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假如你叫李芬,你的美国笔友 Mary 想在中国结交更多的朋友,你通过电子邮件,把你最好的朋友王悦介绍给她,王悦的情况见下表。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有信息,可以进行适当发挥;
3. 词数 90 左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
4. 不使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
假如你叫李芬,你的美国笔友 Mary 想在中国结交更多的朋友,你通过电子邮件,把你最好的朋友王悦介绍给她,王悦的情况见下表。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有信息,可以进行适当发挥;
3. 词数 90 左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
4. 不使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and she never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films. She is good at playing baseball. She hopes she can have more free time for after-school activities in her ideal school.
She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. Then she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
答案
Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and she never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films. She is good at playing baseball. She hopes she can have more free time for after-school activities in her ideal school. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. Then she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and she never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films. She is good at playing baseball. She hopes she can have more free time for after-school activities in her ideal school. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. Then she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作，要求以李芬的身份给美国笔友Mary写邮件介绍好友王悦。解题思路：1. 先提取表格中王悦的所有信息（外貌、个性、爱好、理想学校、理想）；2. 结合邮件结构，衔接已给开头，依次介绍各方面信息，补充个性中“慷慨大方”的具体例子；3. 确保语法正确、语句连贯，覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【解析】Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films and is good at playing baseball. She hopes her ideal school has more free time for after-school activities. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up, so she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
【答案】Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and she never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films. She is good at playing baseball. She hopes she can have more free time for after-school activities in her ideal school. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. Then she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有信息，语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑连贯，符合邮件的格式规范，适当补充了个性中“慷慨大方”的具体例子，表达自然流畅，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films and is good at playing baseball. She hopes her ideal school has more free time for after-school activities. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up, so she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
【答案】Dear Mary,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue has a square face, bright and smiling eyes. She has long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me.
She is honest and kind. She can keep secrets and she never says a bad word about others. It's generous of her to share everything with others.
Wang Yue likes watching foreign films. She is good at playing baseball. She hopes she can have more free time for after-school activities in her ideal school. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. Then she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her. I believe you can be best friends.
Best wishes,
Li Fen
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有信息，语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑连贯，符合邮件的格式规范，适当补充了个性中“慷慨大方”的具体例子，表达自然流畅，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
