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第八部分 书面表达(共1题;满分25分)
77.(改编)"天地生人,有一人应有一人之业;人生在世,生一日当尽一日之勤。"对于成长中的我们来说,勇
担社会责任是一种价值追求,更是一种精神境界。如下图所示,阳光中学八年级一班的同学们正在积
极地担当起应负的责任。对此,你怎么看? 请你以"Responsibilities in My Eyes"为题写一篇英语文
章,内容应包括:
(1)根据图片简要说明我们应承担的社会责任;(2)讲述你勇担社会责任
的一次经历;(3)你对青少年履行社会责任的看法。
注意:(1)词数90左右,照抄本卷语篇不得分;(2)涵盖所有要点,可适当
发挥;(3)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任, shoulder v. 承担
Responsibilities in My Eyes
77.(改编)"天地生人,有一人应有一人之业;人生在世,生一日当尽一日之勤。"对于成长中的我们来说,勇
担社会责任是一种价值追求,更是一种精神境界。如下图所示,阳光中学八年级一班的同学们正在积
极地担当起应负的责任。对此,你怎么看? 请你以"Responsibilities in My Eyes"为题写一篇英语文
章,内容应包括:
(1)根据图片简要说明我们应承担的社会责任;(2)讲述你勇担社会责任
的一次经历;(3)你对青少年履行社会责任的看法。
注意:(1)词数90左右,照抄本卷语篇不得分;(2)涵盖所有要点,可适当
发挥;(3)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任, shoulder v. 承担
Responsibilities in My Eyes
答案
第八部分
77. One possible version:
Responsibilities in My Eyes
In my view, we have various social responsibilities. As shown in the pictures, we should care for the weak, like giving seats to the elderly on the bus, and protect the environment, such as putting litter into the bin. At the same time, we should also plant more trees. In public places, we have to queue up and wait.
Once, I noticed an old man who got lost on the street. I accompanied him and helped him find his family. It made me feel proud to be helpful.
For teenagers, fulfilling social responsibilities is of great significance. It not only helps others but also enriches our own lives and makes us better-developed individuals. We should actively shoulder our responsibilities and contribute to a more harmonious society.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片简要说明我们应承担的社会责任；第二步，讲述你勇担社会责任的一次经历；第三步，表明你对青少年履行社会责任的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①care for 照顾，照料 ②protect the environment 保护环境
③fulfill social responsibilities 履行社会责任
[高分句型]
①Once, I noticed an old man who got lost on the street.(who引导定语从句)
②It not only helps others but also enriches our own lives and makes us better-developed individuals.(not only ... but also ... 结构)
77. One possible version:
Responsibilities in My Eyes
In my view, we have various social responsibilities. As shown in the pictures, we should care for the weak, like giving seats to the elderly on the bus, and protect the environment, such as putting litter into the bin. At the same time, we should also plant more trees. In public places, we have to queue up and wait.
Once, I noticed an old man who got lost on the street. I accompanied him and helped him find his family. It made me feel proud to be helpful.
For teenagers, fulfilling social responsibilities is of great significance. It not only helps others but also enriches our own lives and makes us better-developed individuals. We should actively shoulder our responsibilities and contribute to a more harmonious society.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片简要说明我们应承担的社会责任；第二步，讲述你勇担社会责任的一次经历；第三步，表明你对青少年履行社会责任的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①care for 照顾，照料 ②protect the environment 保护环境
③fulfill social responsibilities 履行社会责任
[高分句型]
①Once, I noticed an old man who got lost on the street.(who引导定语从句)
②It not only helps others but also enriches our own lives and makes us better-developed individuals.(not only ... but also ... 结构)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，属于话题类作文，主题围绕青少年承担社会责任展开。解题思路为：首先审题确定体裁、时态及写作要点，需涵盖三部分内容——结合图片说明应承担的社会责任、讲述个人承担社会责任的经历、表达对青少年履行社会责任的看法；写作时要注意词数要求，避免出现真实信息，适当发挥，运用合适的句式提升表达效果。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 结合图片说明社会责任：四幅图分别对应给老人让座、将垃圾扔进垃圾桶、种树、公共场合排队，需用英语清晰表达这些社会责任，如“care for the elderly on the bus”“protect the environment by putting litter into the bin”等。
2. 讲述个人经历：选取一件自己承担社会责任的具体事例，用一般过去时叙述，可运用定语从句等句式丰富表达，如帮助迷路老人找到家人。
3. 表达看法：说明青少年履行社会责任的重要性，用一般现在时，运用“not only...but also...”等结构增强表达效果，强调对个人和社会的意义。
写作时注意词数90左右，不要照抄试卷内容，涵盖所有要点。
【答案】
Responsibilities in My Eyes
In my view, we have various social responsibilities. As shown in the pictures, we should care for the weak, like giving seats to the elderly on the bus, and protect the environment, such as putting litter into the bin. At the same time, we should also plant more trees. In public places, we have to queue up and wait.
Once, I noticed an old man who got lost on the street. I accompanied him and helped him find his family. It made me feel proud to be helpful.
For teenagers, fulfilling social responsibilities is of great significance. It not only helps others but also enriches our own lives and makes us better-developed individuals. We should actively shoulder our responsibilities and contribute to a more harmonious society.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语写作能力，既要求结合图片提炼社会责任，又要求结合个人经历表达观点，兼顾语言运用与情感态度考查，符合初中英语写作的能力要求，需要学生准确把握要点并合理发挥。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，属于话题类作文，主题围绕青少年承担社会责任展开。解题思路为：首先审题确定体裁、时态及写作要点，需涵盖三部分内容——结合图片说明应承担的社会责任、讲述个人承担社会责任的经历、表达对青少年履行社会责任的看法；写作时要注意词数要求，避免出现真实信息，适当发挥，运用合适的句式提升表达效果。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 结合图片说明社会责任：四幅图分别对应给老人让座、将垃圾扔进垃圾桶、种树、公共场合排队，需用英语清晰表达这些社会责任，如“care for the elderly on the bus”“protect the environment by putting litter into the bin”等。
2. 讲述个人经历：选取一件自己承担社会责任的具体事例，用一般过去时叙述，可运用定语从句等句式丰富表达，如帮助迷路老人找到家人。
3. 表达看法：说明青少年履行社会责任的重要性，用一般现在时，运用“not only...but also...”等结构增强表达效果，强调对个人和社会的意义。
写作时注意词数90左右，不要照抄试卷内容，涵盖所有要点。
【答案】
Responsibilities in My Eyes
In my view, we have various social responsibilities. As shown in the pictures, we should care for the weak, like giving seats to the elderly on the bus, and protect the environment, such as putting litter into the bin. At the same time, we should also plant more trees. In public places, we have to queue up and wait.
Once, I noticed an old man who got lost on the street. I accompanied him and helped him find his family. It made me feel proud to be helpful.
For teenagers, fulfilling social responsibilities is of great significance. It not only helps others but also enriches our own lives and makes us better-developed individuals. We should actively shoulder our responsibilities and contribute to a more harmonious society.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语写作能力，既要求结合图片提炼社会责任，又要求结合个人经历表达观点，兼顾语言运用与情感态度考查，符合初中英语写作的能力要求，需要学生准确把握要点并合理发挥。
【难度系数】
0.5
