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Period 8 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
My role model
Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the "Father of China's Nuclear Submarines". I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, "I'm willing to be silent for the country's future." His words show his deep love for our nation.
From him, I've learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country's needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.
One possible version:
My role model
Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the "Father of China's Nuclear Submarines". I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, "I'm willing to be silent for the country's future." His words show his deep love for our nation.
From him, I've learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country's needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语单元主题写作题，主题为“My role model”。解题思路：首先确定具有正能量的榜样人物（如参考答案中的黄旭华）；接着采用“总-分-总”结构，开篇点明榜样身份，中间结合具体事迹阐述敬佩原因，结尾说明从榜样身上学到的品质及对自身的影响；最后确保语言流畅，符合英语写作规范，结合自身感悟升华主题。
【解析】
按照写作思路，步骤如下：1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己的榜样是“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华；2. 中间部分：列举黄旭华的典型事迹（30年秘密工作、克服技术难题、爱国名言），阐述敬佩的原因；3. 结尾部分：总结从他身上学到的两点品质（勇敢面对挑战、以国家利益为重），联系自身学习实际，体现榜样的激励作用。
【答案】
My role model
Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the "Father of China's Nuclear Submarines". I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, "I'm willing to be silent for the country's future." His words show his deep love for our nation.
From him, I've learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country's needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.
【知识点】
英语单元主题写作、人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，选取具有正能量的榜样人物，结合具体事迹和自身感悟，语言表达流畅，符合单元主题写作要求，能体现榜样精神对自身的激励作用。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语单元主题写作题，主题为“My role model”。解题思路：首先确定具有正能量的榜样人物（如参考答案中的黄旭华）；接着采用“总-分-总”结构，开篇点明榜样身份，中间结合具体事迹阐述敬佩原因，结尾说明从榜样身上学到的品质及对自身的影响；最后确保语言流畅，符合英语写作规范，结合自身感悟升华主题。
【解析】
按照写作思路，步骤如下：1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己的榜样是“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华；2. 中间部分：列举黄旭华的典型事迹（30年秘密工作、克服技术难题、爱国名言），阐述敬佩的原因；3. 结尾部分：总结从他身上学到的两点品质（勇敢面对挑战、以国家利益为重），联系自身学习实际，体现榜样的激励作用。
【答案】
My role model
Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the "Father of China's Nuclear Submarines". I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, "I'm willing to be silent for the country's future." His words show his deep love for our nation.
From him, I've learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country's needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.
【知识点】
英语单元主题写作、人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，选取具有正能量的榜样人物，结合具体事迹和自身感悟，语言表达流畅，符合单元主题写作要求，能体现榜样精神对自身的激励作用。
【难度系数】
0.6
