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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D16
地球是人类、动物、植物共同的家园，但随着各类污染越来越严重，地球正面临许多环境问题。校刊School Life正在征集以“Let’s protect the Earth”为题的文章。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。不得出现真实人名、学校名。
提示:1.重要性:地球是一个美丽的行星,是动植物及人类的家园。
2.主要问题:说出地球面临的污染问题和危害。
3.措施:从日常生活中的小事做起,停止污染,保护地球。(至少列举两项措施)
Let’s protect the Earth
地球是人类、动物、植物共同的家园，但随着各类污染越来越严重，地球正面临许多环境问题。校刊School Life正在征集以“Let’s protect the Earth”为题的文章。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。不得出现真实人名、学校名。
提示:1.重要性:地球是一个美丽的行星,是动植物及人类的家园。
2.主要问题:说出地球面临的污染问题和危害。
3.措施:从日常生活中的小事做起,停止污染,保护地球。(至少列举两项措施)
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
The Earth is a beautiful planet. There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky.
The Earth is home to all humans, animals and plants. However, the Earth is facing a lot of problems. People are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. The sea is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Some people are cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. Let’s take action. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. We should put it into the dustbin. Second, we must plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and the world beautiful. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go to school or go to work.
All in all, if we don’t want anything bad to happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
进阶版范文
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky.
The Earth is home to all humans, animals and plants. However, the Earth is facing a lot of problems. People are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. The sea is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Some people are cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. Let’s take action. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. We should put it into the dustbin. Second, we must plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and the world beautiful. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go to school or go to work.
All in all, if we don’t want anything bad to happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
基础版范文
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
进阶版范文
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky.
The Earth is home to all humans, animals and plants. However, the Earth is facing a lot of problems. People are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. The sea is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Some people are cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. Let’s take action. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. We should put it into the dustbin. Second, we must plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and the world beautiful. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go to school or go to work.
All in all, if we don’t want anything bad to happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确写作主题为“Let’s protect the Earth”，需涵盖三个核心要点：地球是人类、动植物的家园（重要性）、地球面临的污染问题及危害、至少两项日常保护措施，词数不少于80，不得出现真实人名校名。接着采用总分总结构构思：开头段点明地球的重要性；中间段列举具体污染问题（如垃圾入河、砍树）及危害；结尾段提出日常保护措施（如不乱扔垃圾、种树等），最后总结呼吁。最后用简单通顺的英语表达，确保符合要求。
【解析】按照构思的结构写作：
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
【答案】Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
【知识点】英语话题写作（环保主题）、英语应用文写作
【点评】本题为校刊环保主题英语征文，要求学生紧扣提示要点搭建文章结构，结合日常小事提出保护措施，既考查英语语言运用能力，又渗透环保意识，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照构思的结构写作：
Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
【答案】Let’s protect the Earth
The Earth is a beautiful planet. It is home to all humans, animals and plants.
However, people are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. Some people are also cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world.
We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. First, we shouldn’t throw rubbish in the sea. Second, we should plant more trees. Third, we should walk, take the bus or underground more when we go out.
All in all, it’s important for us to protect the Earth.
【知识点】英语话题写作（环保主题）、英语应用文写作
【点评】本题为校刊环保主题英语征文，要求学生紧扣提示要点搭建文章结构，结合日常小事提出保护措施，既考查英语语言运用能力，又渗透环保意识，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
