主题写作专项 练写作 答案D4
主题词网
优选词汇
背景信息 介绍一位名人
个人特质
成就贡献
• artist
• editor
• writer
• engineer
• be born in
• graduate from
• doctor
• policeman
• intelligent
• be talented in
• artistic
• funny
• hard-working
• humorous
• be good at
• have a gift for
• make a big difference
• play an important role in
• achieve huge success
• be proud of
• win high praise
• win respect
写作实例
审主题 审词数
请根据提示以“Madame Curie”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
内容：
1.居里夫人(1867—1934)是世界著名的科学家；
2.她从小就酷爱读书，16岁中学毕业，24岁赴法国巴黎(Paris)的一所大学学习。在学校时，她学习刻苦努力；
3.她一生致力于科学研究，于1903年、1911年分别获得诺贝尔物理学奖和化学奖(the Nobel Prize in Physics/Chemistry)；
4.她作为一名伟大的女性将永远被人们铭记。
Madame Curie




写作支架
开头 介绍背景信息
中间 介绍事迹
结尾 表达对人物的评价
Madame Curie was a well-known scientist all over the world. She was 1867 and passed away in 1934.
She loved reading when . She at the age of .
When she was , she left for Paris to study at a university.（高分句式1）
While at school, she . Madame Curie devoted her entire life to studying science.（高分句式2）She in 1911.
I think it was not easy for a woman to achieve such success.（高分句式3）
Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.

8 智慧智囊
玛丽·居里1867年出生于波兰华沙，世称“居里夫人”，是放射化学和放射物理学的创始人和奠基人，是放射性研究的先驱者，被誉为“镭的母亲”，一生两次获得诺贝尔奖，是女性科学家中唯一两次得此殊荣者。
优秀范文
Madame Curie
Madame Curie was a well-known scientist all over the world①. She was born in 1867 and passed away in 1934. She loved reading books when she was a young child. She finished middle school at the age of 16②. When she was 24 years old③, she left for Paris to study at a university. While at school, she lived a simple life② and studied very hard. Madame Curie devoted her entire life to② studying science. She won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and in Chemistry in 1911.
I think it was not easy for a woman to achieve such success③. Madame Curie will always be remembered as② a great woman.
亮点评析
①开门见山，引出介绍的人物，知名科学家——居里夫人。
②使用不同的短语生动形象地描绘了居里夫人的人生轨迹，体现出她的聪慧、刻苦和对科学的热爱。
③使用时间状语从句、宾语从句凸显写作功底，提升文章档次。

【解析】：这是一篇人物介绍类的命题英语写作，符合八年级上册介绍名人的写作要求：1. 审题：主题为介绍居里夫人，词数要求80词左右，使用第三人称，描述过往经历的主体时态为一般过去时；2. 行文逻辑：开篇直接点明居里夫人的身份和生卒时间，清晰引入人物；中间按时间线依次介绍她的求学经历、刻苦的学习状态以及毕生投身科研、两次获得诺贝尔奖的成就，覆盖全部题干给出的内容要点，可使用时间状语从句、固定搭配提升表达丰富度；结尾表达对人物的评价，点出她作为伟大女性会被永远铭记的主旨。
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. born in
2. she was a young child
3. finished middle school
4. 16
5. 24 years old
6. studied very hard（也可补充为lived a simple life and studied very hard）
7. won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry
完整参考范文：
# Madame Curie
Madame Curie was a well-known scientist all over the world. She was born in 1867 and passed away in 1934. She loved reading books when she was a young child. She finished middle school at the age of 16. When she was 24 years old, she left for Paris to study at a university. While at school, she studied very hard. Madame Curie devoted her entire life to studying science. She won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911.
I think it was not easy for a woman to achieve such success. Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.

【分析】
这是一篇人物介绍类英语写作，解题思路如下：1. 审题：明确主题为介绍居里夫人，时态以一般过去时为主，使用第三人称，词数要求80词左右；2. 按写作支架结构填空：开头部分填写出生年份的固定表达，中间按时间线依次填写对应事迹，确保覆盖所有题干要点；3. 结尾保留评价内容，运用高分句式提升文章档次，保证行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：描述居里夫人的过往经历，统一使用一般过去时；2. 填充写作支架：① 开头“她出生于1867年”对应固定搭配“be born in”，填“born in”；② “她从小酷爱读书”填“she was a young child”；③ “16岁中学毕业”填“finished middle school”和“16”；④ “24岁赴巴黎求学”填“24 years old”；⑤ “在校刻苦学习”填“studied very hard”；⑥ “1911年的成就”结合题干要求，居里夫人1903年获诺贝尔物理奖、1911年获诺贝尔化学奖，填“won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry”；3. 串联内容后检查要点是否齐全、语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
写作支架填空答案：1. born in；2. she was a young child；3. finished middle school；4. 16；5. 24 years old；6. studied very hard；7. won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry。完整参考范文：Madame Curie was a well-known scientist all over the world. She was born in 1867 and passed away in 1934. She loved reading books when she was a young child. She finished middle school at the age of 16. When she was 24 years old, she left for Paris to study at a university. While at school, she studied very hard. Madame Curie devoted her entire life to studying science. She won the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911. I think it was not easy for a woman to achieve such success. Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.
【知识点】
英语人物写作、一般过去时、固定搭配运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，按“背景介绍-事迹阐述-人物评价”展开，覆盖所有题干要点，运用时间状语从句、固定搭配等提升表达，符合八年级英语写作要求，是优秀的人物介绍范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】
0.6