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每个人要爱自己的学校,以学校为荣。假设你是李明,现在你的学校正在组织一场“我爱我校”的演讲比赛。请你以“My School”为题,根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿来介绍你的学校。
提示词语: building, garden, trees, flowers, between, beside, in front of, classroom, library, lab
提示问题: ·How many buildings are there? ( at least two )
·What can you do in each building?
要求: 1.词数70左右;
2.必须包含上述所有要点,可适当发挥想象。
My School
写作支架
教材原文
P47▶ I'd like to tell you about my school.
P46▶ There are many modern buildings.
初中英语 六年级上册 鲁教版
优秀范文
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
每个人要爱自己的学校,以学校为荣。假设你是李明,现在你的学校正在组织一场“我爱我校”的演讲比赛。请你以“My School”为题,根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿来介绍你的学校。
提示词语: building, garden, trees, flowers, between, beside, in front of, classroom, library, lab
提示问题: ·How many buildings are there? ( at least two )
·What can you do in each building?
要求: 1.词数70左右;
2.必须包含上述所有要点,可适当发挥想象。
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building. We can have classes in it.
There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there. We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.
写作支架
教材原文
P47▶ I'd like to tell you about my school.
P46▶ There are many modern buildings.
初中英语 六年级上册 鲁教版
优秀范文
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
答案
优秀范文
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题，要求以李明的身份介绍学校，需用第一人称、一般现在时，包含指定建筑及各建筑功能，运用高分句式。解题思路：1. 开篇点题，说明要介绍自己的学校；2. 中间详细介绍学校的现代建筑，依次说明教学楼（有教室，用于上课）、图书馆（有书，用于读书）、体育馆（用于运动），运用there be句型、并列句；3. 结尾用because引导的原因状语从句表达对学校的喜爱，确保词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：①开头：用Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school. 引出主题；②中间：先说明学校有很多现代建筑，列举教学楼、图书馆、体育馆；接着写教学楼有很多教室，我们可以在里面上课；图书馆有很多书，我们可以在那里读书；体育馆可以做运动；③结尾：用This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place. 表达喜爱，确保包含所有要点，词数约70。
【答案】My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building. We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there. We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.
【知识点】英语写作、there be句型、原因状语从句
【点评】该范文结构清晰，符合演讲稿格式，涵盖所有题目要求的要点，运用了本单元核心语法及高分句式，语言简洁流畅，准确表达了对学校的喜爱，符合六年级学生的写作要求。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作步骤：①开头：用Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school. 引出主题；②中间：先说明学校有很多现代建筑，列举教学楼、图书馆、体育馆；接着写教学楼有很多教室，我们可以在里面上课；图书馆有很多书，我们可以在那里读书；体育馆可以做运动；③结尾：用This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place. 表达喜爱，确保包含所有要点，词数约70。
【答案】My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I'd like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building. We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there. We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it's a really great place.
【知识点】英语写作、there be句型、原因状语从句
【点评】该范文结构清晰，符合演讲稿格式，涵盖所有题目要求的要点，运用了本单元核心语法及高分句式，语言简洁流畅，准确表达了对学校的喜爱，符合六年级学生的写作要求。
【难度系数】0.7
