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【写作构思】
share ideas—a suggestion box
shade—plant more trees
10 more minutes for lunch—relax
more experiments—more interesting
share ideas—a suggestion box
shade—plant more trees
10 more minutes for lunch—relax
more experiments—more interesting
答案
Dear Sir/Madam,
We enjoy our school life a lot, but we have some advice to make our school even better.
First, we hope the school can put up a suggestion box in the teaching building. Then all the teachers and students can share their different ideas easily. Second, please plant more trees in the school yard. More trees will give us plenty of shade on hot summer days, and the school will become much more beautiful too. Third, we hope we can have 10 more minutes for lunch. Now we have to eat in a hurry, and we often feel sleepy in the afternoon classes. If we have more time, we can have a good rest and relax after lunch. Fourth, we hope there can be more experiments in our science classes. Doing hands-on experiments will make the lessons more interesting, and we will become much more interested in science.
We really hope you can consider our suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Grade 8 Students
We enjoy our school life a lot, but we have some advice to make our school even better.
First, we hope the school can put up a suggestion box in the teaching building. Then all the teachers and students can share their different ideas easily. Second, please plant more trees in the school yard. More trees will give us plenty of shade on hot summer days, and the school will become much more beautiful too. Third, we hope we can have 10 more minutes for lunch. Now we have to eat in a hurry, and we often feel sleepy in the afternoon classes. If we have more time, we can have a good rest and relax after lunch. Fourth, we hope there can be more experiments in our science classes. Doing hands-on experiments will make the lessons more interesting, and we will become much more interested in science.
We really hope you can consider our suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Grade 8 Students
解析
【分析】本题为英语建议信写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作体裁是建议信，需遵循书信格式；2. 围绕思维导图给出的四个核心建议点（设置建议箱分享想法、多种树提供阴凉、增加午餐10分钟用于放松、增加实验让课程更有趣）展开，每个建议补充合理原因；3. 开头点明写信目的，结尾表达希望被采纳的意愿，确保内容完整、逻辑通顺。
【解析】首先用“Dear Sir/Madam”开头称呼，说明写信目的是让学校生活更美好；接着分四点阐述建议：①设置建议箱，方便师生分享想法；②多种树，提供夏日阴凉且美化校园；③增加10分钟午餐时间，让大家能放松休息，避免下午上课犯困；④增加科学课实验，让课程更有趣，提升对科学的兴趣；最后结尾表达希望学校考虑建议，署名“Grade 8 Students”，完成书信写作。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
We enjoy our school life a lot, but we have some advice to make our school even better.
First, we hope the school can put up a suggestion box in the teaching building. Then all the teachers and students can share their different ideas easily. Second, please plant more trees in the school yard. More trees will give us plenty of shade on hot summer days, and the school will become much more beautiful too. Third, we hope we can have 10 more minutes for lunch. Now we have to eat in a hurry, and we often feel sleepy in the afternoon classes. If we have more time, we can have a good rest and relax after lunch. Fourth, we hope there can be more experiments in our science classes. Doing hands-on experiments will make the lessons more interesting, and we will become much more interested in science.
We really hope you can consider our suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Grade 8 Students
【知识点】英语建议信写作，英语书信格式
【点评】该作文完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，符合建议信格式要求，语言流畅自然，逻辑连贯，准确传达了学生的建议与诉求，是一篇优秀的写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先用“Dear Sir/Madam”开头称呼，说明写信目的是让学校生活更美好；接着分四点阐述建议：①设置建议箱，方便师生分享想法；②多种树，提供夏日阴凉且美化校园；③增加10分钟午餐时间，让大家能放松休息，避免下午上课犯困；④增加科学课实验，让课程更有趣，提升对科学的兴趣；最后结尾表达希望学校考虑建议，署名“Grade 8 Students”，完成书信写作。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
We enjoy our school life a lot, but we have some advice to make our school even better.
First, we hope the school can put up a suggestion box in the teaching building. Then all the teachers and students can share their different ideas easily. Second, please plant more trees in the school yard. More trees will give us plenty of shade on hot summer days, and the school will become much more beautiful too. Third, we hope we can have 10 more minutes for lunch. Now we have to eat in a hurry, and we often feel sleepy in the afternoon classes. If we have more time, we can have a good rest and relax after lunch. Fourth, we hope there can be more experiments in our science classes. Doing hands-on experiments will make the lessons more interesting, and we will become much more interested in science.
We really hope you can consider our suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Grade 8 Students
【知识点】英语建议信写作，英语书信格式
【点评】该作文完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，符合建议信格式要求，语言流畅自然，逻辑连贯，准确传达了学生的建议与诉求，是一篇优秀的写作范文。
【难度系数】0.5
假如你是李华，近期你校图书馆将进行改造，学校征求学生意见，请你给校长写一封信，提出一些改进的建议，内容如下：
1. 图书更新；2. 灯光改善；3. 自习室
增加。
要求:1. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to
Sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 图书更新；2. 灯光改善；3. 自习室
增加。
要求:1. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to
suggest improving our school library. As a user, I've found some areas for enhancement.
First, the book collection needs updating. Adding recent books will help students know more about the development of the world. We are interested in science and technology. Most of us are looking forward to knowing about AI technology. Second, the lighting system needs to be improved. Brighter, energy-efficient lights would create a better study environment. Finally, our school should add more self-study rooms, as the rooms are hard to find during busy time.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
First, the book collection needs updating. Adding recent books will help students know more about the development of the world. We are interested in science and technology. Most of us are looking forward to knowing about AI technology. Second, the lighting system needs to be improved. Brighter, energy-efficient lights would create a better study environment. Finally, our school should add more self-study rooms, as the rooms are hard to find during busy time.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to suggest improving our school library. As a user, I've found some areas for enhancement.
First, the book collection needs updating. Adding recent books will help students know more about the development of the world. We are interested in science and technology. Most of us are looking forward to knowing about AI technology. Second, the lighting system needs to be improved. Brighter, energy-efficient lights would create a better study environment. Finally, our school should add more self-study rooms, as the rooms are hard to find during busy time.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
I'm writing to suggest improving our school library. As a user, I've found some areas for enhancement.
First, the book collection needs updating. Adding recent books will help students know more about the development of the world. We are interested in science and technology. Most of us are looking forward to knowing about AI technology. Second, the lighting system needs to be improved. Brighter, energy-efficient lights would create a better study environment. Finally, our school should add more self-study rooms, as the rooms are hard to find during busy time.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给校长的建议信，针对学校图书馆改造提出指定的三点建议，需遵循书信格式，覆盖所有要求要点，语言要礼貌得体、符合学生身份，确保字数达标且不出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
书信开头承接已给内容，点明写作目的是给图书馆改造提建议；接着分三点阐述建议：1. 图书更新：补充近期书籍，尤其是科技类（如AI相关），帮助学生了解世界发展；2. 灯光改善：更换更亮的节能灯光，优化学习环境；3. 增加自习室：解决高峰时段自习室不足的问题；最后收尾表达希望建议有用，符合书信礼貌规范。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to suggest improving our school library. As a user, I've found some areas for enhancement.
First, the book collection needs updating. Adding recent books will help students know more about the development of the world. We are interested in science and technology. Most of us are looking forward to knowing about AI technology. Second, the lighting system needs to be improved. Brighter, energy-efficient lights would create a better study environment. Finally, our school should add more self-study rooms, as the rooms are hard to find during busy time.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、建议信格式、英语书面表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖图书更新、灯光改善、增加自习室三个要点，语言通顺自然，符合学生身份和书信的礼貌规范，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求写一封给校长的建议信，针对学校图书馆改造提出指定的三点建议，需遵循书信格式，覆盖所有要求要点，语言要礼貌得体、符合学生身份，确保字数达标且不出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
书信开头承接已给内容，点明写作目的是给图书馆改造提建议；接着分三点阐述建议：1. 图书更新：补充近期书籍，尤其是科技类（如AI相关），帮助学生了解世界发展；2. 灯光改善：更换更亮的节能灯光，优化学习环境；3. 增加自习室：解决高峰时段自习室不足的问题；最后收尾表达希望建议有用，符合书信礼貌规范。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to suggest improving our school library. As a user, I've found some areas for enhancement.
First, the book collection needs updating. Adding recent books will help students know more about the development of the world. We are interested in science and technology. Most of us are looking forward to knowing about AI technology. Second, the lighting system needs to be improved. Brighter, energy-efficient lights would create a better study environment. Finally, our school should add more self-study rooms, as the rooms are hard to find during busy time.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、建议信格式、英语书面表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖图书更新、灯光改善、增加自习室三个要点，语言通顺自然，符合学生身份和书信的礼貌规范，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
