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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本周,英语课学习围绕主题“Holiday”展开。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,分享你最难忘的假期经历。
Where did you go for the holiday?
What interesting things did you do there?
How did you feel during the whole holiday?
Write something more about your holiday.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
The most unforgettable holiday I've ever had was full of joy.
本周,英语课学习围绕主题“Holiday”展开。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,分享你最难忘的假期经历。
Where did you go for the holiday?
What interesting things did you do there?
How did you feel during the whole holiday?
Write something more about your holiday.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
The most unforgettable holiday I've ever had was full of joy.
答案
[参考范文]
The most unforgettable holiday I've ever had was full of joy. Last summer holiday, my friends and I hiked to a small village in the mountains. When we were there, we climbed the mountains and enjoyed the beautiful views of green trees and clear rivers. We also helped the farmers water crops and feed chickens. And we joined a local festival. We danced and had a lot of fun with the villagers. During the whole holiday, I felt so relaxed and happy. This holiday was a great chance for me to get away from the busy school life. It also made me know more about country life, and I will always remember it.
The most unforgettable holiday I've ever had was full of joy. Last summer holiday, my friends and I hiked to a small village in the mountains. When we were there, we climbed the mountains and enjoyed the beautiful views of green trees and clear rivers. We also helped the farmers water crops and feed chickens. And we joined a local festival. We danced and had a lot of fun with the villagers. During the whole holiday, I felt so relaxed and happy. This holiday was a great chance for me to get away from the busy school life. It also made me know more about country life, and I will always remember it.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“Holiday”主题分享最难忘的假期经历，需覆盖四个核心问题：假期去了哪里、做了哪些有趣的事、整体感受如何，还需补充更多相关内容，词数100左右，开头已给出，不得透露个人真实信息。解题思路为：先确定具体的假期场景（如和朋友去山村），再围绕核心问题组织内容，用合适的连接词衔接语句，控制词数，确保内容完整、情感真实。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确写作要求，必须包含题目给出的四个提示要点，词数符合要求，开头固定；
2. 选材：选择具体的假期经历（如去年暑假和朋友去山区小村）；
3. 内容组织：依次说明去的地点，列举具体活动（爬山赏景、帮农民劳作、参加当地节日），表达放松开心的感受，最后点明难忘的原因；
4. 语言运用：使用简单句和少量复合句，衔接自然，避免语法错误，不涉及个人真实信息。
【答案】
The most unforgettable holiday I've ever had was full of joy. Last summer holiday, my friends and I hiked to a small village in the mountains. When we were there, we climbed the mountains and enjoyed the beautiful views of green trees and clear rivers. We also helped the farmers water crops and feed chickens. And we joined a local festival. We danced and had a lot of fun with the villagers. During the whole holiday, I felt so relaxed and happy. This holiday was a great chance for me to get away from the busy school life. It also made me know more about country life, and I will always remember it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题写作，要点覆盖
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容具体充实，情感真挚自然，语言流畅，衔接合理，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“Holiday”主题分享最难忘的假期经历，需覆盖四个核心问题：假期去了哪里、做了哪些有趣的事、整体感受如何，还需补充更多相关内容，词数100左右，开头已给出，不得透露个人真实信息。解题思路为：先确定具体的假期场景（如和朋友去山村），再围绕核心问题组织内容，用合适的连接词衔接语句，控制词数，确保内容完整、情感真实。
【解析】
1. 审题：明确写作要求，必须包含题目给出的四个提示要点，词数符合要求，开头固定；
2. 选材：选择具体的假期经历（如去年暑假和朋友去山区小村）；
3. 内容组织：依次说明去的地点，列举具体活动（爬山赏景、帮农民劳作、参加当地节日），表达放松开心的感受，最后点明难忘的原因；
4. 语言运用：使用简单句和少量复合句，衔接自然，避免语法错误，不涉及个人真实信息。
【答案】
The most unforgettable holiday I've ever had was full of joy. Last summer holiday, my friends and I hiked to a small village in the mountains. When we were there, we climbed the mountains and enjoyed the beautiful views of green trees and clear rivers. We also helped the farmers water crops and feed chickens. And we joined a local festival. We danced and had a lot of fun with the villagers. During the whole holiday, I felt so relaxed and happy. This holiday was a great chance for me to get away from the busy school life. It also made me know more about country life, and I will always remember it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，话题写作，要点覆盖
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容具体充实，情感真挚自然，语言流畅，衔接合理，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
