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十二、你认为王勇同学可以当选"校园最佳学生"。请根据思维提示,用英语为他写一段推荐文。(9分)
要求:语言正确无错误;语句连贯有条理;书写规范,正确使用标点。不少于5句话。
Hello, everyone! I'd like to recommend(推荐)Wang Yong for the Best Student Award(奖). Wang Yong is a good student at school.
要求:语言正确无错误;语句连贯有条理;书写规范,正确使用标点。不少于5句话。
Hello, everyone! I'd like to recommend(推荐)Wang Yong for the Best Student Award(奖). Wang Yong is a good student at school.
He has many good habits. He gets up early every day. He has a healthy diet. He eats a lot of fruit and vegetables. He also likes sports. He often plays basketball with his classmates. He always follows the traffic rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the road, he looks for a zebra crossing and follows the traffic lights. He likes reading. He goes to the library every week. Wang Yong is really a good student. I think he should get the award.
答案
参考范文:
Hello, everyone! I'd like to recommend
Wang Yong for the Best Student Award.
Wang Yong is a good student at school. He
has many good habits. He gets up early
every day. He has a healthy diet. He eats a
lot of fruit and vegetables. He also likes
sports. He often plays basketball with his
classmates. He always follows the traffic
rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the
road, he looks for a zebra crossing and
follows the traffic lights. He likes reading.
He goes to the library every week. Wang
Yong is really a good student. I think he
should get the award.
Hello, everyone! I'd like to recommend
Wang Yong for the Best Student Award.
Wang Yong is a good student at school. He
has many good habits. He gets up early
every day. He has a healthy diet. He eats a
lot of fruit and vegetables. He also likes
sports. He often plays basketball with his
classmates. He always follows the traffic
rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the
road, he looks for a zebra crossing and
follows the traffic lights. He likes reading.
He goes to the library every week. Wang
Yong is really a good student. I think he
should get the award.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：为王勇写英语推荐文，需结合思维导图给出的“Diet、Habits、Road safety、Hobbies、Sport”五个方面，语言正确连贯，不少于5句话。解题思路：承接开头后，围绕思维导图各要点补充具体事例，每个要点对应细节内容，最后总结推荐，确保语句连贯符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据思维导图提示，依次补充内容：1. 习惯：He has many good habits. He gets up early every day. 2. 饮食：He has a healthy diet. He eats a lot of fruit and vegetables. 3. 运动：He also likes sports. He often plays basketball with his classmates. 4. 道路安全：He always follows the traffic rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the road, he looks for a zebra crossing and follows the traffic lights. 5. 爱好：He likes reading. He goes to the library every week. 最后总结：Wang Yong is really a good student. I think he should get the award.
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'd like to recommend Wang Yong for the Best Student Award. Wang Yong is a good student at school. He has many good habits. He gets up early every day. He has a healthy diet. He eats a lot of fruit and vegetables. He also likes sports. He often plays basketball with his classmates. He always follows the traffic rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the road, he looks for a zebra crossing and follows the traffic lights. He likes reading. He goes to the library every week. Wang Yong is really a good student. I think he should get the award.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；主题词汇运用；语句连贯表达
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图的五个要点展开，内容全面具体，语言正确无错误，语句连贯有条理，符合推荐文的写作要求，清晰展现了王勇的优秀品质。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：为王勇写英语推荐文，需结合思维导图给出的“Diet、Habits、Road safety、Hobbies、Sport”五个方面，语言正确连贯，不少于5句话。解题思路：承接开头后，围绕思维导图各要点补充具体事例，每个要点对应细节内容，最后总结推荐，确保语句连贯符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据思维导图提示，依次补充内容：1. 习惯：He has many good habits. He gets up early every day. 2. 饮食：He has a healthy diet. He eats a lot of fruit and vegetables. 3. 运动：He also likes sports. He often plays basketball with his classmates. 4. 道路安全：He always follows the traffic rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the road, he looks for a zebra crossing and follows the traffic lights. 5. 爱好：He likes reading. He goes to the library every week. 最后总结：Wang Yong is really a good student. I think he should get the award.
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'd like to recommend Wang Yong for the Best Student Award. Wang Yong is a good student at school. He has many good habits. He gets up early every day. He has a healthy diet. He eats a lot of fruit and vegetables. He also likes sports. He often plays basketball with his classmates. He always follows the traffic rules to stay safe. Before he crosses the road, he looks for a zebra crossing and follows the traffic lights. He likes reading. He goes to the library every week. Wang Yong is really a good student. I think he should get the award.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；主题词汇运用；语句连贯表达
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图的五个要点展开，内容全面具体，语言正确无错误，语句连贯有条理，符合推荐文的写作要求，清晰展现了王勇的优秀品质。
【难度系数】
0.6
