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Ⅵ. 写作指导
运动员的奋斗精神常常激励着我们。请你以“我最敬佩的运动员”为题写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一位你最敬佩的运动员。
提示：
（1）Who is the athlete you admire? What sport does he/she compete in?
（2）What are his/her major achievements or experiences?
（3）Why do you admire him/her?
要求：
（1）短文须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）词数80个左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
运动员的奋斗精神常常激励着我们。请你以“我最敬佩的运动员”为题写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一位你最敬佩的运动员。
提示：
（1）Who is the athlete you admire? What sport does he/she compete in?
（2）What are his/her major achievements or experiences?
（3）Why do you admire him/her?
要求：
（1）短文须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）词数80个左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
答案
My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
解析
【分析】
本题为英文话题写作题，要求围绕“我最敬佩的运动员”写短文，需覆盖三个提示点：①明确敬佩的运动员身份及参赛项目；②介绍其主要经历或成就；③说明敬佩的原因。写作时需控制词数80左右，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名，要突出运动员的奋斗精神。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇直接点明最敬佩的运动员，说明其所属项目及参赛赛事；2. 介绍运动员的关键经历：赛前训练时间短，比赛中遇困难仍坚持完成，后续取得进步并成为教练；3. 阐述敬佩的原因，点明其精神对自己的启发，确保短文涵盖所有提示内容，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
【知识点】
英文话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
该短文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，词数符合要求，通过具体事例展现运动员永不放弃的奋斗精神，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英文话题写作题，要求围绕“我最敬佩的运动员”写短文，需覆盖三个提示点：①明确敬佩的运动员身份及参赛项目；②介绍其主要经历或成就；③说明敬佩的原因。写作时需控制词数80左右，不得出现真实人名、校名、地名，要突出运动员的奋斗精神。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇直接点明最敬佩的运动员，说明其所属项目及参赛赛事；2. 介绍运动员的关键经历：赛前训练时间短，比赛中遇困难仍坚持完成，后续取得进步并成为教练；3. 阐述敬佩的原因，点明其精神对自己的启发，确保短文涵盖所有提示内容，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
【知识点】
英文话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
该短文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示内容，词数符合要求，通过具体事例展现运动员永不放弃的奋斗精神，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
