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中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化:春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节等。学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动,请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
1. 词数80—100;2. 字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
中华民族上下五千年形成了内涵丰富、形式多样的节日文化:春节、清明节、端午节、中秋节等。学校英语社团决定开展“多彩的传统节日”主题宣传活动,请用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
1. 词数80—100;2. 字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
答案
One possible version:
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival.
Let me introduce it to you.
→ introduce sth to sb将某物介绍某人
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members
usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things
everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune.
Children will get lucky money from their parents. People
always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of
the year. It not only means family reunion, but also shows
Chinese traditional culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意介绍节日的时间、庆祝方
式、象征意义等,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。注意上
下文之间的逻辑关系,语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表明最喜欢的传统节日是哪个;第二步,
具体介绍这个节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等;第三步,
总结并表达对这个节日的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①get together 团聚 ②good fortune 好运 ③lucky money
压岁钱 ④family reunion 家人团聚 ⑤traditional culture
传统文化
[高分句型]
①Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner.
动词不定式短语作目的状语
②We can see red things everywhere, because they mean
happiness and good fortune. because引导原因状语从句
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival.
Let me introduce it to you.
→ introduce sth to sb将某物介绍某人
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members
usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things
everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune.
Children will get lucky money from their parents. People
always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of
the year. It not only means family reunion, but also shows
Chinese traditional culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意介绍节日的时间、庆祝方
式、象征意义等,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。注意上
下文之间的逻辑关系,语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表明最喜欢的传统节日是哪个;第二步,
具体介绍这个节日的时间、庆祝方式、象征意义等;第三步,
总结并表达对这个节日的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①get together 团聚 ②good fortune 好运 ③lucky money
压岁钱 ④family reunion 家人团聚 ⑤traditional culture
传统文化
[高分句型]
①Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner.
动词不定式短语作目的状语
②We can see red things everywhere, because they mean
happiness and good fortune. because引导原因状语从句
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日，需遵循“总-分-总”结构：第一步开篇点明节日名称；第二步详细说明节日的时间、庆祝活动、象征意义等核心内容；第三步总结并表达对该节日的喜爱。写作时需以一般现在时为主，运用学过的亮点词汇和句型，确保词数在80-100之间，语句通顺、逻辑连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：直接点明最喜欢的传统节日是春节，引出介绍主题；2. 主体：介绍春节的时间（农历正月初一），列举核心庆祝活动（家人团聚吃大餐、随处可见红色物品、孩子收压岁钱、假期放松），说明象征意义（幸福好运、家人团聚、传承传统文化）；3. 结尾：总结表达对春节的喜爱。写作时需使用恰当词汇（如get together、lucky money等）和句型（如原因状语从句、不定式作目的状语），符合词数要求，语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival.
Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of the year. It not only means family reunion, but also shows Chinese traditional culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、中国传统节日介绍、英语常用句型运用
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，要点完整，涵盖了节日的时间、活动、意义等核心内容；运用了亮点词汇和高分句型，语句通顺，逻辑连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的节日介绍类书面表达，为学生提供了清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日，需遵循“总-分-总”结构：第一步开篇点明节日名称；第二步详细说明节日的时间、庆祝活动、象征意义等核心内容；第三步总结并表达对该节日的喜爱。写作时需以一般现在时为主，运用学过的亮点词汇和句型，确保词数在80-100之间，语句通顺、逻辑连贯。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：直接点明最喜欢的传统节日是春节，引出介绍主题；2. 主体：介绍春节的时间（农历正月初一），列举核心庆祝活动（家人团聚吃大餐、随处可见红色物品、孩子收压岁钱、假期放松），说明象征意义（幸福好运、家人团聚、传承传统文化）；3. 结尾：总结表达对春节的喜爱。写作时需使用恰当词汇（如get together、lucky money等）和句型（如原因状语从句、不定式作目的状语），符合词数要求，语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite traditional festival is the Spring Festival.
Let me introduce it to you.
It is on the first day of the first lunar month. Family members usually get together to eat a big dinner. We can see red things everywhere, because they mean happiness and good fortune. Children will get lucky money from their parents. People always have a long holiday to relax. It's a new beginning of the year. It not only means family reunion, but also shows Chinese traditional culture.
I like the Spring Festival very much.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、中国传统节日介绍、英语常用句型运用
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，要点完整，涵盖了节日的时间、活动、意义等核心内容；运用了亮点词汇和高分句型，语句通顺，逻辑连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的节日介绍类书面表达，为学生提供了清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
