登录
51.学校英语报正在开展以“My Favourite Form of Art”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式以及你喜欢它的原因。
写作提示:(1)What is your favourite form of art? (e.g. painting, music, literature...)
(2)Why do you like it? (3)Can you give an example of a famous artist or a famous work?
写作要求:(1)文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;(3) 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Form of Art
There are different forms of art, such as painting, music and literature.
写作提示:(1)What is your favourite form of art? (e.g. painting, music, literature...)
(2)Why do you like it? (3)Can you give an example of a famous artist or a famous work?
写作要求:(1)文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;(3) 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Form of Art
There are different forms of art, such as painting, music and literature.
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Form of Art
There are different forms of art, such as painting, music and literature.My favourite form of art is painting.
I love painting because colours can show many feelings.When I look at a beautiful painting, I feel relaxed and happy.
A painting can tell a story.It is a wonderful way to show the beauty of the world.
There are many great painters.For example, Leonardo da Vinci is a very famous painter from Italy.He painted the Mona Lisa.Many people around the world know this painting.
I hope I can be a good painter in the future too.
My Favourite Form of Art
There are different forms of art, such as painting, music and literature.My favourite form of art is painting.
I love painting because colours can show many feelings.When I look at a beautiful painting, I feel relaxed and happy.
A painting can tell a story.It is a wonderful way to show the beauty of the world.
There are many great painters.For example, Leonardo da Vinci is a very famous painter from Italy.He painted the Mona Lisa.Many people around the world know this painting.
I hope I can be a good painter in the future too.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作要求：需围绕“我最喜欢的艺术形式”展开，覆盖“最喜欢的艺术形式、喜欢的原因、著名艺术家/作品”三个要点，词数80左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息。思考时可选择易上手的艺术形式（如绘画），原因结合自身感受（如色彩带来放松感），选取经典熟知的艺术家与作品（如达芬奇的《蒙娜丽莎》），最后组织语言确保要点齐全、符合要求。
【解析】按照写作步骤：1. 点明最喜欢的艺术形式为绘画；2. 阐述原因：色彩能传递情感，看画可让人放松，是展现世界美好的方式；3. 举例著名艺术家达芬奇及其作品《蒙娜丽莎》；4. 表达个人愿望，控制词数，避免真实信息，完成符合要求的短文。
【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Form of Art
There are different forms of art, such as painting, music and literature.My favourite form of art is painting.
I love painting because colours can show many feelings.When I look at a beautiful painting, I feel relaxed and happy.
A painting can tell a story.It is a wonderful way to show the beauty of the world.
There are many great painters.For example, Leonardo da Vinci is a very famous painter from Italy.He painted the Mona Lisa.Many people around the world know this painting.
I hope I can be a good painter in the future too.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达（艺术主题）
【点评】本题为英语话题征文写作，考查学生围绕指定话题整合信息、完成书面表达的能力，要求覆盖所有写作提示要点，语言通顺，符合词数及格式要求，贴近学生生活实际，易于学生完成。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照写作步骤：1. 点明最喜欢的艺术形式为绘画；2. 阐述原因：色彩能传递情感，看画可让人放松，是展现世界美好的方式；3. 举例著名艺术家达芬奇及其作品《蒙娜丽莎》；4. 表达个人愿望，控制词数，避免真实信息，完成符合要求的短文。
【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Form of Art
There are different forms of art, such as painting, music and literature.My favourite form of art is painting.
I love painting because colours can show many feelings.When I look at a beautiful painting, I feel relaxed and happy.
A painting can tell a story.It is a wonderful way to show the beauty of the world.
There are many great painters.For example, Leonardo da Vinci is a very famous painter from Italy.He painted the Mona Lisa.Many people around the world know this painting.
I hope I can be a good painter in the future too.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题表达（艺术主题）
【点评】本题为英语话题征文写作，考查学生围绕指定话题整合信息、完成书面表达的能力，要求覆盖所有写作提示要点，语言通顺，符合词数及格式要求，贴近学生生活实际，易于学生完成。
【难度系数】0.7
