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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D25
假定你是李华,你们学校的国际交换生 Peter 想在这周末品尝一下中国美食。请你给 Peter 写一封邮件,推荐你认为学校附近最值得一去的一家餐厅并说明推荐理由。
提示词: delicious, fresh, large, cheap, service, environment, close
提示问题:1.What is the best restaurant in your eyes? 2.Why is it the best?
Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你们学校的国际交换生 Peter 想在这周末品尝一下中国美食。请你给 Peter 写一封邮件,推荐你认为学校附近最值得一去的一家餐厅并说明推荐理由。
提示词: delicious, fresh, large, cheap, service, environment, close
提示问题:1.What is the best restaurant in your eyes? 2.Why is it the best?
Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend.
In my eyes, the best restaurant is a popular local spot called Noodle House.
It is very close to our school, only a five-minute walk, so it's easy to get there.
The food there is delicious, and all the ingredients are fresh every day.
They serve large portions of dishes and the prices are low, which is great for students.
The service there is friendly and fast, and the clean environment makes you feel comfortable.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend. In my eyes, the best restaurant is a popular local spot called Noodle House.
It is very close to our school, only a five-minute walk, so it's easy to get there. The food there is delicious, and all the ingredients are fresh every day. They serve large portions of dishes and the prices are low, which is great for students. The service there is friendly and fast, and the clean environment makes you feel comfortable.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend. The restaurant that I would most highly recommend is Noodle House, a well-loved restaurant among students.
With just a five-minute walk from our school, the restaurant is very easy to find. What makes it stand out is its food: every dish is prepared with fresh ingredients. They offer generous portions that will leave you fully satisfied, and the prices are very reasonable for students. Besides, the staff provide warm service and the cozy environment creates a relaxing dining atmosphere. I'm sure you'll fall in love with the taste of real Chinese food there.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend. In my eyes, the best restaurant is a popular local spot called Noodle House.
It is very close to our school, only a five-minute walk, so it's easy to get there. The food there is delicious, and all the ingredients are fresh every day. They serve large portions of dishes and the prices are low, which is great for students. The service there is friendly and fast, and the clean environment makes you feel comfortable.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend. The restaurant that I would most highly recommend is Noodle House, a well-loved restaurant among students.
With just a five-minute walk from our school, the restaurant is very easy to find. What makes it stand out is its food: every dish is prepared with fresh ingredients. They offer generous portions that will leave you fully satisfied, and the prices are very reasonable for students. Besides, the staff provide warm service and the cozy environment creates a relaxing dining atmosphere. I'm sure you'll fall in love with the taste of real Chinese food there.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：给交换生Peter写邮件，推荐学校附近的餐厅并说明理由，需回答两个核心问题（最好的餐厅是什么、推荐理由）。解题思路：1. 确定推荐的餐厅（如Noodle House）；2. 结合提示词（close, fresh, delicious, large, cheap, service, environment），从位置、食材、菜品、价格、服务、环境等维度阐述推荐理由；3. 遵循邮件格式，开头已给出，补充中间推荐内容，结尾祝福，确保要点齐全、语言通顺。
【解析】按照邮件结构写作：开头承接已给内容，点明推荐的餐厅是Noodle House；接着说明推荐理由：位置近（步行仅5分钟，符合提示词close），食材新鲜（fresh），菜品美味（delicious）、分量大（large），价格便宜（cheap）适合学生，服务友好，环境干净舒适；最后以祝福收尾，符合邮件格式，准确运用提示词，覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend. In my eyes, the best restaurant is a popular local spot called Noodle House.
It is very close to our school, only a five-minute walk, so it's easy to get there. The food there is delicious, and all the ingredients are fresh every day. They serve large portions of dishes and the prices are low, which is great for students. The service there is friendly and fast, and the clean environment makes you feel comfortable.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作，理由说明，词汇运用
【点评】本题为英语写作实战题，考查学生的邮件格式掌握、信息整合及语言表达能力，要求结合给定情境、提示词和问题完成写作，需清晰阐述推荐理由，结构完整，是常见的中等难度写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照邮件结构写作：开头承接已给内容，点明推荐的餐厅是Noodle House；接着说明推荐理由：位置近（步行仅5分钟，符合提示词close），食材新鲜（fresh），菜品美味（delicious）、分量大（large），价格便宜（cheap）适合学生，服务友好，环境干净舒适；最后以祝福收尾，符合邮件格式，准确运用提示词，覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】Dear Peter,
I heard that you plan to choose a restaurant to taste the local food this weekend. In my eyes, the best restaurant is a popular local spot called Noodle House.
It is very close to our school, only a five-minute walk, so it's easy to get there. The food there is delicious, and all the ingredients are fresh every day. They serve large portions of dishes and the prices are low, which is great for students. The service there is friendly and fast, and the clean environment makes you feel comfortable.
I hope you can enjoy yourself there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作，理由说明，词汇运用
【点评】本题为英语写作实战题，考查学生的邮件格式掌握、信息整合及语言表达能力，要求结合给定情境、提示词和问题完成写作，需清晰阐述推荐理由，结构完整，是常见的中等难度写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
