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五、书面表达。（共20 分）
系列活动的最后，是征文践行环节。为巩固本次安全主题活动的成果，进一步提升广大学生在灾难中的自救能力，我校英文报特意发起了以“How to protect ourselves from disasters”为题的征文活动。
请以“How to protect ourselves from disasters”为题，并根据下列提示写一篇稿件，介绍在不同灾难中保护自己的方法，同时提出预防措施。
要求：
1. 文中勿提及真实姓名和学校，80～100 词左右（已给出部分不计入总词数）。
2. 短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并在此基础上适当发挥。
3. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
How to protect ourselves from disasters
Disasters always happen unexpectedly. So, it's important to learn how to protect ourselves from them.
系列活动的最后，是征文践行环节。为巩固本次安全主题活动的成果，进一步提升广大学生在灾难中的自救能力，我校英文报特意发起了以“How to protect ourselves from disasters”为题的征文活动。
请以“How to protect ourselves from disasters”为题，并根据下列提示写一篇稿件，介绍在不同灾难中保护自己的方法，同时提出预防措施。
要求：
1. 文中勿提及真实姓名和学校，80～100 词左右（已给出部分不计入总词数）。
2. 短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并在此基础上适当发挥。
3. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
How to protect ourselves from disasters
Disasters always happen unexpectedly. So, it's important to learn how to protect ourselves from them.
答案
五、One possible version:
How to protect ourselves from disasters
Disasters always happen unexpectedly. So, it's important to learn how to protect ourselves from them.
Facing different disasters, we should know the right ways. In a flood, try to get to high ground quickly. During an earthquake, stay calm and stay away from windows or heavy things. If there is a fire, use a wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose and leave the building as soon as possible.
We can also take action to prevent disasters. Prepare necessary supplies such as food, water and medicine. Learning some knowledge about safety is very useful. Also, we should not play with matches to avoid fires.
If we are prepared and careful, we can stay much safer.
How to protect ourselves from disasters
Disasters always happen unexpectedly. So, it's important to learn how to protect ourselves from them.
Facing different disasters, we should know the right ways. In a flood, try to get to high ground quickly. During an earthquake, stay calm and stay away from windows or heavy things. If there is a fire, use a wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose and leave the building as soon as possible.
We can also take action to prevent disasters. Prepare necessary supplies such as food, water and medicine. Learning some knowledge about safety is very useful. Also, we should not play with matches to avoid fires.
If we are prepared and careful, we can stay much safer.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确写作要求：主题是介绍灾难中的自救方法和日常预防措施，需要覆盖表格给出的全部要点，字数控制在80-100词，不能出现真实个人和学校信息。接下来梳理写作思路：首先承接题目已经给出的开头句，先按照不同灾难的类型，逐一对应写出对应的自我保护方法，把洪水前往高地、地震远离窗户、火灾用湿布捂口鼻这些要点自然融入；之后再过渡到日常可以提前采取的预防行动，把准备应急物资、学习安全知识、不玩火柴这些内容依次写出，最后用一句简短的话收尾点题，检查所有要点无遗漏、语言通顺、字数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 搭建文章逻辑框架：全文分为三个部分，第一部分承接给定开头，分场景介绍不同灾难的正确自救方式；第二部分介绍日常可落实的防灾预防举措；第三部分简短收尾升华主题。
2. 填充对应要点：
① 自救方法部分：分别对应洪水、地震、火灾三个场景，依次写出get to high ground、stay away from windows、use a wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose的要求内容，适当补充少量合理细节让语句更连贯。
② 预防行动部分：依次写出prepare necessary supplies、learn safety knowledge、don't play with matches的提示要点，可简单举例应急物资包含食物、水等让内容更饱满。
3. 最终检查：核对所有表格要点是否全部覆盖，字数是否符合要求，排查语法错误，确认没有出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【答案】
How to protect ourselves from disasters
Disasters always happen unexpectedly. So, it's important to learn how to protect ourselves from them.
Facing different disasters, we should know the right ways. In a flood, try to get to high ground quickly. During an earthquake, stay calm and stay away from windows or heavy things. If there is a fire, use a wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose and leave the building as soon as possible.
We can also take action to prevent disasters. Prepare necessary supplies such as food, water and medicine. Learning some knowledge about safety is very useful. Also, we should not play with matches to avoid fires.
If we are prepared and careful, we can stay much safer.
【知识点】
英语短文写作，安全主题表达，要点整合输出
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖了题干和表格给出的全部提示要点，逻辑分层清晰，先分场景讲解不同灾难的自救方法，再介绍日常防灾的可行举措，最后收尾点题呼应主题，语言流畅自然，用词准确地道，字数符合题目要求，完全符合本次征文的内容和风格要求，学生可以参考该范文的分层逻辑完成同类主题的写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确写作要求：主题是介绍灾难中的自救方法和日常预防措施，需要覆盖表格给出的全部要点，字数控制在80-100词，不能出现真实个人和学校信息。接下来梳理写作思路：首先承接题目已经给出的开头句，先按照不同灾难的类型，逐一对应写出对应的自我保护方法，把洪水前往高地、地震远离窗户、火灾用湿布捂口鼻这些要点自然融入；之后再过渡到日常可以提前采取的预防行动，把准备应急物资、学习安全知识、不玩火柴这些内容依次写出，最后用一句简短的话收尾点题，检查所有要点无遗漏、语言通顺、字数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 搭建文章逻辑框架：全文分为三个部分，第一部分承接给定开头，分场景介绍不同灾难的正确自救方式；第二部分介绍日常可落实的防灾预防举措；第三部分简短收尾升华主题。
2. 填充对应要点：
① 自救方法部分：分别对应洪水、地震、火灾三个场景，依次写出get to high ground、stay away from windows、use a wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose的要求内容，适当补充少量合理细节让语句更连贯。
② 预防行动部分：依次写出prepare necessary supplies、learn safety knowledge、don't play with matches的提示要点，可简单举例应急物资包含食物、水等让内容更饱满。
3. 最终检查：核对所有表格要点是否全部覆盖，字数是否符合要求，排查语法错误，确认没有出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【答案】
How to protect ourselves from disasters
Disasters always happen unexpectedly. So, it's important to learn how to protect ourselves from them.
Facing different disasters, we should know the right ways. In a flood, try to get to high ground quickly. During an earthquake, stay calm and stay away from windows or heavy things. If there is a fire, use a wet cloth to cover your mouth and nose and leave the building as soon as possible.
We can also take action to prevent disasters. Prepare necessary supplies such as food, water and medicine. Learning some knowledge about safety is very useful. Also, we should not play with matches to avoid fires.
If we are prepared and careful, we can stay much safer.
【知识点】
英语短文写作，安全主题表达，要点整合输出
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖了题干和表格给出的全部提示要点，逻辑分层清晰，先分场景讲解不同灾难的自救方法，再介绍日常防灾的可行举措，最后收尾点题呼应主题，语言流畅自然，用词准确地道，字数符合题目要求，完全符合本次征文的内容和风格要求，学生可以参考该范文的分层逻辑完成同类主题的写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
