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假设你所在的学校即将举办环保节活动。宣传小组想让你负责介绍树木的作用和砍伐树木对环境造成的不良影响，倡导人们要爱护树木，保护环境。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文。
提示词: environment 环境; flood 洪水
注意: 语句连贯, 词数 60~80。
Trees are important to us. They help us a lot.
[审题指导]
1. 体裁: 说明文
2. 人称: 第三人称为主
3. 时态: 一般现在时
[精彩范文]
Trees are important to us. They help us a lot. Trees can help us keep the air cool and clean. And trees also bring us many useful things. For example, we get fruit from trees, and they also make our environment beautiful.
However, people cut down a lot of trees. Animals are losing their homes. Without trees, some places may get flooded easily. We need to stop cutting down so many trees!
We can do many things to protect the environment. As students, we can plant trees. We can also have some activities to ask people to stop cutting down trees. Let's work hard together!
高分点评: 1. 文章思路清晰。三段式依次介绍树木的作用、面临的问题以及如何保护树木。 2. 使用 for example 列举出树木的作用；其他短语如 cut down; a lot of 的使用给文章增彩。 3. 恰当使用 however 引出下文, 说明砍伐树木的危害。 4. We can do many things to protect the environment. 句中动词不定式的正确使用, 展示了作者扎实的基本功。
实战演练 (20分) 得分
假如你是李辉, 你的外国笔友 Eric 听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义, 请你给他介绍一种具有中国文化意义的植物。
要点: 1. 明确植物名称; 2. 简要介绍; 3. 文化意义。
提示词: see...as 把 …… 视 为, the symbol of persistence 坚持不懈的象征, hollow 空的, spirit 精神, furniture 家具
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce to you.
Li Hui
假设你所在的学校即将举办环保节活动。宣传小组想让你负责介绍树木的作用和砍伐树木对环境造成的不良影响，倡导人们要爱护树木，保护环境。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文。
提示词: environment 环境; flood 洪水
注意: 语句连贯, 词数 60~80。
Trees are important to us. They help us a lot.
[审题指导]
1. 体裁: 说明文
2. 人称: 第三人称为主
3. 时态: 一般现在时
[精彩范文]
Trees are important to us. They help us a lot. Trees can help us keep the air cool and clean. And trees also bring us many useful things. For example, we get fruit from trees, and they also make our environment beautiful.
However, people cut down a lot of trees. Animals are losing their homes. Without trees, some places may get flooded easily. We need to stop cutting down so many trees!
We can do many things to protect the environment. As students, we can plant trees. We can also have some activities to ask people to stop cutting down trees. Let's work hard together!
高分点评: 1. 文章思路清晰。三段式依次介绍树木的作用、面临的问题以及如何保护树木。 2. 使用 for example 列举出树木的作用；其他短语如 cut down; a lot of 的使用给文章增彩。 3. 恰当使用 however 引出下文, 说明砍伐树木的危害。 4. We can do many things to protect the environment. 句中动词不定式的正确使用, 展示了作者扎实的基本功。
实战演练 (20分) 得分
假如你是李辉, 你的外国笔友 Eric 听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义, 请你给他介绍一种具有中国文化意义的植物。
要点: 1. 明确植物名称; 2. 简要介绍; 3. 文化意义。
提示词: see...as 把 …… 视 为, the symbol of persistence 坚持不懈的象征, hollow 空的, spirit 精神, furniture 家具
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce to you.
Li Hui
答案
创新表达一写作能力提升练
实战演练
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence.
Bamboo mainly grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth. We call it "sun". We can cook dishes with it. It's very delicious. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. However, it isn't like other trees. It's hollow inside. People will cut it down to make furniture when it is tall enough.
In traditional Chinese culture, people would like to draw bamboo to show its spirit.
Li Hui
【思路点拨】开头:引出所介绍的植物竹子及其文化意义;接着具体介绍竹子,最后写人们对竹子的喜爱。
实战演练
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence.
Bamboo mainly grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth. We call it "sun". We can cook dishes with it. It's very delicious. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. However, it isn't like other trees. It's hollow inside. People will cut it down to make furniture when it is tall enough.
In traditional Chinese culture, people would like to draw bamboo to show its spirit.
Li Hui
【思路点拨】开头:引出所介绍的植物竹子及其文化意义;接着具体介绍竹子,最后写人们对竹子的喜爱。
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求介绍具有中国文化意义的植物。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为说明文，人称以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时；2. 开头直接点明要介绍的植物（竹子），并引出其核心文化意义；3. 具体介绍竹子的生长区域、外形特点（中空）、用途等；4. 阐述竹子在中国传统文化中的象征意义，确保涵盖所有要点，使用提示词，语句连贯，词数控制在合适范围。
【解析】
按照写作思路依次完成内容：
1. 开头：点明介绍的植物及文化意义；
2. 中间：具体介绍竹子的生长区域、外形特点、用途；
3. 结尾：升华竹子的文化象征意义；
最后署名，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence.
Bamboo mainly grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth. We can cook dishes with it. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. It's hollow inside. People will cut it down to make furniture when it is tall enough.
In traditional Chinese culture, people like to draw bamboo to show its spirit.
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；文化类话题写作；词汇运用
【点评】
文章紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结构清晰，准确使用提示词，时态正确，语句连贯，符合词数要求，清晰传达了竹子的特点及中国文化意义，是一篇合格的应用文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求介绍具有中国文化意义的植物。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为说明文，人称以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时；2. 开头直接点明要介绍的植物（竹子），并引出其核心文化意义；3. 具体介绍竹子的生长区域、外形特点（中空）、用途等；4. 阐述竹子在中国传统文化中的象征意义，确保涵盖所有要点，使用提示词，语句连贯，词数控制在合适范围。
【解析】
按照写作思路依次完成内容：
1. 开头：点明介绍的植物及文化意义；
2. 中间：具体介绍竹子的生长区域、外形特点、用途；
3. 结尾：升华竹子的文化象征意义；
最后署名，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence.
Bamboo mainly grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth. We can cook dishes with it. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. It's hollow inside. People will cut it down to make furniture when it is tall enough.
In traditional Chinese culture, people like to draw bamboo to show its spirit.
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；文化类话题写作；词汇运用
【点评】
文章紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结构清晰，准确使用提示词，时态正确，语句连贯，符合词数要求，清晰传达了竹子的特点及中国文化意义，是一篇合格的应用文。
【难度系数】
0.5
