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六、书面表达(20分)(真题·舟山定海)
61. 假设你是李华,你校英文报正在开展“Best Moments(精彩瞬间)”摄影照片征集活动,你想将自己与家人在海山公园游玩的照片投稿。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇有关投稿照片的英文解说文案。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名;(2)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(3)词数:60—80。
61. 假设你是李华,你校英文报正在开展“Best Moments(精彩瞬间)”摄影照片征集活动,你想将自己与家人在海山公园游玩的照片投稿。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇有关投稿照片的英文解说文案。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名;(2)要点齐全,可适当发挥;(3)词数:60—80。
答案
One possible version:
It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. They are wearing cool clothes. My sister is taking a dog with her. She and I are jogging together. What are my parents doing? My father is playing the guitar and my mother is listening carefully. Everyone is having a good time. What a wonderful trip!
(78 words)
It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. They are wearing cool clothes. My sister is taking a dog with her. She and I are jogging together. What are my parents doing? My father is playing the guitar and my mother is listening carefully. Everyone is having a good time. What a wonderful trip!
(78 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求为英文报“Best Moments”摄影征集撰写解说文案。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述过去发生的游玩事件，采用一般过去时；2. 开篇交代时间、天气、出行方式及地点，对应照片背景；3. 核心部分聚焦照片内容，描述家人的具体活动，体现游玩的快乐氛围；4. 结尾抒发感受，呼应“精彩瞬间”的主题；5. 注意词数60-80，不得出现真实人名校名，适当发挥。
【解析】
按照要求，先以一般过去时开篇，点明时间（周日）、天气（炎热晴朗），说明出行方式（乘车半小时抵达公园）；接着聚焦照片细节，描述家人的穿着及各自活动：姐姐带狗、“我”与姐姐慢跑，爸爸弹吉他、妈妈聆听；最后总结大家玩得开心，呼应主题，确保词数符合要求，要点齐全。
【答案】
One possible version: It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. They are wearing cool clothes. My sister is taking a dog with her. She and I are jogging together. What are my parents doing? My father is playing the guitar and my mother is listening carefully. Everyone is having a good time. What a wonderful trip! (78 words)
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
范文紧扣“Best Moments”主题，围绕与家人在公园的游玩场景展开，时态准确，语言简洁流畅，要点齐全，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求为英文报“Best Moments”摄影征集撰写解说文案。解题思路：1. 确定时态：描述过去发生的游玩事件，采用一般过去时；2. 开篇交代时间、天气、出行方式及地点，对应照片背景；3. 核心部分聚焦照片内容，描述家人的具体活动，体现游玩的快乐氛围；4. 结尾抒发感受，呼应“精彩瞬间”的主题；5. 注意词数60-80，不得出现真实人名校名，适当发挥。
【解析】
按照要求，先以一般过去时开篇，点明时间（周日）、天气（炎热晴朗），说明出行方式（乘车半小时抵达公园）；接着聚焦照片细节，描述家人的穿着及各自活动：姐姐带狗、“我”与姐姐慢跑，爸爸弹吉他、妈妈聆听；最后总结大家玩得开心，呼应主题，确保词数符合要求，要点齐全。
【答案】
One possible version: It was Sunday yesterday. The weather was very hot and sunny. My family went to the park. It took us half an hour to get there by car. Look at my family. They are wearing cool clothes. My sister is taking a dog with her. She and I are jogging together. What are my parents doing? My father is playing the guitar and my mother is listening carefully. Everyone is having a good time. What a wonderful trip! (78 words)
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
范文紧扣“Best Moments”主题，围绕与家人在公园的游玩场景展开，时态准确，语言简洁流畅，要点齐全，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.7
