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Ⅳ. Think and write. (写作。)
假如你是 Li Lin，请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的假期之旅。
| Place | Transport(旅行方式) | People | Activities | Feelings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Zibo | by train | Li Lin and
his parents | visit the museum；take nice photos；eat Zibo barbecue(烧烤)；... | ... |
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于 50 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was
I want to go there again!
假如你是 Li Lin，请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的假期之旅。
| Place | Transport(旅行方式) | People | Activities | Feelings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Zibo | by train | Li Lin and
his parents | visit the museum；take nice photos；eat Zibo barbecue(烧烤)；... | ... |要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于 50 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was
interesting
!I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum.
In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
答案
参考范文:
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Li Lin的身份介绍去淄博的假期之旅，需结合表格中的地点、交通、人物、活动、感受等信息完成写作。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般过去时（描述过去的假期经历）；2. 补充开头的形容词，再按逻辑顺序（同行者与交通→活动→感受）组织内容，覆盖参观博物馆、拍照、吃淄博烧烤等要点；3. 确保语句通顺连贯，符合字数要求，衔接给定的开头和结尾。
【解析】
首先，开头已给出，需补充合适的形容词（如interesting）；接着介绍同行者（my parents）和交通方式（by train）；然后描述活动：上午参观博物馆，说明在博物馆的收获（了解淄博历史），拍照；晚上吃淄博烧烤，评价美味；最后写感受（开心），衔接结尾“I want to go there again!”。全程使用一般过去时，确保语句连贯，覆盖所有给定要点。
【答案】
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、旅行话题表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格所有信息点，时态使用正确，语句通顺连贯，符合字数要求，是一篇符合标准的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以Li Lin的身份介绍去淄博的假期之旅，需结合表格中的地点、交通、人物、活动、感受等信息完成写作。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般过去时（描述过去的假期经历）；2. 补充开头的形容词，再按逻辑顺序（同行者与交通→活动→感受）组织内容，覆盖参观博物馆、拍照、吃淄博烧烤等要点；3. 确保语句通顺连贯，符合字数要求，衔接给定的开头和结尾。
【解析】
首先，开头已给出，需补充合适的形容词（如interesting）；接着介绍同行者（my parents）和交通方式（by train）；然后描述活动：上午参观博物馆，说明在博物馆的收获（了解淄博历史），拍照；晚上吃淄博烧烤，评价美味；最后写感受（开心），衔接结尾“I want to go there again!”。全程使用一般过去时，确保语句连贯，覆盖所有给定要点。
【答案】
My trip to Zibo last summer holiday was interesting!
I went to Zibo with my parents. We went there by train. In the morning, we visited a famous museum. I saw many old things there and learnt a lot about the history of Zibo. We also took many nice photos in front of the museum. In the evening, we ate Zibo barbecue. It was so delicious! We all felt very happy.
I want to go there again!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、旅行话题表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖表格所有信息点，时态使用正确，语句通顺连贯，符合字数要求，是一篇符合标准的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
