二、提分素材积累·好句活学活用
• Rules are the soul of good order. 规则是良好秩序的灵魂。
• He who obeys rules walks safely. 守规则者方能行稳致远。
• Respect rules, and respect life. 敬畏规则,就是敬畏生命。
• Good rules lead to a better life. 良规相伴,方得美好生活。
• Good order is the foundation of all things. 良好的秩序是一切事物的基础。
• Nothing can be done without norms or standards. 不以规矩,不能成方圆。
三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:I covered my nose so as to reduce the smell coming from Mr Smelly Food.
仿写:为了占到好座位,我们早早就去了。
2. 教材原句:They aren't just on the wall but also in our minds and hearts.
仿写:画展不仅展示了学生的个性,还有他们的创造力。
3. 教材原句:To protect your online accounts, it's important to use a "strong and long" password.
仿写:为了保护我们的眼睛,限制屏幕使用时间很重要。
4. 教材原句:Instead, turn to your parents, teachers or other trusted adults for help.
仿写:必要的话,你可以向警察寻求帮助。
• Rules are the soul of good order. 规则是良好秩序的灵魂。
• He who obeys rules walks safely. 守规则者方能行稳致远。
• Respect rules, and respect life. 敬畏规则,就是敬畏生命。
• Good rules lead to a better life. 良规相伴,方得美好生活。
• Good order is the foundation of all things. 良好的秩序是一切事物的基础。
• Nothing can be done without norms or standards. 不以规矩,不能成方圆。
三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:I covered my nose so as to reduce the smell coming from Mr Smelly Food.
仿写:为了占到好座位,我们早早就去了。
We went early so as to get good seats.
2. 教材原句:They aren't just on the wall but also in our minds and hearts.
仿写:画展不仅展示了学生的个性,还有他们的创造力。
The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity.
3. 教材原句:To protect your online accounts, it's important to use a "strong and long" password.
仿写:为了保护我们的眼睛,限制屏幕使用时间很重要。
To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time.
4. 教材原句:Instead, turn to your parents, teachers or other trusted adults for help.
仿写:必要的话,你可以向警察寻求帮助。
You can turn to the police for help, if necessary.
答案
1. We went early so as to get good seats.
2. The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity.
3. To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time.
4. You can turn to the police for help, if necessary.
2. The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity.
3. To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time.
4. You can turn to the police for help, if necessary.
解析
【分析】
解题思路:首先明确每个仿写题对应的教材原句核心句式,将中文句子拆解为符合英语表达习惯的成分,再对应原句的语法结构(如目的状语结构、并列结构、固定句型等),选择合适的词汇和短语进行翻译组合,确保句式匹配、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 本题考查so as to引导目的状语的用法:中文“为了占到好座位”对应so as to get good seats,“我们早早就去了”译为We went early,组合后为We went early so as to get good seats。
2. 本题考查not just...but also...连接并列成分的用法:中文“画展”译为The art exhibition,“展示”用过去式showed,“学生的个性”是the students' personality,“他们的创造力”是their creativity,组合后为The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity。
3. 本题考查“To...it's important to do sth”的固定结构:中文“为了保护我们的眼睛”译为To protect our eyes,“限制屏幕使用时间很重要”译为it's important to limit screen time,组合后为To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time。
4. 本题考查turn to sb for help及if necessary的用法:中文“你可以向警察寻求帮助”译为You can turn to the police for help,“必要的话”译为if necessary,组合后为You can turn to the police for help, if necessary。
【答案】
1. We went early so as to get good seats.
2. The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity.
3. To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time.
4. You can turn to the police for help, if necessary.
【知识点】
英语句式仿写、常用英语句型运用
【点评】
本题聚焦教材核心句式的仿写训练,帮助学生巩固重点句型,提升英语实际运用能力,是基础英语学习的典型练习方式。
【难度系数】
0.7
解题思路:首先明确每个仿写题对应的教材原句核心句式,将中文句子拆解为符合英语表达习惯的成分,再对应原句的语法结构(如目的状语结构、并列结构、固定句型等),选择合适的词汇和短语进行翻译组合,确保句式匹配、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 本题考查so as to引导目的状语的用法:中文“为了占到好座位”对应so as to get good seats,“我们早早就去了”译为We went early,组合后为We went early so as to get good seats。
2. 本题考查not just...but also...连接并列成分的用法:中文“画展”译为The art exhibition,“展示”用过去式showed,“学生的个性”是the students' personality,“他们的创造力”是their creativity,组合后为The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity。
3. 本题考查“To...it's important to do sth”的固定结构:中文“为了保护我们的眼睛”译为To protect our eyes,“限制屏幕使用时间很重要”译为it's important to limit screen time,组合后为To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time。
4. 本题考查turn to sb for help及if necessary的用法:中文“你可以向警察寻求帮助”译为You can turn to the police for help,“必要的话”译为if necessary,组合后为You can turn to the police for help, if necessary。
【答案】
1. We went early so as to get good seats.
2. The art exhibition showed not just the students' personality, but also their creativity.
3. To protect our eyes, it's important to limit screen time.
4. You can turn to the police for help, if necessary.
【知识点】
英语句式仿写、常用英语句型运用
【点评】
本题聚焦教材核心句式的仿写训练,帮助学生巩固重点句型,提升英语实际运用能力,是基础英语学习的典型练习方式。
【难度系数】
0.7
四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
校园安全问题越来越受到重视,为了确保学生的安全,学校制定了一些规则。假设你是校学生会的李华,请你根据以下提示内容,以“School Safety”为题,写一篇短文向校英语报投稿,让更多的同学了解它们。
语篇类型:应用文
时态:一般现在时 人称:以第一、三人称为主
提示:
1.遵守校规,不迟到、不早退;
2.不和陌生人一起走,不接受陌生人的物品;
3.上学或放学最好结伴而行,天黑前一定要回家;
4.有麻烦及时告诉家长和老师。
要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息;
3.词数100左右。
School Safety
Step 1 谋篇布局指导

Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. We shouldn't go with strangers.(用 stay away from 升格)
2. It's important to follow these rules.(补充遵守规则的意义/目的)
Step 3 佳作展示评析
School Safety
More and more people pay special attention to school safety nowadays. Here are some rules our school set to keep us safe.
First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school or leaving school early. Second, we should stay away from strangers and we'd better not accept things from them. Third, it's better for us to have partners on the way home or to school. And we must get home before dark. Finally, if we are in trouble, remember to tell our parents or teachers in time. They will face it with you.
In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
校园安全问题越来越受到重视,为了确保学生的安全,学校制定了一些规则。假设你是校学生会的李华,请你根据以下提示内容,以“School Safety”为题,写一篇短文向校英语报投稿,让更多的同学了解它们。
语篇类型:应用文
时态:一般现在时 人称:以第一、三人称为主
提示:
1.遵守校规,不迟到、不早退;
2.不和陌生人一起走,不接受陌生人的物品;
3.上学或放学最好结伴而行,天黑前一定要回家;
4.有麻烦及时告诉家长和老师。
要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息;
3.词数100左右。
School Safety
Step 1 谋篇布局指导
Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. We shouldn't go with strangers.(用 stay away from 升格)
We should stay away from strangers.
2. It's important to follow these rules.(补充遵守规则的意义/目的)
In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
Step 3 佳作展示评析
School Safety
More and more people pay special attention to school safety nowadays. Here are some rules our school set to keep us safe.
First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school or leaving school early. Second, we should stay away from strangers and we'd better not accept things from them. Third, it's better for us to have partners on the way home or to school. And we must get home before dark. Finally, if we are in trouble, remember to tell our parents or teachers in time. They will face it with you.
In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
答案
1. We should stay away from strangers.
2. In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
2. In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题,要求以“School Safety”为题,根据给定的校园安全规则提示完成短文写作。解题思路:首先按照给定的结构(开头引出话题、主体分点介绍规则、结尾总结呼吁)谋篇布局;其次将基础表达用高阶词汇(如stay away from)升格;最后确保覆盖所有提示信息,时态用一般现在时,人称以第一、第三人称为主,词数符合要求,无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定语篇为应用文(校报投稿),时态用一般现在时;
2. 开头用引出话题的句子(如More and more people pay special attention to school safety nowadays.);
3. 主体部分依次覆盖提示:①遵守校规(不迟到、不早退);②用stay away from升格表达“不和陌生人一起走”,即We should stay away from strangers;③说明结伴上下学、天黑前回家;④有麻烦及时告知家长老师;
4. 结尾用补充意义的句子(In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.)总结,确保行文连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
1. We should stay away from strangers. 2. In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题写作、高阶表达运用
【点评】
本题围绕校园安全主题考查英语写作能力,要求学生结合提示完成短文,既考查对校园安全规则的认知,又考查写作的谋篇布局和语言优化能力,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语主题写作题,要求以“School Safety”为题,根据给定的校园安全规则提示完成短文写作。解题思路:首先按照给定的结构(开头引出话题、主体分点介绍规则、结尾总结呼吁)谋篇布局;其次将基础表达用高阶词汇(如stay away from)升格;最后确保覆盖所有提示信息,时态用一般现在时,人称以第一、第三人称为主,词数符合要求,无真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定语篇为应用文(校报投稿),时态用一般现在时;
2. 开头用引出话题的句子(如More and more people pay special attention to school safety nowadays.);
3. 主体部分依次覆盖提示:①遵守校规(不迟到、不早退);②用stay away from升格表达“不和陌生人一起走”,即We should stay away from strangers;③说明结伴上下学、天黑前回家;④有麻烦及时告知家长老师;
4. 结尾用补充意义的句子(In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.)总结,确保行文连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
1. We should stay away from strangers. 2. In order to make our school enjoyable, it's important to follow these rules.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题写作、高阶表达运用
【点评】
本题围绕校园安全主题考查英语写作能力,要求学生结合提示完成短文,既考查对校园安全规则的认知,又考查写作的谋篇布局和语言优化能力,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
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