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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D16
假如你是李华,本周五下午,学校“校园开放日”要迎来一批英国小伙伴参观,学校计划从三个年级中各挑选一名学生负责接待,你很荣幸被选中。请你根据以下内容提示,用英文写一篇导游词,向来访的客人介绍你的校园。
内容提示：
• 先简单介绍你自己；
• 介绍你的学校并描述你最喜欢的一处地方(如图书馆、操场、花园等)；
• 欢迎他们的到来,并邀请他们周末到你家做客。
要求：
1.条理清楚,意思连贯,书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
Have a great day!
假如你是李华,本周五下午,学校“校园开放日”要迎来一批英国小伙伴参观,学校计划从三个年级中各挑选一名学生负责接待,你很荣幸被选中。请你根据以下内容提示,用英文写一篇导游词,向来访的客人介绍你的校园。
内容提示：
• 先简单介绍你自己；
• 介绍你的学校并描述你最喜欢的一处地方(如图书馆、操场、花园等)；
• 欢迎他们的到来,并邀请他们周末到你家做客。
要求：
1.条理清楚,意思连贯,书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful.
There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library.
My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here.
Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
答案
第5课时 主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful.
There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
＞ 进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I'm outgoing and active. I like not only reading books but also playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is a very big and beautiful school with some different buildings. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library because it is a quiet place for reading books.
I hope you will fall in love with our school and have a good time here. Please come to my home if you are free on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
＞ 基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful.
There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
＞ 进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I'm outgoing and active. I like not only reading books but also playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is a very big and beautiful school with some different buildings. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library because it is a quiet place for reading books.
I hope you will fall in love with our school and have a good time here. Please come to my home if you are free on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇校园开放日的英文导游词写作，需遵循“自我介绍→校园介绍+最喜欢的校园地点→欢迎与邀请”的结构。首先补充开头未完成的内容：先简单介绍自己的年龄、爱好，接着说明学校的基本设施（如教学楼、操场、图书馆等），再点明最喜欢的校园地点并阐述原因，最后用友好语气欢迎客人并邀请他们周末到家里做客，注意词数控制在70左右，语言连贯且无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 补充自我介绍：结合开头的身份，添加年龄、爱好（如“I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.”），完成简单介绍；
2. 介绍学校：列举学校的主要建筑，说明学校“大且美”的特点；
3. 介绍最喜欢的地方：选择图书馆，突出其“安静适合阅读”的优势；
4. 表达欢迎与邀请：用友好的语气欢迎客人，邀请周末到家里，说明可一起活动。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful.
There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园话题表达、邀请类句型
【点评】
本题为校园主题的英文导游词写作，结构清晰，要点明确，考查学生自我介绍、校园介绍及邀请的常用表达，符合初中英语写作训练要求，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
这是一篇校园开放日的英文导游词写作，需遵循“自我介绍→校园介绍+最喜欢的校园地点→欢迎与邀请”的结构。首先补充开头未完成的内容：先简单介绍自己的年龄、爱好，接着说明学校的基本设施（如教学楼、操场、图书馆等），再点明最喜欢的校园地点并阐述原因，最后用友好语气欢迎客人并邀请他们周末到家里做客，注意词数控制在70左右，语言连贯且无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 补充自我介绍：结合开头的身份，添加年龄、爱好（如“I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.”），完成简单介绍；
2. 介绍学校：列举学校的主要建筑，说明学校“大且美”的特点；
3. 介绍最喜欢的地方：选择图书馆，突出其“安静适合阅读”的优势；
4. 表达欢迎与邀请：用友好的语气欢迎客人，邀请周末到家里，说明可一起活动。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful.
There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园话题表达、邀请类句型
【点评】
本题为校园主题的英文导游词写作，结构清晰，要点明确，考查学生自我介绍、校园介绍及邀请的常用表达，符合初中英语写作训练要求，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.3
