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假如你是Millie,在Sunny School学习,准备给表妹Sandy介绍自己学校的情况并希望她来参观,请根据以下要点写一封70词左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)的信。
要点:1. 坐落在山脚下(at the foot of),安静,漂亮。
2. 是个学习的好地方,数千学生在这儿学习。
3. 课后可以去操场做运动,去图书馆借各种各样的书。
4. 每天有公交车到市中心(city centre),乘地铁(by underground)到这儿大概20分钟。
5. 我希望……(1~2句作适当发挥)
【写作指导】
本文属于提纲作文写作,根据要求提示可知:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 文章开头结尾已给出,不用考虑文体格式。写作时,注意承接上下文,符合逻辑,富有条理。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
Dear Sandy,
I study at Sunny School. I'd like to tell you something about my school.
Best wishes!
Millie
要点:1. 坐落在山脚下(at the foot of),安静,漂亮。
2. 是个学习的好地方,数千学生在这儿学习。
3. 课后可以去操场做运动,去图书馆借各种各样的书。
4. 每天有公交车到市中心(city centre),乘地铁(by underground)到这儿大概20分钟。
5. 我希望……(1~2句作适当发挥)
【写作指导】
本文属于提纲作文写作,根据要求提示可知:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 文章开头结尾已给出,不用考虑文体格式。写作时,注意承接上下文,符合逻辑,富有条理。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
Dear Sandy,
I study at Sunny School. I'd like to tell you something about my school.
My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful. It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here. After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library. There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.
I hope you can come to visit my school.
Best wishes!
Millie
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sandy:
I study at Sunny School. I'd like to tell you something about my school.
My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful. It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here. After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library. There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.
I hope you can come to visit my school.
Best wishes
Millie
Dear Sandy:
I study at Sunny School. I'd like to tell you something about my school.
My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful. It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here. After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library. There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.
I hope you can come to visit my school.
Best wishes
Millie
解析
【分析】
本题为英语提纲作文，要求以Millie的身份给表妹Sandy写介绍学校的信，需使用第一人称、一般现在时。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，依次补充学校的位置与特点（山脚下、安静漂亮）、学习环境（数千学生、适合学习）、课后活动（操场运动、图书馆借书）、交通情况（公交到市中心、地铁20分钟），最后呼应已给结尾，表达希望对方参观的愿望，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】
写作时，沿用已给开头后，按要点依次组织语句：1. 位置与特点：My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful.；2. 学习环境：It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here.；3. 课后活动：After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library.；4. 交通：There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.；最后使用已给结尾，保证所有要点齐全，语句连贯，时态正确。
【答案】
Dear Sandy:
I study at Sunny School. I'd like to tell you something about my school.
My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful. It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here. After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library. There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.
I hope you can come to visit my school.
Best wishes
Millie
【知识点】
英语提纲作文、英语书信写作、英语句式运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循提纲要求，覆盖所有指定要点，人称、时态使用准确，语句通顺自然，符合书信格式，是一篇合格的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语提纲作文，要求以Millie的身份给表妹Sandy写介绍学校的信，需使用第一人称、一般现在时。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，依次补充学校的位置与特点（山脚下、安静漂亮）、学习环境（数千学生、适合学习）、课后活动（操场运动、图书馆借书）、交通情况（公交到市中心、地铁20分钟），最后呼应已给结尾，表达希望对方参观的愿望，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】
写作时，沿用已给开头后，按要点依次组织语句：1. 位置与特点：My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful.；2. 学习环境：It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here.；3. 课后活动：After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library.；4. 交通：There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.；最后使用已给结尾，保证所有要点齐全，语句连贯，时态正确。
【答案】
Dear Sandy:
I study at Sunny School. I'd like to tell you something about my school.
My school is at the foot of a hill. It's quiet and beautiful. It is a good place to study. Thousands of students study here. After class, we can do sports in the playground, and we can borrow all kinds of books from the library. There are buses to the city centre every day. It takes about 20 minutes to get here by underground.
I hope you can come to visit my school.
Best wishes
Millie
【知识点】
英语提纲作文、英语书信写作、英语句式运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循提纲要求，覆盖所有指定要点，人称、时态使用准确，语句通顺自然，符合书信格式，是一篇合格的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
