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五、(2025·南京玄武区期中)书面表达
假如你是丹尼尔 (Daniel), 你的英国笔友本 (Ben) 计划来你的家乡南京游玩, 并给你发了封电子邮件, 想详细了解你的家乡。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件, 并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
注意: 1. 词数 90 左右, 开头和结尾已经写好, 不计入总词数;
2. 回复须包括所有要点, 可适当发挥, 使全文连贯通畅;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
_______
Best wishes,
Daniel
假如你是丹尼尔 (Daniel), 你的英国笔友本 (Ben) 计划来你的家乡南京游玩, 并给你发了封电子邮件, 想详细了解你的家乡。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件, 并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
注意: 1. 词数 90 左右, 开头和结尾已经写好, 不计入总词数;
2. 回复须包括所有要点, 可适当发挥, 使全文连贯通畅;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
_______
Best wishes,
Daniel
答案
One possible version:
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand. If you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
Best wishes,
Daniel
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件。②时态:主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应来信,表达欢迎;第二步,分别回答三个问题(环境评价/邻里特点/旅游推荐);第三步,表达期待见面。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly and helpful 友好且乐于助人
②warm-hearted 热心的
[高分句型]
①If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. (if 引导条件状语从句)
②Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. (which 引导定语从句)
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand. If you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
Best wishes,
Daniel
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件。②时态:主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应来信,表达欢迎;第二步,分别回答三个问题(环境评价/邻里特点/旅游推荐);第三步,表达期待见面。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly and helpful 友好且乐于助人
②warm-hearted 热心的
[高分句型]
①If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. (if 引导条件状语从句)
②Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. (which 引导定语从句)
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以Daniel的身份给笔友Ben写一封回信，需覆盖来信中的三个核心问题：家乡南京的环境评价、邻里特点及原因、南京的旅游活动。解题思路为：先回应来信表达欢迎，接着依次回答三个问题，适当添加细节使内容连贯，最后表达对Ben到来的期待，同时注意词数要求和时态运用（以一般现在时为主，旅游相关用一般将来时）。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接表达欢迎；2. 回答环境问题：描述南京街道绿树成荫，整体干净整洁；3. 回答邻里问题：说明邻里友好热心，举例（忘钥匙时邻居帮忙、没时间遛狗时邻居协助）；4. 回答旅游问题：推荐参观博物馆了解历史、去玄武湖游玩；5. 结尾表达期待见面。写作时可运用if引导的条件状语从句、定语从句等丰富句式，确保词数约90，不遗漏要点，语言连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand. If you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
Best wishes,
Daniel
【知识点】英语应用文写作、家乡话题表达
【点评】范文完整覆盖所有写作要点，运用了if条件状语从句、定语从句等多种句式，细节充实，语言流畅自然，符合英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接表达欢迎；2. 回答环境问题：描述南京街道绿树成荫，整体干净整洁；3. 回答邻里问题：说明邻里友好热心，举例（忘钥匙时邻居帮忙、没时间遛狗时邻居协助）；4. 回答旅游问题：推荐参观博物馆了解历史、去玄武湖游玩；5. 结尾表达期待见面。写作时可运用if引导的条件状语从句、定语从句等丰富句式，确保词数约90，不遗漏要点，语言连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ben,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Nanjing. It is a good place to visit.
Nanjing is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean. The people in Nanjing are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand. If you come to Nanjing, you can go to different kinds of museums to learn Chinese history. And you can have a good time in Xuanwu Lake.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nanjing!
Best wishes,
Daniel
【知识点】英语应用文写作、家乡话题表达
【点评】范文完整覆盖所有写作要点，运用了if条件状语从句、定语从句等多种句式，细节充实，语言流畅自然，符合英语书面表达的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.6
