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为倡导理性消费，增强学生理财意识，学校 Life Skill Club 开展题为“How I do with my lucky money”的征文活动。请结合图表，写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 不少于70个词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
【写作指导】
本文是应用文写作，要求根据提示写一篇短文分享自己如何管理压岁钱，根据提示可知：①人称：用第一人称；②时态：用一般现在时；③本文要点的总方向已给出，需要详细地介绍如何做，最后可以表达学会管理钱的重要性。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
How I do with my lucky money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 不少于70个词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
【写作指导】
本文是应用文写作，要求根据提示写一篇短文分享自己如何管理压岁钱，根据提示可知：①人称：用第一人称；②时态：用一般现在时；③本文要点的总方向已给出，需要详细地介绍如何做，最后可以表达学会管理钱的重要性。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
How I do with my lucky money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and crayons. They are necessary for my study and hobby. I plan to travel to Nanjing soon, so I will pay about 30% for the plane tickets and the hotel. I save the rest in my bank account. It is important to save for a rainy day.
Having a good spending habit is good for me. I can make a budget and manage money well.
答案
Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
How I do with my lucky money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
I spend $50\%$ of the money on books, pens and crayons. They are necessary for my study and hobby. I plan to travel to Nanjing soon, so I will pay about $30\%$ for the plane tickets and the hotel. I save the rest in my bank account. It is important to save for a rainy day.
Having a good spending habit is good for me. I can make a budget and manage money well.
One possible version:
How I do with my lucky money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
I spend $50\%$ of the money on books, pens and crayons. They are necessary for my study and hobby. I plan to travel to Nanjing soon, so I will pay about $30\%$ for the plane tickets and the hotel. I save the rest in my bank account. It is important to save for a rainy day.
Having a good spending habit is good for me. I can make a budget and manage money well.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，属于单元主题写作，要求结合提示信息（零用钱的使用情况及理由）完成征文。解题思路：①确定人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时；②梳理写作要点：需明确零用钱的分配比例、对应用途及理由，最后点明管理钱财的重要性；③确保行文连贯，覆盖所有要求信息，满足不少于70词的要求，且开头已给出，需衔接自然。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 确定人称与时态：采用第一人称，一般现在时，符合话题语境；2. 分配零用钱并阐述理由：将50%用于学习相关的书籍、文具等，说明是学习和爱好的必需品；30%用于旅行（如南京的机票、酒店），说明是近期的计划；剩余部分存入银行，说明以备不时之需；3. 结尾总结：点明养成良好消费习惯的好处，如学会做预算、管理钱财；4. 检查行文连贯，字数达标，符合征文要求。
【答案】How I do with my lucky money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and crayons. They are necessary for my study and hobby. I plan to travel to Nanjing soon, so I will pay about 30% for the plane tickets and the hotel. I save the rest in my bank account. It is important to save for a rainy day.
Having a good spending habit is good for me. I can make a budget and manage money well.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、要点式写作
【点评】本题以学生熟悉的零用钱管理为话题，考查英语应用文写作能力，贴近学生生活，有明确的写作指导，能引导学生合理规划消费，符合单元主题写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 确定人称与时态：采用第一人称，一般现在时，符合话题语境；2. 分配零用钱并阐述理由：将50%用于学习相关的书籍、文具等，说明是学习和爱好的必需品；30%用于旅行（如南京的机票、酒店），说明是近期的计划；剩余部分存入银行，说明以备不时之需；3. 结尾总结：点明养成良好消费习惯的好处，如学会做预算、管理钱财；4. 检查行文连贯，字数达标，符合征文要求。
【答案】How I do with my lucky money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and crayons. They are necessary for my study and hobby. I plan to travel to Nanjing soon, so I will pay about 30% for the plane tickets and the hotel. I save the rest in my bank account. It is important to save for a rainy day.
Having a good spending habit is good for me. I can make a budget and manage money well.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、要点式写作
【点评】本题以学生熟悉的零用钱管理为话题，考查英语应用文写作能力，贴近学生生活，有明确的写作指导，能引导学生合理规划消费，符合单元主题写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
