写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D20
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友 Tom 发来电子邮件,想了解你最喜欢的学科。请给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的学科是什么;2.你为什么喜欢这门学科;3.这门学科对你的帮助。
注意:
1.词数 70 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I’m happy to tell you about my favourite subject.








I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui

第5课时 主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao, is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I won some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. There are three reasons why I like this subject. First, art is easy and relaxing. I always feel relaxed when I have art classes. Second, art is interesting. Art brings me so much pleasure. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao, is a good teacher and she is friendly to all her students.
Art helps me a lot in many ways. For example, I do well in painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I won some painting prizes because of my ability in art. All in all, art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui

【分析】
本题要求以李辉的身份给英国笔友Tom写一封回信，介绍自己最喜欢的学科，需涵盖三个核心要点：1. 最喜欢的学科名称；2. 喜欢该学科的原因；3. 该学科对自己的帮助。开头和结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容。解题思路：先选择贴近学生生活的常见学科（如艺术），再围绕三个要点组织内容，注意语言简洁连贯，符合书信格式，避免真实姓名、学校等信息，控制词数在70左右。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 明确核心内容：确定最喜欢的学科为艺术；2. 阐述喜欢的原因：分三点说明，如艺术轻松有趣、艺术老师友好；3. 说明学科的帮助：提及在老师帮助下提升绘画能力、获奖，帮助自己成长；4. 衔接内容，使用简单句或少量复合句，确保行文流畅，符合初中英语水平，满足词数要求。
【答案】
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao, is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I won some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. There are three reasons why I like this subject. First, art is easy and relaxing. I always feel relaxed when I have art classes. Second, art is interesting. Art brings me so much pleasure. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao, is a good teacher and she is friendly to all her students.
Art helps me a lot in many ways. For example, I do well in painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I won some painting prizes because of my ability in art. All in all, art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】
英语书信写作、个人喜好表达、原因阐述
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，考查学生书信格式运用、话题内容组织及语言表达能力，紧扣学生日常学习生活，要点明确，难度适中，适合巩固英语写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6