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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D26
「2026浙江金华东阳期末」
动物需要人类的守护，人类也渴望它们的陪伴。假如你是李华，学校英语社团特举办以“动物与我”为主题的征文活动。请按以下提示介绍一种你最熟悉的动物。
要求:1.文中须包含以上所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The
I’d like to introduce the animal I know best—the
「2026浙江金华东阳期末」
动物需要人类的守护，人类也渴望它们的陪伴。假如你是李华，学校英语社团特举办以“动物与我”为主题的征文活动。请按以下提示介绍一种你最熟悉的动物。
要求:1.文中须包含以上所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The
Dog
and MeI’d like to introduce the animal I know best—the
dog
and share our special time together.My dog's name is Lucky. He has brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small and cozy basket next to my bed.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. After school, I play with him and look after him. He always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is not only my pet but also my best friend and helper. I love him very much because he makes my life full of joy.
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
The Dog and Me
I'd like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together.
My dog's name is Lucky. He has brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small and cozy basket next to my bed.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. After school, I play with him and look after him. He always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is my pet. He is also my best friend and helper. My life is full of joy because of him.
＞ 进阶版范文
The Dog and Me
I'd like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together.
My dog is named Lucky. He is a cute dog with brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small basket. I put his basket by my bed so that he can stay with me all the time.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. He always looks happy when he goes out with me. After school, I spend much time playing with him and looking after him. He loves me so much that he always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is not only my pet but also my best friend and helper. I love him very much because he makes my life full of joy.
＞ 基础版范文
The Dog and Me
I'd like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together.
My dog's name is Lucky. He has brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small and cozy basket next to my bed.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. After school, I play with him and look after him. He always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is my pet. He is also my best friend and helper. My life is full of joy because of him.
＞ 进阶版范文
The Dog and Me
I'd like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together.
My dog is named Lucky. He is a cute dog with brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small basket. I put his basket by my bed so that he can stay with me all the time.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. He always looks happy when he goes out with me. After school, I spend much time playing with him and looking after him. He loves me so much that he always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is not only my pet but also my best friend and helper. I love him very much because he makes my life full of joy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题，主题是“动物与我”，要求介绍熟悉的动物，需覆盖所有提示要点（动物的名字、外貌、食物、住所；与动物共同做的事；对动物的感受），词数80左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定写作的动物（选贴近学生生活的狗）；2. 按提示的三个模块（介绍动物、分享相处时光、表达感受）依次展开，对应提示内容补充细节；3. 检查是否覆盖所有要点，调整语句通顺，控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 补全标题：根据开头提示，确定动物为狗，标题为“The Dog and Me”；
2. 介绍动物部分：对应提示的name（Lucky）、look（brown fur, short tail）、food（meat）、home（small cozy basket next to bed），说明动物基本信息；
3. 分享相处时光：结合提示动作（feed, walk, play, look after, wait for），描述日常互动（早上喂食遛狗、放学玩耍、等待回家等）；
4. 表达感受：用提示的形容词（amazing）和名词（friend, helper），说明动物带来的快乐，升华情感；
5. 检查：确保所有要点覆盖，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Dog and Me
I'd like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together.
My dog's name is Lucky. He has brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small and cozy basket next to my bed.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. After school, I play with him and look after him. He always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is my pet. He is also my best friend and helper. My life is full of joy because of him.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、动物话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题围绕“动物与我”主题，要求结合提示完成短文，既考查动物相关词汇运用，也考查语言组织与真情表达能力，是贴近学生生活的初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语主题写作题，主题是“动物与我”，要求介绍熟悉的动物，需覆盖所有提示要点（动物的名字、外貌、食物、住所；与动物共同做的事；对动物的感受），词数80左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定写作的动物（选贴近学生生活的狗）；2. 按提示的三个模块（介绍动物、分享相处时光、表达感受）依次展开，对应提示内容补充细节；3. 检查是否覆盖所有要点，调整语句通顺，控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 补全标题：根据开头提示，确定动物为狗，标题为“The Dog and Me”；
2. 介绍动物部分：对应提示的name（Lucky）、look（brown fur, short tail）、food（meat）、home（small cozy basket next to bed），说明动物基本信息；
3. 分享相处时光：结合提示动作（feed, walk, play, look after, wait for），描述日常互动（早上喂食遛狗、放学玩耍、等待回家等）；
4. 表达感受：用提示的形容词（amazing）和名词（friend, helper），说明动物带来的快乐，升华情感；
5. 检查：确保所有要点覆盖，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Dog and Me
I'd like to introduce the animal I know best—the dog and share our special time together.
My dog's name is Lucky. He has brown fur and a short tail. His favorite food is meat. His home is a small and cozy basket next to my bed.
Every morning, I feed him and take him for a walk in the park. After school, I play with him and look after him. He always waits for me at the door when I come home.
Lucky is amazing. He is my pet. He is also my best friend and helper. My life is full of joy because of him.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、动物话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本题围绕“动物与我”主题，要求结合提示完成短文，既考查动物相关词汇运用，也考查语言组织与真情表达能力，是贴近学生生活的初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
