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五、书面表达
自然恰似一场无声的音乐会——森林化作绿色钢琴，净化每一丝空气；河流成为银色琴弦，滋养无数生命；海洋则是蔚蓝舞台，跃动着氧气泡泡，还有鱼群似舞者蹁跹。根据下面的要点提示，以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 自然价值:树木→空气净化器;海洋→鱼群家园＋氧气工厂；
2. 人类威胁:砍伐森林→电锯毁绿琴;塑料入海→垃圾毁家园；
3. 保护行动:种树还林,净滩减塑。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 表达清楚,语言通顺,书写规范；
3. 词数90左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things.
自然恰似一场无声的音乐会——森林化作绿色钢琴，净化每一丝空气；河流成为银色琴弦，滋养无数生命；海洋则是蔚蓝舞台，跃动着氧气泡泡，还有鱼群似舞者蹁跹。根据下面的要点提示，以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 自然价值:树木→空气净化器;海洋→鱼群家园＋氧气工厂；
2. 人类威胁:砍伐森林→电锯毁绿琴;塑料入海→垃圾毁家园；
3. 保护行动:种树还林,净滩减塑。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 表达清楚,语言通顺,书写规范；
3. 词数90左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things.
答案
One possible version:
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达中的要点式话题作文，要求以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题，结合给定的三个核心要点（自然价值、人类对自然的威胁、保护自然的行动）完成短文，开头已给出，需满足词数、无真实信息、语言通顺的要求。解题思路为：1. 承接开头，围绕要点1阐述自然的价值，对应树木（空气净化器）、海洋（鱼群家园+氧气工厂）；2. 转折过渡，围绕要点2说明人类的破坏行为，对应砍树毁森林、塑料入海毁海洋家园；3. 围绕要点3提出具体保护行动，对应种树还林、净滩减塑，确保内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】写作时需遵循“价值-威胁-保护”的逻辑结构，使用准确的英语词汇和句式：① 承接开头写自然价值：用“Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory”对应要点1；② 转折写人类威胁：用“People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life”对应要点2；③ 写保护行动：用“We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use”对应要点3，最后补充呼吁句使文章完整，控制词数在90左右，避免语法错误。
【答案】The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、话题作文
【点评】该范文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，准确传达了自然的价值、人类的破坏及保护措施，符合题目对词数、内容的要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时需遵循“价值-威胁-保护”的逻辑结构，使用准确的英语词汇和句式：① 承接开头写自然价值：用“Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory”对应要点1；② 转折写人类威胁：用“People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life”对应要点2；③ 写保护行动：用“We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use”对应要点3，最后补充呼吁句使文章完整，控制词数在90左右，避免语法错误。
【答案】The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、话题作文
【点评】该范文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言通顺，准确传达了自然的价值、人类的破坏及保护措施，符合题目对词数、内容的要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.5
