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优选词汇
餐厅评价
概况 · menu · cuisine · preference · specialty · in general · average cost
体验 · tender · sugary · welcoming · nutritious · would rather · remind sb. of...
推荐 · amust-try · a great pick · be suitable for · highly recommend · be worth a visit
写作实例
→审时态: 以一般过去时为主
假设上周日你和几个朋友去一家餐厅(Dream Restaurant)吃晚饭,请按照所给的内容提示写一则该餐厅的评价,词数80左右。
→审主题
Wonderful Dream Restaurant
Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
写作支架
开头 开门见山,引出话题 — Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
中间 介绍就餐体验 — First, the price was , about , which . The food was , though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste.（高分句式1）
Besides, the restaurant
, with , making us . What’s more, the service , and .
结尾 总结全文,表达感受 — Overall, we the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone .（高分句式2）
佳作剖析
优秀范文
Wonderful Dream Restaurant
Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
First¹, the price was moderate, about 70 to 80 yuan per person, which fitted our budget well². The food was excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing, though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste². Besides¹, the restaurant had a warm and welcoming atmosphere, with soft lights and gentle background music, making us feel relaxed all through the meal. What’s more¹, the service was top-quality: the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes.
Overall, we were all very satisfied with the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal.³
亮点评析
①使用 First、Besides、What’s more,使文章的逻辑更清晰,一目了然。
②使用定语从句和让步状语从句,使语言更为流畅、准确。
③用 Overall 来总结全文,呼应主题,表达感受。
主题词网
优选词汇
餐厅评价
概况 · menu · cuisine · preference · specialty · in general · average cost
体验 · tender · sugary · welcoming · nutritious · would rather · remind sb. of...
推荐 · amust-try · a great pick · be suitable for · highly recommend · be worth a visit
写作实例
→审时态: 以一般过去时为主
假设上周日你和几个朋友去一家餐厅(Dream Restaurant)吃晚饭,请按照所给的内容提示写一则该餐厅的评价,词数80左右。
→审主题
Wonderful Dream Restaurant
Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
写作支架
开头 开门见山,引出话题 — Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
中间 介绍就餐体验 — First, the price was , about , which . The food was , though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste.（高分句式1）
Besides, the restaurant
, with , making us . What’s more, the service , and .结尾 总结全文,表达感受 — Overall, we the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone .（高分句式2）
佳作剖析
优秀范文
Wonderful Dream Restaurant
Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
First¹, the price was moderate, about 70 to 80 yuan per person, which fitted our budget well². The food was excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing, though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste². Besides¹, the restaurant had a warm and welcoming atmosphere, with soft lights and gentle background music, making us feel relaxed all through the meal. What’s more¹, the service was top-quality: the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes.
Overall, we were all very satisfied with the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal.³
亮点评析
①使用 First、Besides、What’s more,使文章的逻辑更清晰,一目了然。
②使用定语从句和让步状语从句,使语言更为流畅、准确。
③用 Overall 来总结全文,呼应主题,表达感受。
答案
完整参考范文
Wonderful Dream Restaurant
Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
First, the price was moderate, about 70 to 80 yuan per person, which fitted our budget well. The food was excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing, though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste. Besides, the restaurant had a warm and welcoming atmosphere, with soft lights and gentle background music, making us feel relaxed all through the meal. What's more, the service was top-quality: the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes.
Overall, we were all very satisfied with the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal.
写作支架填空答案
1. moderate
2. 70 to 80 yuan per person
3. fitted our budget well
4. excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing
5. had a warm and welcoming atmosphere
6. soft lights and gentle background music
7. feel relaxed all through the meal
8. was top-quality
9. the waiters were friendly and attentive, our food was served quickly in just ten minutes
10. were all very satisfied with
11. looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal
Wonderful Dream Restaurant
Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant.
First, the price was moderate, about 70 to 80 yuan per person, which fitted our budget well. The food was excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing, though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste. Besides, the restaurant had a warm and welcoming atmosphere, with soft lights and gentle background music, making us feel relaxed all through the meal. What's more, the service was top-quality: the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes.
Overall, we were all very satisfied with the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal.
写作支架填空答案
1. moderate
2. 70 to 80 yuan per person
3. fitted our budget well
4. excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing
5. had a warm and welcoming atmosphere
6. soft lights and gentle background music
7. feel relaxed all through the meal
8. was top-quality
9. the waiters were friendly and attentive, our food was served quickly in just ten minutes
10. were all very satisfied with
11. looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal
解析
【分析】
本题为餐厅评价类英语应用文写作，需以一般过去时叙述上周日和朋友在Dream Restaurant的就餐经历。解题思路：1. 明确时态：全程使用一般过去时，契合题目要求；2. 遵循写作支架结构：开头开门见山引出就餐事件，中间用First、Besides、What’s more等逻辑词串联价格、食物、环境、服务四个核心内容，结尾总结评价并推荐；3. 运用给定优选词汇（如moderate、tender、welcoming等），结合定语从句、让步状语从句等高分句式丰富内容，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
按照写作支架要求，结合给定词汇与时态规则填充内容：1. 价格填moderate，约70-80元/人，符合预算；2. 食物填excellent，举例嫩牛排、新鲜沙拉，补充香蕉派略甜的细节；3. 环境填温馨友好的氛围，搭配柔和灯光与轻音乐，体现放松感受；4. 服务填优质，补充服务员友好、上菜快的细节；5. 结尾总结满意，推荐给寻找用餐好去处的人群。最终形成符合要求的范文。
【答案】
完整参考范文：Wonderful Dream Restaurant Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant. First, the price was moderate, about 70 to 80 yuan per person, which fitted our budget well. The food was excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing, though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste. Besides, the restaurant had a warm and welcoming atmosphere, with soft lights and gentle background music, making us feel relaxed all through the meal. What's more, the service was top-quality: the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes. Overall, we were all very satisfied with the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal.
写作支架填空答案：1. moderate 2. 70 to 80 yuan per person 3. fitted our budget well 4. excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing 5. had a warm and welcoming atmosphere 6. soft lights and gentle background music 7. feel relaxed all through the meal 8. was top-quality 9. the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes 10. were all very satisfied with 11. looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、餐厅评价类写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循写作支架结构，用逻辑连接词使文章条理清晰；运用定语从句、让步状语从句提升语言丰富度；紧扣主题，结合给定优选词汇，内容具体，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的餐厅评价范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为餐厅评价类英语应用文写作，需以一般过去时叙述上周日和朋友在Dream Restaurant的就餐经历。解题思路：1. 明确时态：全程使用一般过去时，契合题目要求；2. 遵循写作支架结构：开头开门见山引出就餐事件，中间用First、Besides、What’s more等逻辑词串联价格、食物、环境、服务四个核心内容，结尾总结评价并推荐；3. 运用给定优选词汇（如moderate、tender、welcoming等），结合定语从句、让步状语从句等高分句式丰富内容，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
按照写作支架要求，结合给定词汇与时态规则填充内容：1. 价格填moderate，约70-80元/人，符合预算；2. 食物填excellent，举例嫩牛排、新鲜沙拉，补充香蕉派略甜的细节；3. 环境填温馨友好的氛围，搭配柔和灯光与轻音乐，体现放松感受；4. 服务填优质，补充服务员友好、上菜快的细节；5. 结尾总结满意，推荐给寻找用餐好去处的人群。最终形成符合要求的范文。
【答案】
完整参考范文：Wonderful Dream Restaurant Last Sunday, my friends and I had dinner at Dream Restaurant. First, the price was moderate, about 70 to 80 yuan per person, which fitted our budget well. The food was excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing, though the banana pie was a bit too sugary for my taste. Besides, the restaurant had a warm and welcoming atmosphere, with soft lights and gentle background music, making us feel relaxed all through the meal. What's more, the service was top-quality: the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes. Overall, we were all very satisfied with the experience, and I would highly recommend this restaurant to anyone looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal.
写作支架填空答案：1. moderate 2. 70 to 80 yuan per person 3. fitted our budget well 4. excellent: the tender steak and fresh salad tasted amazing 5. had a warm and welcoming atmosphere 6. soft lights and gentle background music 7. feel relaxed all through the meal 8. was top-quality 9. the waiters were friendly and attentive, and our food was served quickly, in just ten minutes 10. were all very satisfied with 11. looking for a nice place to enjoy a meal
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、餐厅评价类写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循写作支架结构，用逻辑连接词使文章条理清晰；运用定语从句、让步状语从句提升语言丰富度；紧扣主题，结合给定优选词汇，内容具体，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的餐厅评价范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
