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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D28
假如你是李华,你的朋友 Mike 即将转入你校学习,他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息,用英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你校社团并推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示问题:1.What clubs does your school have?
2.What club did you join?
3.Why do you recommend the club?
注意:1.邮件中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.词数不少于 80。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的朋友 Mike 即将转入你校学习,他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息,用英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你校社团并推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示问题:1.What clubs does your school have?
2.What club did you join?
3.Why do you recommend the club?
注意:1.邮件中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
2.须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.词数不少于 80。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school.
This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term.
We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club.
If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it.
I hope to see you at the club.
We have some different clubs, such as the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. As a basketball lover, I joined the Basketball Club after I entered the school.
This club provides a platform for us students to improve our basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we not only have professional training there, but also develop organization abilities, which are beneficial to my personal growth. Since you like playing basketball too, I highly recommend you to join it. I'm looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school. This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term. We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club. If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it.
I hope to see you at the club.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have some different clubs, such as the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. As a basketball lover, I joined the Basketball Club after I entered the school. This club provides a platform for us students to improve our basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we not only have professional training there, but also develop organization abilities, which are beneficial to my personal growth. Since you like playing basketball too, I highly recommend you to join it.
I'm looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school. This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term. We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club. If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it.
I hope to see you at the club.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have some different clubs, such as the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. As a basketball lover, I joined the Basketball Club after I entered the school. This club provides a platform for us students to improve our basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we not only have professional training there, but also develop organization abilities, which are beneficial to my personal growth. Since you like playing basketball too, I highly recommend you to join it.
I'm looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给Mike写一封电子邮件，核心是介绍学校社团并推荐自己参加过的社团。解题思路如下：1. 承接已给开头，先列举学校的社团类型（如篮球社、阅读社）；2. 说明自己加入的社团（结合自身兴趣选择篮球社）；3. 从技能提升、身体锻炼、能力培养等方面阐述推荐理由；4. 结尾表达期待对方加入的心情，确保邮件符合格式、涵盖所有提示要点，词数达标。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍学校社团：We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club.
2. 说明自己加入的社团及原因：I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school.
3. 阐述推荐理由：This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term. We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club.
4. 结尾表达期待：If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it. I hope to see you at the club.
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school. This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term. We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club. If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it.
I hope to see you at the club.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、社团话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园社团话题考查电子邮件写作，要求涵盖提示要点，注重内容连贯性和语言得体性，是常见的英语写作练习题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给Mike写一封电子邮件，核心是介绍学校社团并推荐自己参加过的社团。解题思路如下：1. 承接已给开头，先列举学校的社团类型（如篮球社、阅读社）；2. 说明自己加入的社团（结合自身兴趣选择篮球社）；3. 从技能提升、身体锻炼、能力培养等方面阐述推荐理由；4. 结尾表达期待对方加入的心情，确保邮件符合格式、涵盖所有提示要点，词数达标。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍学校社团：We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club.
2. 说明自己加入的社团及原因：I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school.
3. 阐述推荐理由：This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term. We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club.
4. 结尾表达期待：If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it. I hope to see you at the club.
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school! I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. Let me tell you something about them.
We have different clubs, like the Basketball Club and the Reading Club. I love basketball, so I joined the Basketball Club when I came to school. This club helps us students get better at basketball and stay fit. There are lots of matches each term. We get trained and learn to organize things. We can learn a lot in this club. If you also like basketball, I really suggest you join it.
I hope to see you at the club.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、社团话题写作
【点评】
本题围绕校园社团话题考查电子邮件写作，要求涵盖提示要点，注重内容连贯性和语言得体性，是常见的英语写作练习题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
