五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
［2025汕头潮南区司马浦中学期中改编］英国某学校制定了一条新校规，规定学生在校必须穿校服。与此同时，学校也开设了意见箱，就此校规向学生征求意见与建议。假如你是该校来自中国的交换生李华，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一封英文意见信，放进学校的意见箱。

写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
2. 语句连贯，词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：personality 个性；standard 标准
Dear school leaders,
I'm an exchange student from China. I'm writing to express my opinion on our new school rule.







I would be very glad and thankful if you could carefully consider my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua

Dear school leaders,
I'm an exchange student from China. I'm writing to express my opinion on our new school rule.
I must say that I disagree with the rule of wearing uniforms at school. Though I completely understand the need behind it, I still think we students should be allowed to choose what to wear for the following two reasons.
One is that students can better show their personality and express what they like or dislike through different clothes. This allows them to study more comfortably. The other is that being free to choose their clothing encourages creativity. It is quite possible for students to learn how to be more creative from their choices of clothes.
So I suggest that we carry out a proper dressing rule which lets students wear what they like and makes sure of proper dressing at the same time.
I would be very glad and thankful if you could carefully consider my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
本题是针对学校校规的英文意见信写作题，主题属于学校生活类。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：以交换生李华的身份，针对“在校必须穿校服”的校规表达意见，需包含表明态度、阐述理由、提出建议三部分；2. 确定语篇类型为应用文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一、第三人称为主；3. 态度选择不赞同，理由围绕“展现个性”“培养创造力”展开，建议提出兼顾自主选择与着装规范的合理规则，同时满足词数要求，语句连贯。
【解析】
按照写作要点分步完成：1. 表明态度：明确表达不赞同穿校服的校规，说明理解学校初衷但仍有异议；2. 详述理由：从两个角度展开，一是穿校服限制学生展现个性，影响学习舒适感；二是不利于培养学生的创造力；3. 提出建议：制定合理的着装规则，既允许学生自主选择着装，又保证着装规范；4. 注意词数控制在100左右，语句连贯，符合应用文格式，不出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【答案】

Dear school leaders,
I'm an exchange student from China. I'm writing to express my opinion on our new school rule.
I must say that I disagree with the rule of wearing uniforms at school. Though I completely understand the need behind it, I still think we students should be allowed to choose what to wear for the following two reasons.
One is that students can better show their personality and express what they like or dislike through different clothes. This allows them to study more comfortably. The other is that being free to choose their clothing encourages creativity. It is quite possible for students to learn how to be more creative from their choices of clothes.
So I suggest that we carry out a proper dressing rule which lets students wear what they like and makes sure of proper dressing at the same time.
I would be very glad and thankful if you could carefully consider my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；学校生活话题
【点评】
本题考查学生针对学校生活话题的英文意见信写作能力，要求观点明确、理由充分、建议合理，符合应用文的格式与语域，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6