语言符合书信的正式礼貌语气。
【解析】按照英文书信格式写作：开头使用正式称呼，正文分三段：第一段介绍姓名、班级、学校，说明申请绘画俱乐部的意图；第二段阐述对绘画的热爱（尤其传统中国画）、课余练习绘画、参观美术馆学习的经历；第三段说明申请原因（提升绘画技能、与同好交流）；结尾礼貌请求机会并致谢，落款规范。
【答案】Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Mike. I'm a student from Class 1, Grade 9 of Sunshine Middle School. I'm writing to apply for the Painting Club, which I have been looking forward to joining for a long time.
I have a deep passion for painting, especially traditional Chinese brush painting. In my spare time, I practise drawing flowers and landscapes, trying to capture their beauty on paper. I also enjoy visiting art galleries to learn from great artists.
The reason why I want to join the club is that I hope to improve my skills and share my love for art with others who have the same interest. I believe being a member of the club will help me grow as a young artist.
I would be grateful if you could give me this chance. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Mike
【知识点】英语书信写作、单元主题写作
【点评】本题为单元主题写作的参考范文，符合申请信的正式格式，逻辑清晰，内容具体，既体现了申请者的绘画热情，也明确了合理的申请诉求，是符合要求的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照英文书信格式写作：开头使用正式称呼，正文分三段：第一段介绍姓名、班级、学校，说明申请绘画俱乐部的意图；第二段阐述对绘画的热爱（尤其传统中国画）、课余练习绘画、参观美术馆学习的经历；第三段说明申请原因（提升绘画技能、与同好交流）；结尾礼貌请求机会并致谢，落款规范。
【答案】Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Mike. I'm a student from Class 1, Grade 9 of Sunshine Middle School. I'm writing to apply for the Painting Club, which I have been looking forward to joining for a long time.
I have a deep passion for painting, especially traditional Chinese brush painting. In my spare time, I practise drawing flowers and landscapes, trying to capture their beauty on paper. I also enjoy visiting art galleries to learn from great artists.
The reason why I want to join the club is that I hope to improve my skills and share my love for art with others who have the same interest. I believe being a member of the club will help me grow as a young artist.
I would be grateful if you could give me this chance. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Mike
【知识点】英语书信写作、单元主题写作
【点评】本题为单元主题写作的参考范文，符合申请信的正式格式，逻辑清晰，内容具体，既体现了申请者的绘画热情，也明确了合理的申请诉求，是符合要求的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
