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假如你是李婷，今天你收到了你的英国朋友Edward给你写的一封电子邮件。他在邮件中向你询问你今年在学校的学习情况，请根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信。
要点提示：1.简要介绍你周一到周五的上课情况，包括每天上几节课等；
2.介绍你最喜欢的学科，并解释最喜欢它的原因。
写作要求：1.必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数70左右。
写作支架
教材原文
P54▶ I'm very busy this year.
P51▶ I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths.
P53▶ I like Chinese because it's fun.
优秀范文
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.①
I'm very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but② my favourite is maths.③ I like it because② I think it is easy and interesting③. I also like Chinese because it's fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
亮点评析
①以祈使句的结构引出下文。
②but 和 because体现了本单元的核心语法,本文将核心语法自然地融入书面表达中。
③并列句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的使用使文章句式丰富。
假如你是李婷，今天你收到了你的英国朋友Edward给你写的一封电子邮件。他在邮件中向你询问你今年在学校的学习情况，请根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信。
要点提示：1.简要介绍你周一到周五的上课情况，包括每天上几节课等；
2.介绍你最喜欢的学科，并解释最喜欢它的原因。
写作要求：1.必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数70左右。
写作支架
教材原文
P54▶ I'm very busy this year.
P51▶ I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths.
P53▶ I like Chinese because it's fun.
优秀范文
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.①
I'm very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but② my favourite is maths.③ I like it because② I think it is easy and interesting③. I also like Chinese because it's fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
亮点评析
①以祈使句的结构引出下文。
②but 和 because体现了本单元的核心语法,本文将核心语法自然地融入书面表达中。
③并列句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的使用使文章句式丰富。
答案
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I'm very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths. I like it because I think it is easy and interesting. I also like Chinese because it's fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I'm very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths. I like it because I think it is easy and interesting. I also like Chinese because it's fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，要求以第一人称、一般现在时给英国朋友Edward回信，介绍自身学校学习情况。解题思路：先明确书信结构，按开头引出下文、中间介绍上课情况与喜欢的学科、结尾询问对方情况的框架填充内容，确保涵盖所有要点，使用正确时态与句式，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.”引出下文，点明介绍主题。
2. 中间部分：说明上学时间为周一到周五，上午四节课、下午两节课；接着介绍学科，最喜欢数学，原因是简单有趣，也喜欢语文，原因是有趣。
3. 结尾：用“Can you tell me about your school life?”询问对方情况，符合书信礼貌用语。全程使用一般现在时，第一人称，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I'm very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths. I like it because I think it is easy and interesting. I also like Chinese because it's fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
【知识点】
英语书信写作；一般现在时；学科相关表达
【点评】
该范文符合题目要求，涵盖所有要点，句式丰富，自然融入核心语法，是优秀的书信写作范例，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语书信写作题，要求以第一人称、一般现在时给英国朋友Edward回信，介绍自身学校学习情况。解题思路：先明确书信结构，按开头引出下文、中间介绍上课情况与喜欢的学科、结尾询问对方情况的框架填充内容，确保涵盖所有要点，使用正确时态与句式，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.”引出下文，点明介绍主题。
2. 中间部分：说明上学时间为周一到周五，上午四节课、下午两节课；接着介绍学科，最喜欢数学，原因是简单有趣，也喜欢语文，原因是有趣。
3. 结尾：用“Can you tell me about your school life?”询问对方情况，符合书信礼貌用语。全程使用一般现在时，第一人称，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I'm very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths. I like it because I think it is easy and interesting. I also like Chinese because it's fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
【知识点】
英语书信写作；一般现在时；学科相关表达
【点评】
该范文符合题目要求，涵盖所有要点，句式丰富，自然融入核心语法，是优秀的书信写作范例，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.3
