一、审清题
1. 体裁:人物介绍类短文。
2. 人称:以
3. 时态:
4. 要点:
(1)运动员的基本信息(姓名、运动项目等);
(2)运动员的主要成就或经历(比赛成绩、拼搏故事等);
(3)敬佩的原因(精神品质、对“我”的影响)。
二、构框架
1. 开头:介绍你敬佩的运动员是谁,他/她从事什么运动项目。
2. 主体:
(1)成就/经历:他/她取得了哪些成绩或经历了哪些困难?
(2)敬佩原因:他/她展现了什么样的精神?对你有什么影响?
3. 结尾:表达你对他/她的敬佩之情,并总结你的收获。
1. 体裁:人物介绍类短文。
2. 人称:以
第三人称
为主。3. 时态:
一般现在时
(介绍人物、表达敬佩);一般过去时
(描述过去经历或成就)。4. 要点:
(1)运动员的基本信息(姓名、运动项目等);
(2)运动员的主要成就或经历(比赛成绩、拼搏故事等);
(3)敬佩的原因(精神品质、对“我”的影响)。
二、构框架
1. 开头:介绍你敬佩的运动员是谁,他/她从事什么运动项目。
2. 主体:
(1)成就/经历:他/她取得了哪些成绩或经历了哪些困难?
(2)敬佩原因:他/她展现了什么样的精神?对你有什么影响?
3. 结尾:表达你对他/她的敬佩之情,并总结你的收获。
答案
2. 第三人称
3. 一般现在时;一般过去时
3. 一般现在时;一般过去时
解析
【分析】本题考查人物介绍类短文的写作基础要素,需明确此类文体的人称和时态使用规则:人物介绍的对象是他人,通常以第三人称叙述;介绍人物的基本情况、常规属性用一般现在时,描述过去的经历、成就等已发生的事件用一般过去时,据此完成填空。
【解析】人物介绍类短文的叙述主体是他人,因此人称以第三人称为主;介绍人物的基本信息、运动项目等常规内容时,使用一般现在时;描述过去的比赛成绩、拼搏经历等已完成的事件时,使用一般过去时,故填空内容依次为第三人称、一般现在时、一般过去时。
【答案】2. 第三人称;3. 一般现在时;一般过去时
【知识点】英语写作基础;时态运用;人称代词
【点评】本题聚焦人物介绍类短文的写作核心基础,是英语写作的入门考点,需掌握此类文体的人称与时态搭配规则。
【难度系数】0.2
【解析】人物介绍类短文的叙述主体是他人,因此人称以第三人称为主;介绍人物的基本信息、运动项目等常规内容时,使用一般现在时;描述过去的比赛成绩、拼搏经历等已完成的事件时,使用一般过去时,故填空内容依次为第三人称、一般现在时、一般过去时。
【答案】2. 第三人称;3. 一般现在时;一般过去时
【知识点】英语写作基础;时态运用;人称代词
【点评】本题聚焦人物介绍类短文的写作核心基础,是英语写作的入门考点,需掌握此类文体的人称与时态搭配规则。
【难度系数】0.2
三、润语言
1. 常用短语。
be born in ... 出生于……
be known for ... 因……而出名
train hard 刻苦训练
achieve great success 取得巨大成功
be admired for ... 因……而受到敬佩
inspire me to do ... 激励我去做……
2. 高分句型。
(1)开头:
The athlete I admire most is ...
我最敬佩的运动员是……
... is one of the greatest athletes I have ever known.
……是我认识的最伟大的运动员之一。
(2)主体:
He/She competed in ... and achieved ...
他/她参加了……并取得了……
What makes him/her admirable is that ...
让人敬佩的是……
Although he/she faced many difficulties, he/she never gave up.
尽管遇到了很多困难,他/她从未放弃。
His/Her story teaches me that hard work and determination matter a lot.
他/她的故事教会我努力和决心非常重要。
(3)结尾:
I really admire him/her because he/she sets a good example for me.
我真的很敬佩他/她,因为他/她为我树立了好榜样。
I hope I can learn from him/her and become a better person.
我希望向他/她学习,成为一个更好的人。
※根据以上指导写作短文。
1. 常用短语。
one of my favourite athletes
我最喜欢的运动员之一compete in
参加……比赛be born in ... 出生于……
be known for ... 因……而出名
never give up
永不放弃train hard 刻苦训练
achieve great success 取得巨大成功
be admired for ... 因……而受到敬佩
inspire me to do ... 激励我去做……
set a good example for
为……树立了好榜样2. 高分句型。
(1)开头:
The athlete I admire most is ...
我最敬佩的运动员是……
... is one of the greatest athletes I have ever known.
……是我认识的最伟大的运动员之一。
(2)主体:
He/She competed in ... and achieved ...
他/她参加了……并取得了……
What makes him/her admirable is that ...
让人敬佩的是……
Although he/she faced many difficulties, he/she never gave up.
尽管遇到了很多困难,他/她从未放弃。
His/Her story teaches me that hard work and determination matter a lot.
他/她的故事教会我努力和决心非常重要。
(3)结尾:
I really admire him/her because he/she sets a good example for me.
我真的很敬佩他/她,因为他/她为我树立了好榜样。
I hope I can learn from him/her and become a better person.
我希望向他/她学习,成为一个更好的人。
※根据以上指导写作短文。
答案
1. one of my favourite athletes
2. compete in
3. never give up
4. set a good example for
范文:
My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
2. compete in
3. never give up
4. set a good example for
范文:
My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
解析
【分析】本题分为常用短语填空和话题写作两部分。短语部分需根据中文意思匹配对应的英语固定短语,注意短语的正确形式;写作部分需结合题目给出的高分句型,围绕“敬佩的运动员”这一主题,运用提供的短语组织内容,确保符合英语表达逻辑和要求。
【解析】1. 常用短语填空:“我最喜欢的运动员之一”对应固定短语one of my favourite athletes;“参加……比赛”对应短语compete in;“永不放弃”对应短语never give up;“为……树立了好榜样”对应短语set a good example for。2. 写作部分:先确定敬佩的运动员,再用开头句型引出人物,主体部分运用给定句型描述其参赛经历、面对的困难及永不放弃的精神,结尾表达敬佩之情并点明学习道理,确保内容连贯贴合主题。
【答案】短语:one of my favourite athletes;compete in;never give up;set a good example for
范文:My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
【知识点】英语固定短语搭配;英语话题写作;英语常用句型运用
【点评】本题既考查基础英语短语的掌握,又考查话题写作能力,通过提供的句型和短语降低了写作难度,有助于学生巩固相关知识,提升英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 常用短语填空:“我最喜欢的运动员之一”对应固定短语one of my favourite athletes;“参加……比赛”对应短语compete in;“永不放弃”对应短语never give up;“为……树立了好榜样”对应短语set a good example for。2. 写作部分:先确定敬佩的运动员,再用开头句型引出人物,主体部分运用给定句型描述其参赛经历、面对的困难及永不放弃的精神,结尾表达敬佩之情并点明学习道理,确保内容连贯贴合主题。
【答案】短语:one of my favourite athletes;compete in;never give up;set a good example for
范文:My Most Admired Athlete — Eric Moussambani
The athlete I admire most is Eric Moussambani, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea. He competed in the 100-metre freestyle at the 2000 Sydney Olympics.
He started swimming only eight months before the Games. During his race, he almost drowned in the last 15 metres. However, he didn't give up and finished the race, winning loud cheers from the crowd. Later, he improved his time from 1 minute 52 seconds to under 57 seconds and became the coach of the national swimming team.
I admire him not because he always wins, but because he never gives up, no matter how hard it is. His story teaches me to be brave when facing difficulties.
【知识点】英语固定短语搭配;英语话题写作;英语常用句型运用
【点评】本题既考查基础英语短语的掌握,又考查话题写作能力,通过提供的句型和短语降低了写作难度,有助于学生巩固相关知识,提升英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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