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假如你是李华,你校准备举行一次以“Protect the Earth”为题的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下表格的内容,写一篇英语演讲稿参加此次比赛:
审主题
注意:1.不少于80词(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数);
审词数*2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
写作支架
教材原文
P61 The Earth is a beautiful planet.
P61 However, we are harming the Earth in many ways.
P61 We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it.
优秀范文
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It provides us with² air, food and water. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example¹, people always cut down² trees. What's more², people often leave the rooms without turning off lights and throw away the plastic bottles everywhere.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First³, I think we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. Second³, planting trees is a good idea. Trees can make the air clean and make the world beautiful. Third³, we should try to walk, ride bikes or take buses.
Let's make the Earth more beautiful.
亮点评析
①使用短语For example引出人类伤害地球的各种行为。
②provide...with、cut down、What's more的使用为文章增色不少。
③First、Second、Third的使用使文章条理清晰,过渡自然流畅。
审主题
注意:1.不少于80词(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数);
审词数*2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
写作支架
教材原文
P61 The Earth is a beautiful planet.
P61 However, we are harming the Earth in many ways.
P61 We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it.
优秀范文
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It provides us with² air, food and water. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example¹, people always cut down² trees. What's more², people often leave the rooms without turning off lights and throw away the plastic bottles everywhere.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First³, I think we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. Second³, planting trees is a good idea. Trees can make the air clean and make the world beautiful. Third³, we should try to walk, ride bikes or take buses.
Let's make the Earth more beautiful.
亮点评析
①使用短语For example引出人类伤害地球的各种行为。
②provide...with、cut down、What's more的使用为文章增色不少。
③First、Second、Third的使用使文章条理清晰,过渡自然流畅。
答案
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It provides us with air, food and water. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people always cut down lots of trees. What's more, people often leave the tap on when washing and waste a large amount of fresh water.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, I think we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere, and we can sort the waste to recycle useful things. Second, planting trees is a good idea. Trees can make the air clean and the environment more beautiful. Third, we should try to walk, ride bikes or take buses to reduce air pollution.
Let's make the Earth more and more beautiful.
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It provides us with air, food and water. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people always cut down lots of trees. What's more, people often leave the tap on when washing and waste a large amount of fresh water.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, I think we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere, and we can sort the waste to recycle useful things. Second, planting trees is a good idea. Trees can make the air clean and the environment more beautiful. Third, we should try to walk, ride bikes or take buses to reduce air pollution.
Let's make the Earth more and more beautiful.
解析
【分析】
本题要求完成以“Protect the Earth”为题的英语演讲稿，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，结合教材原文阐述地球对人类的重要性；2. 用For example等连接词列举人类破坏地球的具体行为；3. 用First/Second/Third等连接词分点提出保护地球的可行措施，使文章条理清晰；4. 结尾发出呼吁，符合演讲的感染力；同时需满足词数要求，不得透露个人信息，恰当使用短语提升文采。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明地球是美丽的星球，为人类提供空气、食物和水；接着举例人类破坏地球的行为，如砍树、浪费水资源；然后分三点提出保护措施：不乱扔垃圾并分类回收、植树净化空气、选择绿色出行方式；最后发出呼吁，让地球更美丽，符合演讲稿的格式与要求。
【答案】
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It provides us with air, food and water. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people always cut down lots of trees. What's more, people often leave the tap on when washing and waste a large amount of fresh water.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, I think we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere, and we can sort the waste to recycle useful things. Second, planting trees is a good idea. Trees can make the air clean and the environment more beautiful. Third, we should try to walk, ride bikes or take buses to reduce air pollution.
Let's make the Earth more and more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、环境保护主题英语表达、连接词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，采用“地球重要性-破坏行为-保护措施-呼吁”的逻辑，使用For example、First/Second/Third等连接词使文章条理分明，短语搭配恰当，内容具体，符合演讲稿的文体要求，词数达标，未透露个人信息，是一篇优秀的英语演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求完成以“Protect the Earth”为题的英语演讲稿，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，结合教材原文阐述地球对人类的重要性；2. 用For example等连接词列举人类破坏地球的具体行为；3. 用First/Second/Third等连接词分点提出保护地球的可行措施，使文章条理清晰；4. 结尾发出呼吁，符合演讲的感染力；同时需满足词数要求，不得透露个人信息，恰当使用短语提升文采。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明地球是美丽的星球，为人类提供空气、食物和水；接着举例人类破坏地球的行为，如砍树、浪费水资源；然后分三点提出保护措施：不乱扔垃圾并分类回收、植树净化空气、选择绿色出行方式；最后发出呼吁，让地球更美丽，符合演讲稿的格式与要求。
【答案】
Protect the Earth
Dear boys and girls! I'm very glad to give you a speech about protecting the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It provides us with air, food and water. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people always cut down lots of trees. What's more, people often leave the tap on when washing and waste a large amount of fresh water.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, I think we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere, and we can sort the waste to recycle useful things. Second, planting trees is a good idea. Trees can make the air clean and the environment more beautiful. Third, we should try to walk, ride bikes or take buses to reduce air pollution.
Let's make the Earth more and more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、环境保护主题英语表达、连接词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，采用“地球重要性-破坏行为-保护措施-呼吁”的逻辑，使用For example、First/Second/Third等连接词使文章条理分明，短语搭配恰当，内容具体，符合演讲稿的文体要求，词数达标，未透露个人信息，是一篇优秀的英语演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
