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任务四：写作迁移训练。
请你借鉴文章第二段中提到的活动和任务三所学的好词佳句完成书面表达。
今天是星期六,天气晴朗,阳光明媚。你决定去附近的人民公园拍摄一段视频,记录公园里人们的各种活动。请你根据所给图片写一个视频脚本,描述你在公园里看到的人们正在做的各种活动。
要求:1.包含图片中所给信息;2.不少于80个词。
Now it’s 8 o’clock on Saturday morning
Look!
Time &
Place
Activities
Feelings
请你借鉴文章第二段中提到的活动和任务三所学的好词佳句完成书面表达。
今天是星期六,天气晴朗,阳光明媚。你决定去附近的人民公园拍摄一段视频,记录公园里人们的各种活动。请你根据所给图片写一个视频脚本,描述你在公园里看到的人们正在做的各种活动。
要求:1.包含图片中所给信息;2.不少于80个词。
Now it’s 8 o’clock on Saturday morning
and I'm in the People's Park. People in the park are doing different things, such as riding and running.
Let's have a look at what they are doing right now.
Let's have a look at what they are doing right now.
Look!
A boy is walking his dog. He's trying his best to follow the dog. A mother with her kid is watching the dog running happily. A girl is riding a bike. What about other people? Some are taking a walk in the park. Some are running to keep fit.
Everyone is having a good time at the moment and all of them look happy and relaxed.
Everyone is having a good time at the moment and all of them look happy and relaxed.
Time &
Place
Activities
Feelings
答案
示例：
Now it's 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and I'm in the People's Park. People in the park are doing different things, such as riding and running.
Let's have a look at what they are doing right now.
Look! A boy is walking his dog. He's trying his best to follow the dog. A mother with her kid is watching the dog running happily. A girl is riding a bike. What about other people? Some are taking a walk in the park. Some are running to keep fit.
Everyone is having a good time at the moment and all of them look happy and relaxed.
Now it's 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and I'm in the People's Park. People in the park are doing different things, such as riding and running.
Let's have a look at what they are doing right now.
Look! A boy is walking his dog. He's trying his best to follow the dog. A mother with her kid is watching the dog running happily. A girl is riding a bike. What about other people? Some are taking a walk in the park. Some are running to keep fit.
Everyone is having a good time at the moment and all of them look happy and relaxed.
解析
【分析】
本题为场景描述类英语书面表达，解题思路如下：首先开篇明确时间（周六早上8点）、地点（人民公园）及核心任务（拍摄视频记录活动）；接着运用现在进行时描述公园里不同人群的具体活动，需覆盖多样角色丰富内容；最后总结大家的状态与感受，确保内容连贯、符合不少于80词的要求，同时借鉴所学好词佳句提升表达质量。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开篇：点明时间、地点及自身行为，引出公园场景；② 主体：用“Look!”衔接，以现在进行时逐一描述不同人物的活动，如遛狗、骑车、散步、跑步等，体现公园的热闹氛围；③ 结尾：总结众人的感受，使内容完整。需注意时态统一为现在进行时，语言通顺自然，满足字数要求。
【答案】
Now it's 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and I'm in the People's Park. People in the park are doing different things, such as riding and running. Let's have a look at what they are doing right now. Look! A boy is walking his dog. He's trying his best to follow the dog. A mother with her kid is watching the dog running happily. A girl is riding a bike. What about other people? Some are taking a walk in the park. Some are running to keep fit. Everyone is having a good time at the moment and all of them look happy and relaxed.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，现在进行时，场景描述
【点评】
该写作符合题目要求，开篇清晰点明核心信息，主体部分用现在进行时生动展现公园内的多样活动，结尾总结感受，内容充实流畅，能体现对所学知识的合理运用。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为场景描述类英语书面表达，解题思路如下：首先开篇明确时间（周六早上8点）、地点（人民公园）及核心任务（拍摄视频记录活动）；接着运用现在进行时描述公园里不同人群的具体活动，需覆盖多样角色丰富内容；最后总结大家的状态与感受，确保内容连贯、符合不少于80词的要求，同时借鉴所学好词佳句提升表达质量。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开篇：点明时间、地点及自身行为，引出公园场景；② 主体：用“Look!”衔接，以现在进行时逐一描述不同人物的活动，如遛狗、骑车、散步、跑步等，体现公园的热闹氛围；③ 结尾：总结众人的感受，使内容完整。需注意时态统一为现在进行时，语言通顺自然，满足字数要求。
【答案】
Now it's 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and I'm in the People's Park. People in the park are doing different things, such as riding and running. Let's have a look at what they are doing right now. Look! A boy is walking his dog. He's trying his best to follow the dog. A mother with her kid is watching the dog running happily. A girl is riding a bike. What about other people? Some are taking a walk in the park. Some are running to keep fit. Everyone is having a good time at the moment and all of them look happy and relaxed.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，现在进行时，场景描述
【点评】
该写作符合题目要求，开篇清晰点明核心信息，主体部分用现在进行时生动展现公园内的多样活动，结尾总结感受，内容充实流畅，能体现对所学知识的合理运用。
【难度系数】
0.5
