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湿地为众多生物提供了栖息之所，对维护生态平衡起着不可替代的作用。然而，湿地正面临诸多威胁。假如你是王林，请根据提示用英语写一封倡议信，呼吁大家行动起来保护湿地。
提示：1. What's the importance of wetlands? 2. What problems are wetlands facing? 3. What can we do to help?
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。2. 词数不少于80，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体：应用文。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主。3. 人称：以第一、第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask for your help in protecting wetlands.
Yours,
Wang Lin
139
实战练笔，夯实写作功底
湿地为众多生物提供了栖息之所，对维护生态平衡起着不可替代的作用。然而，湿地正面临诸多威胁。假如你是王林，请根据提示用英语写一封倡议信，呼吁大家行动起来保护湿地。
提示：1. What's the importance of wetlands? 2. What problems are wetlands facing? 3. What can we do to help?
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。2. 词数不少于80，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体：应用文。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主。3. 人称：以第一、第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask for your help in protecting wetlands.
Wetlands, known as the "kidneys of the earth", are important for ecological balance. They are home to wildlife. Besides, wetlands can also help prevent floods.
However, wetlands are at risk. Some people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. As a result, there will be less space for wildlife.
Birds will not have enough food if fishermen keep fishing there.
It's high time we acted. We can donate money to or volunteer for wetland protection groups. Let's push for stricter laws against illegal wetland development and teach others about the importance of wetlands.
Let's work together to protect wetlands. Every effort counts!
Yours,
Wang Lin
139
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask for your help in protecting wetlands.
Wetlands, known as the "kidneys of the earth", are important for ecological balance. They are home to wildlife. Besides, wetlands can also help prevent floods.
However, wetlands are at risk. Some people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. As a result, there will be less space for wildlife. Birds will not have enough food if fishermen keep fishing there.
It's high time we acted. We can donate money to or volunteer for wetland protection groups. Let's push for stricter laws against illegal wetland development and teach others about the importance of wetlands.
Let's work together to protect wetlands. Every effort counts!
Yours,
Wang Lin
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask for your help in protecting wetlands.
Wetlands, known as the "kidneys of the earth", are important for ecological balance. They are home to wildlife. Besides, wetlands can also help prevent floods.
However, wetlands are at risk. Some people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. As a result, there will be less space for wildlife. Birds will not have enough food if fishermen keep fishing there.
It's high time we acted. We can donate money to or volunteer for wetland protection groups. Let's push for stricter laws against illegal wetland development and teach others about the importance of wetlands.
Let's work together to protect wetlands. Every effort counts!
Yours,
Wang Lin
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作目标是写一封呼吁保护湿地的英文倡议信，按照题目给出的思维导图和三个核心要求分步构思：第一步，先完成湿地重要性的介绍：先给湿地一个广为人知的定位比如“地球之肾”，再说明它是野生动植物的栖息地，额外补充它在防洪、维持生态平衡上的作用，把第一个要点讲清楚；第二步，转向湿地面临的危机：先点明湿地正处于危险中，再列举人类的不合理行为，比如为了扩建农田、建筑挤占湿地面积，长期过度捕捞破坏湿地食物链，说明这些行为会导致野生动物生存空间缩减、食物不足的后果，覆盖第二个写作要求；第三步，提出行动方案：用It's high time we acted引出倡议，列举普通人可以落地的具体行动，比如给湿地保护组织捐款、做志愿者，推动出台更严格的湿地保护法规，向身边人科普湿地的重要性，最后收尾发出共同行动的呼吁，保证逻辑连贯，词数达标，符合倡议信的文体语气。
【解析】
本次写作按照给定框架分三部分完成：
1. 湿地价值阐述：承接已给出的开头句，先介绍湿地的别称“地球之肾”，点明其对生态平衡的重要意义，再说明湿地是各类野生生物的家园，同时具备调蓄洪水的功能，清晰完成第一个核心写作要点。
2. 现存问题说明：用转折词however过渡，点明湿地正面临威胁，列举人类为获取更多农田、建筑空间不断缩小湿地面积，渔民长期过度捕捞的行为，说明这些行为会挤压野生生物生存空间、导致鸟类等生物食物短缺的负面影响，完成第二个核心写作要点。
3. 保护倡议发出：用It's high time句型引出行动号召，列举捐款、参与志愿活动、推动相关立法、科普湿地知识等具体可行的举措，最后补充收尾呼吁，强化倡议的感染力，全文以一般现在时为主，逻辑通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask for your help in protecting wetlands.
Wetlands, known as the "kidneys of the earth", are important for ecological balance. They are home to wildlife. Besides, wetlands can also help prevent floods.
However, wetlands are at risk. Some people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. As a result, there will be less space for wildlife. Birds will not have enough food if fishermen keep fishing there.
It's high time we acted. We can donate money to or volunteer for wetland protection groups. Let's push for stricter laws against illegal wetland development and teach others about the importance of wetlands.
Let's work together to protect wetlands. Every effort counts!
Yours,
Wang Lin
【知识点】
英文倡议信写作；环保话题表达；It's high time句型
【点评】
本题属于环保主题的应用文写作，题目给出了清晰的写作逻辑框架，降低了构思难度，学生只需要覆盖题干要求的三个核心要点，适当补充合理细节，就能写出符合要求的作文，同时可以积累生态保护类话题的常用表达，提升应用文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先明确写作目标是写一封呼吁保护湿地的英文倡议信，按照题目给出的思维导图和三个核心要求分步构思：第一步，先完成湿地重要性的介绍：先给湿地一个广为人知的定位比如“地球之肾”，再说明它是野生动植物的栖息地，额外补充它在防洪、维持生态平衡上的作用，把第一个要点讲清楚；第二步，转向湿地面临的危机：先点明湿地正处于危险中，再列举人类的不合理行为，比如为了扩建农田、建筑挤占湿地面积，长期过度捕捞破坏湿地食物链，说明这些行为会导致野生动物生存空间缩减、食物不足的后果，覆盖第二个写作要求；第三步，提出行动方案：用It's high time we acted引出倡议，列举普通人可以落地的具体行动，比如给湿地保护组织捐款、做志愿者，推动出台更严格的湿地保护法规，向身边人科普湿地的重要性，最后收尾发出共同行动的呼吁，保证逻辑连贯，词数达标，符合倡议信的文体语气。
【解析】
本次写作按照给定框架分三部分完成：
1. 湿地价值阐述：承接已给出的开头句，先介绍湿地的别称“地球之肾”，点明其对生态平衡的重要意义，再说明湿地是各类野生生物的家园，同时具备调蓄洪水的功能，清晰完成第一个核心写作要点。
2. 现存问题说明：用转折词however过渡，点明湿地正面临威胁，列举人类为获取更多农田、建筑空间不断缩小湿地面积，渔民长期过度捕捞的行为，说明这些行为会挤压野生生物生存空间、导致鸟类等生物食物短缺的负面影响，完成第二个核心写作要点。
3. 保护倡议发出：用It's high time句型引出行动号召，列举捐款、参与志愿活动、推动相关立法、科普湿地知识等具体可行的举措，最后补充收尾呼吁，强化倡议的感染力，全文以一般现在时为主，逻辑通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to ask for your help in protecting wetlands.
Wetlands, known as the "kidneys of the earth", are important for ecological balance. They are home to wildlife. Besides, wetlands can also help prevent floods.
However, wetlands are at risk. Some people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. As a result, there will be less space for wildlife. Birds will not have enough food if fishermen keep fishing there.
It's high time we acted. We can donate money to or volunteer for wetland protection groups. Let's push for stricter laws against illegal wetland development and teach others about the importance of wetlands.
Let's work together to protect wetlands. Every effort counts!
Yours,
Wang Lin
【知识点】
英文倡议信写作；环保话题表达；It's high time句型
【点评】
本题属于环保主题的应用文写作，题目给出了清晰的写作逻辑框架，降低了构思难度，学生只需要覆盖题干要求的三个核心要点，适当补充合理细节，就能写出符合要求的作文，同时可以积累生态保护类话题的常用表达，提升应用文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
