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[2025江苏南京期末]假如你是王华，上个月刚搬进新家，你的美国笔友Tom来信表示祝贺，你回信表示感谢，并介绍小区情况，邀请他今年暑假来玩。小区情况需要包括下面内容。
My new neighbourhood
Location: in the centre of the town Facilities (场所;设施): a supermarket; restaurants...
Environment: green trees; fresh air Neighbours: kind and helpful
Feelings: happy, lucky
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 包括所有要点,并适当发挥,80词左右;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter. Thanks for your congratulations. Now let me tell you something about my new neighbourhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday. I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
[2025江苏南京期末]假如你是王华，上个月刚搬进新家，你的美国笔友Tom来信表示祝贺，你回信表示感谢，并介绍小区情况，邀请他今年暑假来玩。小区情况需要包括下面内容。
My new neighbourhood
Location: in the centre of the town Facilities (场所;设施): a supermarket; restaurants...
Environment: green trees; fresh air Neighbours: kind and helpful
Feelings: happy, lucky
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 包括所有要点,并适当发挥,80词左右;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter. Thanks for your congratulations. Now let me tell you something about my new neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is in the centre of the town which is not far away from Nanjing. It is not big, but very nice. Around my neighbourhood, there are many facilities, such as a supermarket, some restaurants and a gym. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. The air is fresh too. My neighbours are all kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They have different skills and often help others. I feel so happy and lucky to live in such a good neighbourhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday. I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
答案
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Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter. Thanks for your congratulations. Now let me tell you something about my new neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is in the centre of the town which is not far away from Nanjing. It is not big, but very nice. Around my neighbourhood, there are many facilities, such as a supermarket, some restaurants and a gym. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. The air is fresh too.
My neighbours are all kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They have different skills and often help others. I feel so happy and lucky to live in such a good neighbourhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday. I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter. Thanks for your congratulations. Now let me tell you something about my new neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is in the centre of the town which is not far away from Nanjing. It is not big, but very nice. Around my neighbourhood, there are many facilities, such as a supermarket, some restaurants and a gym. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. The air is fresh too.
My neighbours are all kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They have different skills and often help others. I feel so happy and lucky to live in such a good neighbourhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday. I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以王华的身份给美国笔友Tom写回信，需覆盖所有指定要点：小区位置（镇中心）、设施（超市、餐馆等）、环境（绿树、新鲜空气）、邻居（友善热心）、感受（开心幸运），并邀请Tom暑假来访。写作时需衔接开头，分层次介绍小区，语句通顺，符合书信格式，控制在80词左右。
【解析】首先承接开头，介绍小区位于镇中心且离南京不远；接着说明周边设施（超市、餐馆、健身房）；再描述环境（绿树、鲜花遍布，空气新鲜）；然后介绍邻居（友善热心，有志愿者）；最后表达居住感受（开心幸运），并发出暑假邀请，确保所有要点完整，语句连贯自然。
【答案】Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter. Thanks for your congratulations. Now let me tell you something about my new neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is in the centre of the town which is not far away from Nanjing. It is not big, but very nice. Around my neighbourhood, there are many facilities, such as a supermarket, some restaurants and a gym. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. The air is fresh too.
My neighbours are all kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They have different skills and often help others. I feel so happy and lucky to live in such a good neighbourhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday. I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】本题考查初中学生的英语综合写作能力，要求整合给定信息并适当拓展，符合书信格式规范，是期末常见的书面表达题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头，介绍小区位于镇中心且离南京不远；接着说明周边设施（超市、餐馆、健身房）；再描述环境（绿树、鲜花遍布，空气新鲜）；然后介绍邻居（友善热心，有志愿者）；最后表达居住感受（开心幸运），并发出暑假邀请，确保所有要点完整，语句连贯自然。
【答案】Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter. Thanks for your congratulations. Now let me tell you something about my new neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is in the centre of the town which is not far away from Nanjing. It is not big, but very nice. Around my neighbourhood, there are many facilities, such as a supermarket, some restaurants and a gym. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. The air is fresh too.
My neighbours are all kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They have different skills and often help others. I feel so happy and lucky to live in such a good neighbourhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday. I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】本题考查初中学生的英语综合写作能力，要求整合给定信息并适当拓展，符合书信格式规范，是期末常见的书面表达题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
