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三、书面表达
假如你是李辉，下个月来自英国的交换生 Mike 即将来沈阳你的学校参观。作为学生代表，你需要给 Mike 写一封电子邮件介绍学校和沈阳，内容包括：
1. 表示对 Mike 的欢迎；
2. 介绍沈阳这座城市；
3. 提出来沈阳参观的建议。
要求：
1. 字数为 80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I’m Li Hui.
70 英语 同步练习·目标与测试(八年级 上册)
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
假如你是李辉，下个月来自英国的交换生 Mike 即将来沈阳你的学校参观。作为学生代表，你需要给 Mike 写一封电子邮件介绍学校和沈阳，内容包括：
1. 表示对 Mike 的欢迎；
2. 介绍沈阳这座城市；
3. 提出来沈阳参观的建议。
要求：
1. 字数为 80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I’m Li Hui.
Welcome to visit our school. Now, let me tell you something about the school and the city Shenyang. Our school is an inspiring place. Students from different backgrounds can learn and grow here. It is located in central Shenyang. Shenyang is in the middle of Liaoning Province. It's hot in summer and cold in winter. The people here are very friendly. There are a lot of delicious food here. If you come here in winter, you should wear warm clothes because winter is extremely cold here.
70 英语 同步练习·目标与测试(八年级 上册)
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
答案
(参考范文)
Dear Mike,
I'm Li Hui. Welcome to visit our school. Now, let me tell you something about the school and the city Shenyang. Our school is an inspiring place. Students from different backgrounds can learn and grow here. It is located in central Shenyang. Shenyang is in the middle of Liaoning Province. It's hot in summer and cold in winter. The people here are very friendly. There are a lot of delicious food here. If you come here in winter, you should wear warm clothes because winter is extremely cold here.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
Dear Mike,
I'm Li Hui. Welcome to visit our school. Now, let me tell you something about the school and the city Shenyang. Our school is an inspiring place. Students from different backgrounds can learn and grow here. It is located in central Shenyang. Shenyang is in the middle of Liaoning Province. It's hot in summer and cold in winter. The people here are very friendly. There are a lot of delicious food here. If you come here in winter, you should wear warm clothes because winter is extremely cold here.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李辉的身份给交换生Mike写邮件，需涵盖三个核心要点：欢迎Mike、介绍沈阳、提参观建议，且开头结尾已给出，需控制字数80-100。解题思路为：先衔接开头完成欢迎，再围绕沈阳的位置、气候、人文、美食等内容介绍，最后给出合理的参观建议，使用符合八年级水平的词汇和句式，确保内容完整、行文连贯。
【解析】写作时，先衔接开头表达欢迎，接着介绍沈阳的基本情况：位于辽宁省中部，冬冷夏热，人友好且有诸多美食；再给出参观建议，如冬季来需穿厚衣服；用词简单，符合八年级英语能力，控制字数在要求范围内，确保所有要点覆盖。
【答案】Dear Mike,
I'm Li Hui. Welcome to visit our school. Now, let me tell you something about the school and the city Shenyang. Our school is an inspiring place. Students from different backgrounds can learn and grow here. It is located in central Shenyang. Shenyang is in the middle of Liaoning Province. It's hot in summer and cold in winter. The people here are very friendly. There are a lot of delicious food here. If you come here in winter, you should wear warm clothes because winter is extremely cold here.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语书面表达、电子邮件写作、城市介绍
【点评】本题贴近学生生活实际，考查八年级学生的英语写作能力，要求涵盖所有要点且行文连贯，难度适中，能有效检验学生的语言组织和信息整合能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时，先衔接开头表达欢迎，接着介绍沈阳的基本情况：位于辽宁省中部，冬冷夏热，人友好且有诸多美食；再给出参观建议，如冬季来需穿厚衣服；用词简单，符合八年级英语能力，控制字数在要求范围内，确保所有要点覆盖。
【答案】Dear Mike,
I'm Li Hui. Welcome to visit our school. Now, let me tell you something about the school and the city Shenyang. Our school is an inspiring place. Students from different backgrounds can learn and grow here. It is located in central Shenyang. Shenyang is in the middle of Liaoning Province. It's hot in summer and cold in winter. The people here are very friendly. There are a lot of delicious food here. If you come here in winter, you should wear warm clothes because winter is extremely cold here.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语书面表达、电子邮件写作、城市介绍
【点评】本题贴近学生生活实际，考查八年级学生的英语写作能力，要求涵盖所有要点且行文连贯，难度适中，能有效检验学生的语言组织和信息整合能力。
【难度系数】0.6
