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很多同学喜欢去动物园看野生动物，但动物园真的是保护它们的好地方吗？请你以“Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them?”为主题写几句话，简要表达自己的想法，并陈述理由。不少于5句话。下面的问题可供参考：
1. What good things can zoos do for wild animals?
2. How is life in zoos different from that in the wild?
很多同学喜欢去动物园看野生动物，但动物园真的是保护它们的好地方吗？请你以“Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them?”为主题写几句话，简要表达自己的想法，并陈述理由。不少于5句话。下面的问题可供参考：
1. What good things can zoos do for wild animals?
2. How is life in zoos different from that in the wild?
答案
Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them? I don't think it is a good idea to keep all wild animals in zoos. It is true that zoos can take good care of endangered or hurt wild animals, offer them enough food and safe places away from hunters. However, life in zoos is totally different from the life in the wild. Wild animals in zoos usually live in small cages, and they can not run freely or hunt for food by themselves like they do in nature. Little by little, they will lose their basic skills to live in the wild. The best way to protect wild animals is to protect their natural habitats in the wild, not to keep them in zoos.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“是否应将野生动物关在动物园以保护它们”，需结合给出的两个参考问题梳理写作思路：第一步开篇亮明自身观点；第二步结合第一个参考问题，阐述动物园对野生动物的积极作用；第三步结合第二个参考问题，转折说明动物园生活与野外的差异及弊端；最后总结正确的保护方式，确保内容不少于5句，逻辑连贯。
【解析】1. 开篇点题：Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them? I don't think it is a good idea to keep all wild animals in zoos. 2. 阐述动物园的积极作用：It is true that zoos can take good care of endangered or hurt wild animals, offer them enough food and safe places away from hunters. 3. 转折说明弊端：However, life in zoos is totally different from the life in the wild. Wild animals in zoos usually live in small cages, and they can not run freely or hunt for food by themselves like they do in nature. Little by little, they will lose their basic skills to live in the wild. 4. 总结观点：The best way to protect wild animals is to protect their natural habitats in the wild, not to keep them in zoos.
【答案】Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them? I don't think it is a good idea to keep all wild animals in zoos. It is true that zoos can take good care of endangered or hurt wild animals, offer them enough food and safe places away from hunters. However, life in zoos is totally different from the life in the wild. Wild animals in zoos usually live in small cages, and they can not run freely or hunt for food by themselves like they do in nature. Little by little, they will lose their basic skills to live in the wild. The best way to protect wild animals is to protect their natural habitats in the wild, not to keep them in zoos.
【知识点】英语微写作、观点类议论文写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语观点表达能力与逻辑组织能力，要求结合提示问题展开论述，结构清晰，理由充分，符合微写作要求，能有效检验学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开篇点题：Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them? I don't think it is a good idea to keep all wild animals in zoos. 2. 阐述动物园的积极作用：It is true that zoos can take good care of endangered or hurt wild animals, offer them enough food and safe places away from hunters. 3. 转折说明弊端：However, life in zoos is totally different from the life in the wild. Wild animals in zoos usually live in small cages, and they can not run freely or hunt for food by themselves like they do in nature. Little by little, they will lose their basic skills to live in the wild. 4. 总结观点：The best way to protect wild animals is to protect their natural habitats in the wild, not to keep them in zoos.
【答案】Should we keep wild animals in zoos to protect them? I don't think it is a good idea to keep all wild animals in zoos. It is true that zoos can take good care of endangered or hurt wild animals, offer them enough food and safe places away from hunters. However, life in zoos is totally different from the life in the wild. Wild animals in zoos usually live in small cages, and they can not run freely or hunt for food by themselves like they do in nature. Little by little, they will lose their basic skills to live in the wild. The best way to protect wild animals is to protect their natural habitats in the wild, not to keep them in zoos.
【知识点】英语微写作、观点类议论文写作
【点评】本题考查学生的英语观点表达能力与逻辑组织能力，要求结合提示问题展开论述，结构清晰，理由充分，符合微写作要求，能有效检验学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
