写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D4
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇关于我国著名女科学家屠呦呦的短文并谈谈你的感想。
基本情况
1930年12月30日生于宁波,1955年毕业于北京大学;
从小刻苦学习,对药学感兴趣,广泛阅读相关书籍。
主要成就
经历190次失败后,她在中草药中发现了,它能有效对抗疟疾——一种很严重的疾病;
2015年她获得了诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。
我的感想
……(补充至少两点)
参考词汇:草药 herb;青蒿素 qinghaosu;疟疾 malaria;有效地 effectively;对抗 fight;诺贝尔生理学或医学奖 the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
要求:词数为80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China.

主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. She was born in Ningbo on December 30, 1930. She graduated from Peking University in 1955. She studied hard from childhood, was interested in medicine and read many related books. She is famous for discovering qinghaosu. It can effectively fight malaria—a very serious disease. After 190 failed attempts, she finally found it in Chinese herbs. The medicine has saved a lot of lives. In 2015, she became the first person in China to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is good for human health. What's more, I think we should learn from her spirit of never giving up.
＞ 进阶版范文
Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. She was born in Ningbo on December 30, 1930. She graduated from Peking University in 1955. She studied hard from childhood. She was so interested in medicine that she read many related books. She is best-known for discovering qinghaosu, which is a medicine that can effectively treat malaria—a serious disease. After 190 failed attempts, she succeeded in finding the key ingredient from Chinese herbs. This discovery has saved millions of lives. In 2015, she became the first person in China to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
I believe Tu Youyou is one of the greatest scientists in China. Her discovery has made a great contribution to global health. We can learn a lot from not only her hard work but also her determination.

【分析】本题为人物介绍类英语写作，需围绕屠呦呦的基本情况、主要成就展开，并补充至少两点感想。首先梳理题目给定信息：基本情况含出生时间地点、毕业院校、学习态度与兴趣；主要成就含发现青蒿素的过程、青蒿素的作用、获奖情况。写作时需注意时态（过去经历用一般过去时，成就影响用一般现在时），衔接开头，控制词数，准确运用参考词汇，最后结合自身谈感想，确保内容完整、语句通顺。
【解析】1. 承接开头，介绍屠呦呦基本情况：She was born in Ningbo on December 30, 1930. She graduated from Peking University in 1955. She studied hard from childhood, was interested in medicine and read many related books. 2. 阐述主要成就：She is famous for discovering qinghaosu. It can effectively fight malaria—a very serious disease. After 190 failed attempts, she finally found it in Chinese herbs. In 2015, she became the first person in China to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. 3. 补充感想：I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is good for human health. What's more, we should learn from her spirit of never giving up.
【答案】Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. She was born in Ningbo on December 30, 1930. She graduated from Peking University in 1955. She studied hard from childhood, was interested in medicine and read many related books. She is famous for discovering qinghaosu. It can effectively fight malaria—a very serious disease. After 190 failed attempts, she finally found it in Chinese herbs. The medicine has saved a lot of lives. In 2015, she became the first person in China to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is good for human health. What's more, I think we should learn from her spirit of never giving up.
【知识点】英语人物写作、时态运用、感想表达
【点评】本题以屠呦呦的事迹为素材，考查学生人物介绍类英语写作能力，既要求准确传递给定信息，又需结合实际抒发感想，兼顾语言基础与情感表达，符合英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6