登录
假设你是李华,是一名七年级的学生。你的学校现在正在举行一场宣传保护动物的活动。请你根据以下要点提示,完成一篇演讲稿,并号召大家一起行动。
审要点
动物的重要性：1.动物能帮助人类工作；2.一些动物是人类的朋友
怎样保护动物：1.我们应该阻止人们猎杀动物；2.……(至少补充一条)
号召大家保护动物：……(至少补充一条)
要求:1.演讲稿必须包含以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右。
写作支架
开头
引出话题：Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to
中间
介绍动物的重要性：Animals are important to us... For example,
介绍如何保护动物：We can do something to protect animals. First, we should stop people from
结尾
发出呼吁：Let’s try our best to
优秀范文
Dear students, ①
Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals. ②
Animals are important to us. Working animals are great helpers to humans. For example③, camels carry heavy things for people. Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure.
We can do something to protect animals. First④, we should stop people from killing animals. Second④, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts. Third④, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals.
Let’s try our best to help and protect them.
亮点评析
①符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②该句引出下文,“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”的使用使文章句式丰富。
③For example引出具体的例子,增强演讲的说服力。
④本段用First、Second和Third引出三条保护措施,条理清晰,层次分明。
审要点
动物的重要性：1.动物能帮助人类工作；2.一些动物是人类的朋友
怎样保护动物：1.我们应该阻止人们猎杀动物；2.……(至少补充一条)
号召大家保护动物：……(至少补充一条)
要求:1.演讲稿必须包含以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右。
写作支架
开头
引出话题：Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to
protect animals
.（高分句式1）中间
介绍动物的重要性：Animals are important to us... For example,
camels carry heavy things for people
.；Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure
.介绍如何保护动物：We can do something to protect animals. First, we should stop people from
killing animals
.；Second, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts
.；Third, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals
.（高分句式2）结尾
发出呼吁：Let’s try our best to
help and protect them
.优秀范文
Dear students, ①
Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals. ②
Animals are important to us. Working animals are great helpers to humans. For example③, camels carry heavy things for people. Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure.
We can do something to protect animals. First④, we should stop people from killing animals. Second④, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts. Third④, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals.
Let’s try our best to help and protect them.
亮点评析
①符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②该句引出下文,“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”的使用使文章句式丰富。
③For example引出具体的例子,增强演讲的说服力。
④本段用First、Second和Third引出三条保护措施,条理清晰,层次分明。
答案
优秀范文
Dear students, ①
Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals. ②
Animals are important to us. Working animals are great helpers to humans. For example③, camels carry heavy things for people. Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure.
We can do something to protect animals. First④, we should stop people from killing animals. Second④, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts. Third④, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals.
Let’s try our best to help and protect them.
亮点评析
①符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②该句引出下文,“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”的使用使文章句式丰富。
③For example引出具体的例子,增强演讲的说服力。
④本段用First、Second和Third引出三条保护措施,条理清晰,层次分明。
Dear students, ①
Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals. ②
Animals are important to us. Working animals are great helpers to humans. For example③, camels carry heavy things for people. Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure.
We can do something to protect animals. First④, we should stop people from killing animals. Second④, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts. Third④, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals.
Let’s try our best to help and protect them.
亮点评析
①符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②该句引出下文,“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”的使用使文章句式丰富。
③For example引出具体的例子,增强演讲的说服力。
④本段用First、Second和Third引出三条保护措施,条理清晰,层次分明。
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以七年级学生李华的身份撰写保护动物的演讲稿，需包含动物的重要性、保护动物的措施、保护动物的号召，符合演讲稿格式，词数约80词。解题思路：1. 开头用指定句式“how to protect animals”引出话题，契合演讲稿开头要求；2. 中间分两部分：先阐述动物重要性（以骆驼为例说明工作动物帮人类，动物是朋友带来快乐），再用First/Second/Third清晰列出保护措施（阻止猎杀、拒绝买卖动物制品、不砍树保护动物家园）；3. 结尾发出呼吁，确保涵盖所有要点，语言简洁符合七年级水平。
【解析】
按照写作支架依次完成：开头用“Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals.”引出话题；中间介绍动物重要性：说明工作动物是人类好帮手，用For example举骆驼运重物的例子，补充“动物是朋友带来快乐”；保护措施：First阻止人们猎杀动物，Second拒绝买卖动物身体部位制品，Third不砍树（树对动物重要）；结尾呼吁大家尽力帮助保护动物，确保所有要点齐全，句式丰富，条理清晰。
【答案】
优秀范文
Dear students,
Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals.
Animals are important to us. Working animals are great helpers to humans. For example, camels carry heavy things for people. Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure.
We can do something to protect animals. First, we should stop people from killing animals. Second, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts. Third, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals.
Let’s try our best to help and protect them.
亮点评析
①符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②该句引出下文,“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”的使用使文章句式丰富。
③For example引出具体的例子,增强演讲的说服力。
④本段用First、Second和Third引出三条保护措施,条理清晰,层次分明。
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（演讲稿）、话题表达、写作衔接技巧
【点评】
这篇范文完全符合题目要求：格式正确，涵盖动物重要性、保护措施、号召等全部要点，运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”“举例”“序数词衔接”等高分写作技巧，条理清晰，语言简洁，适配七年级学生的英语水平。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求：以七年级学生李华的身份撰写保护动物的演讲稿，需包含动物的重要性、保护动物的措施、保护动物的号召，符合演讲稿格式，词数约80词。解题思路：1. 开头用指定句式“how to protect animals”引出话题，契合演讲稿开头要求；2. 中间分两部分：先阐述动物重要性（以骆驼为例说明工作动物帮人类，动物是朋友带来快乐），再用First/Second/Third清晰列出保护措施（阻止猎杀、拒绝买卖动物制品、不砍树保护动物家园）；3. 结尾发出呼吁，确保涵盖所有要点，语言简洁符合七年级水平。
【解析】
按照写作支架依次完成：开头用“Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals.”引出话题；中间介绍动物重要性：说明工作动物是人类好帮手，用For example举骆驼运重物的例子，补充“动物是朋友带来快乐”；保护措施：First阻止人们猎杀动物，Second拒绝买卖动物身体部位制品，Third不砍树（树对动物重要）；结尾呼吁大家尽力帮助保护动物，确保所有要点齐全，句式丰富，条理清晰。
【答案】
优秀范文
Dear students,
Hello, I am Li Hua. Today I’d like to tell you how to protect animals.
Animals are important to us. Working animals are great helpers to humans. For example, camels carry heavy things for people. Some animals are our friends and they can bring us so much pleasure.
We can do something to protect animals. First, we should stop people from killing animals. Second, we should also stop selling or buying things made of animals’ body parts. Third, we mustn’t cut down too many trees because they are important to the animals.
Let’s try our best to help and protect them.
亮点评析
①符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②该句引出下文,“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”的使用使文章句式丰富。
③For example引出具体的例子,增强演讲的说服力。
④本段用First、Second和Third引出三条保护措施,条理清晰,层次分明。
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（演讲稿）、话题表达、写作衔接技巧
【点评】
这篇范文完全符合题目要求：格式正确，涵盖动物重要性、保护措施、号召等全部要点，运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”“举例”“序数词衔接”等高分写作技巧，条理清晰，语言简洁，适配七年级学生的英语水平。
【难度系数】
0.7
