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六、书面表达
49.夏日悠悠长,露营正当时,可爱的食物和风景都值得被记录。假如你是李华,上周六,你和家人去了绿道露营。请用英语写一篇短文,记录当天的活动及感受。
注意:(1)要求语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当补充一些细节信息；
(2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；
(3)词数60—80(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Camping is a wonderful way to spend time in nature.
49.夏日悠悠长,露营正当时,可爱的食物和风景都值得被记录。假如你是李华,上周六,你和家人去了绿道露营。请用英语写一篇短文,记录当天的活动及感受。
注意:(1)要求语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当补充一些细节信息；
(2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；
(3)词数60—80(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Camping is a wonderful way to spend time in nature.
答案
49. One possible version:
Camping is a wonderful way to spend time in nature. Last Saturday, I went camping with my family in Greenway. It only took us about twenty minutes to get there by car. The weather was just fine and we enjoyed the blue sky, fresh air and sunshine. As soon as we arrived there, I helped my father put up the tent. It was a bit difficult. At noon, we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we enjoyed ourselves in the sun and listened to music. Attracted by the beauty of nature, we took quite a lot of great photos, too.
How time flies! It was time for us to leave. I felt tired but happy.
Camping is a wonderful way to spend time in nature. Last Saturday, I went camping with my family in Greenway. It only took us about twenty minutes to get there by car. The weather was just fine and we enjoyed the blue sky, fresh air and sunshine. As soon as we arrived there, I helped my father put up the tent. It was a bit difficult. At noon, we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we enjoyed ourselves in the sun and listened to music. Attracted by the beauty of nature, we took quite a lot of great photos, too.
How time flies! It was time for us to leave. I felt tired but happy.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求根据给定的露营相关信息（时间、地点、天气、交通、活动、感受），结合已给出的开头句，写一篇60-80词的短文记录活动与感受。解题时需注意：1. 时态采用一般过去时（描述上周六发生的事）；2. 整合表格信息，补充合理细节让内容连贯；3. 语句通顺，符合词数要求，不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】先承接开头句，点明时间、同行人员、地点及交通方式（补充乘车耗时的细节）；接着描述天气情况，再依次叙述到达后的活动：搭帐篷、野餐、享受自然、拍照等，补充小细节让内容更生动；最后表达自己的感受，呼应主题。
【答案】One possible version:
Camping is a wonderful way to spend time in nature. Last Saturday, I went camping with my family in Greenway. It only took us about twenty minutes to get there by car. The weather was just fine and we enjoyed the blue sky, fresh air and sunshine. As soon as we arrived there, I helped my father put up the tent. It was a bit difficult. At noon, we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we enjoyed ourselves in the sun and listened to music. Attracted by the beauty of nature, we took quite a lot of great photos, too.
How time flies! It was time for us to leave. I felt tired but happy.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时、情景写作
【点评】本题结合生活场景考查英语写作能力，要求学生整合给定信息并补充合理细节，既考查基础语法（一般过去时），又考查语言组织能力，贴近学生生活，易于上手。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先承接开头句，点明时间、同行人员、地点及交通方式（补充乘车耗时的细节）；接着描述天气情况，再依次叙述到达后的活动：搭帐篷、野餐、享受自然、拍照等，补充小细节让内容更生动；最后表达自己的感受，呼应主题。
【答案】One possible version:
Camping is a wonderful way to spend time in nature. Last Saturday, I went camping with my family in Greenway. It only took us about twenty minutes to get there by car. The weather was just fine and we enjoyed the blue sky, fresh air and sunshine. As soon as we arrived there, I helped my father put up the tent. It was a bit difficult. At noon, we had a picnic on the grassland. After that, we enjoyed ourselves in the sun and listened to music. Attracted by the beauty of nature, we took quite a lot of great photos, too.
How time flies! It was time for us to leave. I felt tired but happy.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时、情景写作
【点评】本题结合生活场景考查英语写作能力，要求学生整合给定信息并补充合理细节，既考查基础语法（一般过去时），又考查语言组织能力，贴近学生生活，易于上手。
【难度系数】0.5
