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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D14
「2026 浙江宁波鄞州十三校期中联考」
假如你是李华,你所在班级的英语课上组织了一场“最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示,向英语张老师写一篇推荐信,推荐你的家庭。
提示:1.简要介绍家庭成员的基本信息,如外貌、性格、兴趣等；
2.讲述一家人经常一起做的事情；
3.描述你对家人的感情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名,注意人称；
2.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥；
3.语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整洁、书写工整；
4.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class this year.
Yours,
Li Hua
「2026 浙江宁波鄞州十三校期中联考」
假如你是李华,你所在班级的英语课上组织了一场“最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示,向英语张老师写一篇推荐信,推荐你的家庭。
提示:1.简要介绍家庭成员的基本信息,如外貌、性格、兴趣等；
2.讲述一家人经常一起做的事情；
3.描述你对家人的感情。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名,注意人称；
2.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥；
3.语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整洁、书写工整；
4.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes hiking. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to draw pictures.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes hiking. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to draw pictures.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is a tall and strong man with short black hair. He is outgoing and always goes hiking. My mother is a beautiful woman with long hair. She is kind and enjoys cooking delicious meals for us when she is free. As for me, I am a student who loves sports. I often play sports with my classmates after school.
There are a lot of fun activities that we share together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family and treasure the time I spend with my parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes hiking. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to draw pictures.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is a tall and strong man with short black hair. He is outgoing and always goes hiking. My mother is a beautiful woman with long hair. She is kind and enjoys cooking delicious meals for us when she is free. As for me, I am a student who loves sports. I often play sports with my classmates after school.
There are a lot of fun activities that we share together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family and treasure the time I spend with my parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本次写作任务是给张老师写推荐信，推荐自家参加“最美家庭”评选，开头已给出，需补写正文。解题思路：1. 紧扣三个提示要点：先介绍家庭成员的外貌、性格、兴趣；2. 描述一家人常一起做的活动；3. 表达对家人的感情；同时要满足要求：不出现真实人名，词数80左右，语句通顺，用第一人称。
【解析】写作步骤：① 介绍家庭成员：说明家庭有3人，分别描述父亲（tall and strong，outgoing，喜欢徒步）、母亲（beautiful with long hair，kind，喜欢做饭）、自己（学生，喜欢画画）；② 写共同活动：举例周末去公园散步、一起看电影；③ 表达对家庭的爱。注意用词简单，符合初中英语水平，确保所有要点都覆盖，语句连贯。
【答案】Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes hiking. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to draw pictures.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、家庭话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇合格的推荐范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：① 介绍家庭成员：说明家庭有3人，分别描述父亲（tall and strong，outgoing，喜欢徒步）、母亲（beautiful with long hair，kind，喜欢做饭）、自己（学生，喜欢画画）；② 写共同活动：举例周末去公园散步、一起看电影；③ 表达对家庭的爱。注意用词简单，符合初中英语水平，确保所有要点都覆盖，语句连贯。
【答案】Dear Ms. Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes hiking. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to draw pictures.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、家庭话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇合格的推荐范文。
【难度系数】0.6
